Author's note
A new re-installement. :-))
OK, now, this is one of my stories most read... and sometimes I wonder why (I confess).
I fixed some things but I didn't change the... ehm... telegraphic style, LOL.
Despite the style, I admit that the thing I like the most of this story is my attempt to write it in first person, changing POV (not only Enos and Daisy, but also Bo and Luke, and it's the first and only time I used Bo's and Luke's POV... so I hope I didn't disappoint Bo's and Luke's fans): every chapter is written in first person from a different POV, except last chapter where Enos' and Daisy's POVs alternate.
It's difficult for me to write in first person, I've written something else (one-shots) in first person, but... it's not for me.
I hope you (re)-enjoyed this story, even if totally elemental and telegraphic, but in this story, reading it NOW, I can see some things I'm exploring in my last story: sense of family and friendship, involving uncle Jesse, Bo and Luke (characters I'm not much used to write of... and in effect I used them not much often... since "Carry that weight").
Another brief note: the final is somehow suspended. This story could be the prequel of another story, but I don't think I'm going to write a story 'bout Enos' recover, I have to complete "Carry that weight", fix other old stories... and find a NEW plot to develop ;-)... or ... maybe ... (if you want a sequel, just ask).
07/25/2013 Looking at my stats, even now, I'm surprised to see that "Fallen" is one of the stories most read, every month! And it's interesting, 'cause I think of "Shattered", the story I'm actually writing, as a sort of evolution of "Fallen" (not about the plot, but about my idea of "shattering" Enos and then having Dukes helping him). "Fallen" has a suspended final, whereas in "Shattered" I'm focusing on Enos' recover (something I missed in "Fallen"): the seed of "Shattered" is in "Fallen". I realized it lately... and I'm surprised.