A/N: *looks at favourites on fiction* ugh. *wishes they'd update*
Is this how you guys feel when I'm not updating fast enough? Because I'm feeling your pain
Well enough complaining from me. Time for the reviews and I have to say, I've got some weird reviews this week... I was laughing for ages XD
And I reached 100 reviews so yay for you awesome reviewers!
yuuki24688 - You just bully me now -_- Pushy...
FrostingJayy - BlackStar is always awesome in this story ;P As for MakaxAsura, I agree. I was totally laughing at the idea, but that art is totally damn convincing, right?
Waterpokemon - Yes, but squeeze a water pokemon too hard and they will eventually explode. And I'll leave you with that image now XD
Dancing in Crimson - You're always such a great reviewer :D Thanks for checking out possibly ;) I'm still working on the next chapter for that...
haroulaP - Yes, it is an awesome story, isn't it? It seemed everyone wants to read what happens next, you're all slave drivers, the lot of ya ;) Ah, I'm Kidding (SYMMETRY!) Thanks for reviewing and hope you enjoy this chapter.
Mouers - Funny you should call him 'big bro blackstar' because the original title was 'big brotherly advice'. ;)
Soma forever - Yeah, I can't make him an idiot all the time... but he will be an idiot for the majority of the time since I get laughs out of it and he is my PUPPET! ...Did I sound evil then?
Spixie303 - I also 3 it.
HDAnimeFul - *blushes bright red* When people say I'm a good author, I totally go red. I was reading them the other day and my sister laughed at me and called me a tomato. XD Thanks a bunch!
AnimeLover2233 - Well, of course, I'm gonna 'keep writing'! Stopping now would mean annoying too many people and giving up drunk blackstar (Writing drunk blackstar is like a drug. Once you start, there's no looking back.)
pandoraterra - Why'd you sound so surprised about loving my story? I am a great author after all (she says smugly) Yeah, I have days were every adjective is 'bloody'. Seriously, when I'm irritated I'm like 'I can't get the bloody thing to bloody go into the bloody box' I make it sound like I'm an axe murderer, I tell ya. And we are together in this sickness thing. Sickness sucks.
ChiBlockersMoon - I'm funny!? Your review had me laughing for about an hour, no lie. XD Well, glad you think I'm funny, since that's what I was going for. I also like you (and no, not in that way either...Awkwardness...) You'll ask what later!? YOU CAN'T JUST CUT OFF MID SENTANCE AND KILL ME WITH CURIOUSITY! And sure, I'll write more... about how much I'm dying with curiousity here -_-
foreveraliangel - Fear the wrath of my spatula!
MasquedShade008 - How'd I know you were drinking something? It's cuz I'm all knowing. Like how I know your mental. It just kinda shows...
Akamaruwolf323 - Because the beer bottle is a teddy bear and Liz wuvs it so much ;) And yeah, I did like having some good big bro BlackStar there. I promise you'll get some awesome TsubakixBlackStar in the next chapter. ;D And when you said fancy BlackStar, I had an image of BlackStar with a top hat, cane, tux, spectacles, etc. It's the funniest image ever and now you've got it too, haven't you?
Xero tne Pyr0 - You're forgiven for ot reviewing on the last chapter, but it shan't happen again. Shan't, great word, right? And yes, kareoke BlackStar... ;) Assymmetry never pwns, because Kid pwns assymmetry. And how are you a pyro? Cuz I set fire to things in chemistry a lot, by accident...
I swear, all you guys reviewing is getting to me. The other day me and my friend were talking fanfiction and I was proudly bragging about my many, many reviews and she said it'd inflated my ego. I proved that point by saying "You're just jealous because the people love me!"
Safe to say I was howling with laughter for about an hour at myself.
11. Putting on the pressure
When I woke up, I woke up to someone hitting me repeatedly over the head. Well, that's not quite true, but it felt like that.
I looked around for Maka. I'd woken up sometime last night to find her in my arms and seeing no problem with that, I went back to sleep. Instead I found a note on the counter saying she and BlackStar were getting some coffee, the note being signed by BlackStar's ridiculous signature.
Great, no Maka and an insane hangover. Just perfect.
But then I noticed a small cardboard box next to the note with a yellow post-it note on it. Written on the post-it note in a neat scrawl - too neat to be BlackStar's scribble - was the words 'For Soul'. It was a box of aspirins. I had to smile. Maka really did think of everything and everyone.
I knocked some back and made some toast in the kitchen. Soon everyone started coming into various stage of conciousness. How Patty could be so peppy after drinking that much, I shall never know. As for Liz, her morning pick-me-up was a vodka and orange juice. Damn, does that girl ever stop.
It wasn't long before Maka and BlackStar burst in, armed with gifts of gold, frankensense and myrrh. Well, actually, they had coffee and grocceries, but that's pretty much the same thing.
I'll admit though, when I saw Maka come in giggling with BlackStar, I felt a little irritated that there she was, giggling and laughing with a guy that wasn't me. It was dumb, since I knew BlackStar was still drooling over Tsubaki and that Maka was his not-quite-sister. Boy, I needed that coffee alright.
Everybody settled down in the living room once they'd pratically jumped Maka for their coffee and relaxed, all groaning about their hangovers, with the exception of BlackStar, who was busy yelling about his godliness and Maka, who had decided to cook everyone breakfast. Her back was turned to me as she hummed cheerily and fiddled with the gas cooker. Since everyone was in the living room and couldn't see us here, a devious idea popped into my head.
I slid up behind Maka with a grin and suddenly, without warning wrapped my arms around her waist tightly, my chest pressed up against her back. I was rewarded with a little squeak of surprise as she dropped a spatula on the floor with a small clatter. I rested my chin on her shoulder. "What's for breakfast?"
I loved how great it all felt. How Maka's breathing had quickened slightly, how her face had went pink and how she didn't try to squirm away from me. She shivered slightly when my breath brushed her throat and swallowed. "The usual, eggs, bacon, toast... stuff like that." Her voice was all squeaky and embarrassed. Awesome.
"Great." I grinned and without warning, leaned my head forward enough to give her a quick kiss on the cheek.
She gasped and scrambled out of my grip. "What was that about?" Her voice was breathy, her eyes wide.
"Well..." I drawled, stepping forward so I was back in her personal space again. "Because I wanted to." Then I leaned forward and kissed her again, on the lips this time and just for a moment. Then I stepped back and gave her a bright smile. "And that's to show you I'm serious about not giving up on you."
And with that, I grabbed my coffee and disappeared off into the living room, leaving behind a very red-faced Maka.
'Scores? Soul: 2 Maka: 0' I thought to myself, grinning like an idiot.
A/N: Yeppers, it was short. But I hope the SoMa-ness sweetened the deal. Sorry you guys had to wait so long!
I'm being teached about how to write like a pirate by yuuki24688, but I have to say, it ain't easy. We keep going off topic. Right now: the subject of car language (honking and swearing!)
Loads of you have funny names on fanfiction and mines just me. S Puff. What's the funniest names on fanfiction you've seen?
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