Hi guys!
Part 2 is in the house! Yippee! Record time! *party poppers* I mean, come on, 2 chapters in 2 hours? That's gotta be a world record or something!
Yeah. Or something.
Now, I realise that Annabeth is a little OOC in the last chapter, and that it's not my best work, but all will be explained (hopefully) in this chapter. This might not be my best work either, but I did promise a chapter once we got to 4 reviews.
Thank you to:
Guest: Sorry if Annabeth was OOC, but it's all for the story! :)
Sweet Cats: Thanks for the review! :)
Frogitude: Thank you :)
darkmagician751: Sorry you think that, but I won't do it every chapter (phew!). I really just wanted to see how many people were really eager to read my story :)
Sooo… congratulations to you! We got 4 reviews in record time! I really appreciated the constructive criticism as well, it only helps me get better! :)
Here's the rest of this chapter!
What happened previously: As soon as I woke up, the sorrows of yesterday came crashing down on me. I jumped out of bed. I was going to win back Annabeth.
Oh no. That sounded like she was a prize, a maiden to be won just like in those old Greek stories. She's not. I'm going to get her… to talk?... to me again… and not him. Not Jeremy.
Let's get started.
_Time skip to after breakfast_
I cornered Annabeth after breakfast.
"Why do you not talk to me anymore?" I asked. "Did I do something wrong? Am I not as good as Jeremy? Whatever I did, I'm sorry!"
She looked shocked. Flustered, she opened her mouth to talk, but words came poured at of my mouth now.
"ANNABETH, DO YOU KNOW HOW I'VE FELT? NO. DO YOU KNOW HOW IT FEELS TO BE ALL ALONE? NO. DO YOU KNOW HOW IT FEELS TO LOSE YOUR TWO BEST FRIENDS, WITH GROVER ON THE 'CALL OF THE WILD' CAMPAIGN AND YOU… YOU… SOCIALISING WITH HIM?
Annabeth looked taken aback and scared. She muttered "I'm sorry Perce, it's just that I needed to talk with someone who understood what I say… oh forget it, there's no excuse. I'm sorry Percy. Can you forgive me?"
She apologised. She hardly ever apologises. I realise how terrifyingly powerful I must have seemed, after blowing up Mount St Helens… now that I think about it, camp is flooded and the earth just stopped shaking.
And everyone is staring at me.
"I'm sorry" I mutter, shoving all the water back into the ocean.
Before I can say anything else, Annabeth crushed me in a hug.
"I'm really, really sorry for neglecting you - and letting our friendship dilapidate." she whispered.
I nodded back in response, but I still had one question before this matter was resolved.
"Wise Girl?" I ask. "What does dilapidate mean?"
Sooo… did you like it? Hate it? Love it? I'd love to know and reviews really make my day!
I've still not really got an update schedule, but you can probably expect an update at least once a fortnight.
My Make Your Own Demigod is still open! See a couple of chapters ago for instructions!
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