Hello again, everyone!
I have a question for you all. So, I hope to get this story done before Christmas, and I'm thinking of possibly making a sequel. Well. I will make a sequel once I get a good idea for a plot. But before that, if I do manage to get it done before Christmas, I was thinking of making like a small Christmas One-Shot, and I just wanted to know if you all wanted that. If you do, I'll be sure to get started ASAP on writing it (And if you wanted to you could give a suggestion, but I have most of it planned out so you can only do that if YOU wanna. If I get any suggestions and use them I'll say what the suggestion is and who suggested it). If you don't... Well... I'll write it anyhow cause I like writing things :P. But I just wanted to let you guys know about that
Oh and I edited the picture of the woman back in Chap 1 and the colour of Rosé's eyes (Their now green because reasons)
Also, is it just me who thinks that Miele is awesome and should be featured in more episodes? It's not cause she's Flora's sister (Although that is cool) it's just cause I think she's really cool and awesome. Yeah. Ignore me
Umm. I'm still trying to get used to the fact that every time I write a chapter the next day when I check I have about 100 more views than before I posted said chapter. Is it bad this shocks me? I dunno... But a big "THANK YOU!" to all you readers, reviewers and my two followers! Anyhow...
Again, a big thank-you to Dragonlover for giving me a suggestion for the last chapter- I wanted to write something worth while in the last chapter without getting straight into the next encounter with the HS and you went ahead and gave me something to write! So thanks again :D! And I got 9 reviews, all from you, Dragonlover xD
Dragonlover's first review: One of your guesses is right, and you'll find out soon enough which one ;). And your welcome, really I should be thanking you more than the other way around, otherwise I'd still be sat here wondering 'What else am I gonna put in this chapter to make it worth while and longer?' cause otherwise it'd be really short xD. Hmm. It might be a bit hard getting that idea in considering how I've got a set time, but the more I re-read your review the more I wanna do it, so I'll try. I hope you don't mind though, but I might change it a bit so it sorta fits a little more
Dragonlover's 2nd Review: 1st, I'm glad you love the story ^^. Secondly... Well technically her name is Rosé, and if my french is correct, the accute accent (Over the e) makes it sound more 'Rose-A' than 'Rose-E'. But Rosie could probably be a nickname, especially considering what I have planned
Dragonlover's 3rd Review: Firstly, yes I'm gonna respond to all your reviews. This is gonna be a huge A/N xD. Umm. I think that would make things a little hard it being when Stella's shopping, cause the HS doesn't usually come out at day, so I hope you don't mind about that. Oh, so I'm not the only one who thinks that *Phew!* Oh really? Haha! What a cool coincidence! :D! No thanks, it's your idea, and you've helped me a lot already, but I would like to hear what it is, if you don't mind that is :). You're welcome :)
Dragonlover's 4th Review: You're welcome, you're welcome, you're welcome, you're welcome very much! ^^
Dragonlover's 5th Review: Don't worry, your not. But I'm not sure I understand what you mean by 'it does', sorry. I feel like I'm the one who's annoying you .-. . But thanks, I had very sweet dreams, and I hope you did too! :D! And you're welcome again :)
Dragonlover's 6th Review: It's a good thing I didn't finish this chapter yesterday, cause for some reason this review and another 3 didn't appear until last night O.o. So I'll add Tecna to the mix of things :D. But again, I hope you don't mind but I may change a couple things with the idea (Sorry). Shh, I was planning that, don't tell anyone ;)
Dragonlover's 7th Review: Oh, to do a Fanfiction story you need to get an account first. With an account, you can follow and fave stories, write stories, PM and a bunch of other stuff I've no clue about xD. Oh, but I think with an account you can only do 1 review per chapter (Though you can just sign out and do a guest review). I can't wait to read your story, once you write it though :)
Dragonlover's 8th Review: Yep, Season 6 outfits. Cause... Why not? And cause I think Season 6 outfits are cool. Haha, awesome! Flora's your fave character too :D! Thanks for the tip, I'll be sure to read, watch and play more mystery things (And they're fun too!)
Dragonlover's 9th Review: And so we reach the end of the reviews xD. 1, thanks! I worked hard on the picture :D (And I may also get one of Theo soon and have the picture of both Theo AND Rosé, though I dunno). 2, when you're signed in on an account, go to either the top right corner or bottom of the page (On a story, that is) and click on the 'Follow/Fave' button and then follow or fave whatever you want (Story/Author). Hope you understand what I'm saying, I'm not the best at describing things
Again, a big "THANK YOU!" to all my readers, followers, reviewers and Dragonlover for being a really loyal reader and giving me lots of awesome suggestions! :D
Yeah umm. I don't really have anything else to say here, and I think the A/N is big enough already sooo... DISCLAIMER TIMEEE!
The Winx Club, and everything inside of that Cartoon Show, belongs to Iginio Straffi (I say this every time, but sorry if I spelt his name wrong). While everything else, unless I tell you all otherwise, belongs to Me! But Credit goes to Dragonlover for an awesome idea which appears later on in this chapter! The idea belongs to Him/Her! (Sorry, I don't actually know and I daren't guess in case I guess wrong .-.)
On with the Story!
Recap; After the HS got away, the Winx return to the Castle and go to sleep. Flora, unable to sleep, goes on a walk in the park with Aisha. During the walk, the two see a robbery of a woman with her son, but before they could take action, the HS does. Even stranger, the HS' eyes which were shadowed by it's hood glowed a golden colour, which was visible even though they were shadowed. The HS helps the woman and Aisha has doubts as to whether the HS was just putting on a show or not and was trying to trick them. The next day, the Winx bump into Theo and James, and Stella accidentally upsets Rosé who was on the phone. After a shopping trip, the Winx return to the Castle and go to the Royal Library to search for anything which would help in their quest to capture the HS. However, during their search, they see a figure sat against a bookshelf, reading a book. Who could this figure be?
"Yes?"
Bloom growled "What are you doing here, HS!?". The HS, who was sat there with a book in it's hands, calmly stood up, put a bookmark in it's book, and put the book back into the case, before looking straight at the redhead
"I could ask you the same thing. Last I checked only the Royal Family was allowed in here" it retorted. Musa looked annoyed at this "Well if that's the case, why are YOU in here?" she demanded
The HS thought for a second, before giving a small smile "I'm a... Special case, you could say. I'm allowed in"
"Really? There's a 99.9% Chance the King would NEVER allow you- The HS- into here, and there's a 78.2% chance that he'd rather let everyone in the planet in at the same time than you!" Tecna shot back. They could all tell that the HS rolled it's eyes at that, despite them being covered by both the hood, and the shadow of the hood
"Yeah yeah, well why exactly I'm allowed in isn't important" it said calmly "You bet it isn't! Magic Winx! Believix!" Bloom shouted, and they all transformed once again to Believix
"Well, obviously you guys are really busy and all, so I'm just gonna- WHOA!" the HS suddenly jumped in the air, due to an attack that was fired. Once it landed, it looked behind itself and saw that the bookshelf behind it now had a lot of it's books on the floor. It turned back to the Winx, and glared
"Haven't you any idea how rare some of those books are!?" it growled "It's right you know" Tecna agreed "Some of those books might even be one of a kind"
The HS, breathed in deeply and then out, before smiling again "So you wanna have another go at fighting me? Then come get me!" as soon as it finished saying that, it jumped up a bookcase, ran from the tops of bookcase to bookcase, opened a window at the top, and then jumped through
"After it guys!" Bloom shouted, and they all followed it, going out the same window
The six got outside, and looked around "Where'd it go?" Musa wondered "Over there!" shouted Flora, pointing to the HS, who was running off
"C'mon guys! Winx, Speedix!" Bloom told them, and they got they're speedix wings and flew off, trying to catch up with the HS, who was, for some reason, extremely fast
The HS quickly glanced behind itself, and when it saw how fast the Winx were, it tried to run faster "Snap! I knew this was a bad idea" it ran towards, and into the forest, to try to loose them in all the greenery. But unfortunately for it, the trees would tell Flora where it was, and no matter how many times it lost them, they always found it again just as quickly
"I've got it!" shouted Tecna "Flora, Bloom, you two need to both fire an attack at the HS. But Flora, fire your attack so it would hit to the side of the HS"
Flora was confused "But- Why?" "Just do it, you'll see" Tecna told her, and the two nodded
"Fire Arrow!"
"Autumn Wind!"
"Whoa!" The HS exclaimed, before jumping to the side. But it failed to notice Flora's attack, which- Now that it had dodged to the side- was coming straight to it. It noticed a second to late, and was hit and blasted into a tree
"I get it! We hit where the HS would dodge into!" Musa exclaimed "Great idea Tecna!"
The HS stood up, and rubbed it's head a bit, before running off again. As it was running, it ran a hand through it's hair
"They got a hit on me! They actually got a hit on me! Oh snap, I'm doomed" it groaned itself, before trying to run faster
However, the HS didn't take much notice of the direction it was going, and as it reached a clearing, it quickly skidded to a halt, seeing where it was now. A high-up cliff edge, with a forest below
"Uh-oh..." it muttered, but just as it turned around to run off again, the Winx all landed in front of it, blocking any escape route. It tried to back away some more, but it's foot almost fell off due to some unstable rocks
"Give up HS! We've got you cornered!" Aisha demanded, getting an attack ready. The HS had an extremely worried look on it's face, and it glanced back at the cliff edge, trying to think of something. It then turned back to the Winx
"Alright then. I give up" it said, approaching them. But just as Aisha was about to put some Morphix on it's hands to keep them 'chained' together, it turned around, ran towards the cliff edge, and jumped
"What on Earth!?*" Bloom exclaimed, as the HS disappeared into the forest below
"There's an 89.5% chance that it planned that, and that it has some way to stop it from going splat on the ground" Tecna announced
"Let's go then, the trees will tell me where it is" Flora told them, and they all flew towards the ground of the cliff-edge
Once the Winx reached the ground, Flora asked the trees where the HS was "That way" pointed Flora
Soon, the Winx found a few trees which had had all the snow knocked off them, and a bit imprint in the snow, which looks like a person had made it
"It was here, a few minutes ago" Flora said, putting a hand on one of the trees. Tecna knelt down and picked up something
"It sure was- And look at this!" she showed the others a ripped piece of golden-yellow cloth, which presumably came from the HS' clothes
"Great going Tecna!" Aisha congratulated "I'm going to analyze it with my computer. It should have been on the HS long enough to have it's DNA on it, and so my computer will look through the Magic Database to see who it is!" Tecna explained, taking out her portable computer and scanning the cloth
"What? That can't be right!" the pink haired girl exclaimed "What is it Tecna?" Musa
"It came up as nothing- It's like as if the HS... Doesn't even exist!" the fairy of Technology exclaimed
Meanwhile, somewhere hidden, a figure- A man- approached another figure- a Woman, who was his wife
"I have some news, my dear" the man told the woman
"Excellent. I assume the pest has now got our little present?" the woman questioned
"Yes, my dear. And because of that, the pest will no longer be an issue. All we need to do now, is wait, for the anniversary" the man answered
The woman grinned
"Perfect"
"What do you mean it came up as nothing? Scan it again! Keep scanning it! Maybe you did something wrong!" Stella shouted. Tecna tried again
"Still nothing!" she complained
"Maybe..." Flora began "It comes up as nothing because someone doesn't want whoever the HS is to exist- So whoever the HS is- To the magic database at least- doesn't exist""But who would wanna do that?" Aisha wondered
"I don't know. But that does seem like the only logical reason for this, unless the HS somehow managed to remove itself from the Magic database- But I don't think even I can do that!"
"I'd love to figure this out and all" Musa cut in "But the HS is getting away!"
"She's right- Flora, can you ask the trees?" Bloom asked. Flora nodded, and put a hand on one of the tree's trunks and closing her eyes. She opened them again "I've got it! Follow me!"
"Let go of them you-you-!" a voice shouted, gaining the Winx's attention
"What was that?" asked Bloom "It sounded like... Theo?" Musa wondered
"Let's go see what's happening" said Flora
"Help! THEO! HELP ME!" shouted another voice, causing the Winx to fly towards it quicker
Three men, dressed in black with their mouths and heads covered, were there. One was fighting Theo, who was wielding two long and thick sticks and had a bruise coming on his forehead, and the other was trying to get James, who kept wriggling out of his grip
"Stop wriggling you little brat!" the man holding James shouted. Theo growled "Let go of my brother!" he charged towards the man, getting his sticks ready to attack. But as he was charging towards the man, the third man- Who Theo had forgotten about- hit Theo on the back of his head with a metal rod, causing him to fall to the ground unconscious, due to the force used by the man
"NO! THEO!" James shouted, trying to wriggle out of the first man's grip "Remind me why we're doing this again? This brat is annoying me!" he complained
"Because we'll get their family to pay us to give them back. And if the rumors are true, then their Uncle is rich and- OOF! What was that!?" the second man wondered. The Winx arrived in time to witness this
"'That' was Me!" an angry voice growled. The men and winx looked and saw, stood there, the Hooded Sparrow. Despite it's eyes being shadowed by it's hood, you could clearly see they were glowing a bright golden colour
"Ha, what you gonna do you little brat? Throw a stick at us? HA!" the second man mocked. The HS, however, just glared even more, before running towards them and thumping the man who mocked it, in the face, causing him to stumble backwards
"Got a little spirit, haven't you brat? Well you're gonna pay for that!" shouted the third man, as he ran towards it with the metal rod in hand. But when he swung it, the HS ducked and grabbed the rod, before yanking it out of his hands and whacking him with it in the back, causing him to stumble face-first into a tree. The HS then dropped the rod on the ground, seeing no use for it
"Fire Arrow!" shouted Bloom, firing an attack at the first man, who got hit in the back and accidentally let go of James. Once he was let go, James ran towards the HS and hugged it, crying. The Winx and the first and third men started to fight, until they heard Flora scream. The second man had knocked her out with the rod which he had picked up, and was now running off with her
"Flora! Musa, Aisha, Tecna, you get Flora! We'll take care of the two men!"
"Shh... It's okay, I've got you now" it whispered to him "L-Lilly! They took Lilly!" he cried. This got the HS' attention, and it looked him in the eye, softly lifting up his chin so he could face it
"Which way did they go?" it asked, and he pointed in the direction the man holding Flora went "You stay here with those winged girls, I'll get Lilly!" the HS whispered to him, and he nodded, as the HS got up and ran towards where the man had ran off to. Bloom saw James, and went over to get him to saftey
"Follow me, James, I'll get you to saftey" Bloom told the boy, but he shook his head "Not until I know Lilly's safe!" he protested. Bloom smiled a bit at his protectiveness of his twin sister
"How about I take you over to Theo and you and me try to get him to wake up?" she asked. Slowly, James nodded, and Bloom helped him over to Theo
Meanwhile, the man carrying Flora had now made it to a few cars, where four other men were waiting. They tied her up and put her in the back of a truck which was also there
"C'mon, let's get outta here! Some fairies were on my tail and-" the man was swiftly cut off, as he was kicked in the head and fell to the ground. The other four men looked up, and saw the HS stood there, eyes glowing a bright golden colour
"You have attempted kidnapping on the wrong planet" growled the HS. One of the men, presumably the leader, thought that perhaps it would be better to strike a deal and not get as much money than fight the HS, so said
"Tell ya what- You help us get these two girls hidden, and you'll get 10% of the probably billions we're gonna get. How's that sound to ya?"
"You don't seem to understand, do you?" the HS told the man, confusing him. In a flash, the man was on the floor, clutching his chin
"I would rather myself get kidnapped and tortured than help kidnap anyone, especially a poor innocent little child!" it growled, it's eyes glowing brighter
"Morphix Wave!"
"Stereo Crash!"
"Techno Shock!" three of the men were hit by both these attacks, but the HS payed no mind to this, and just concentrated on the other two men. It rolled out of the way of one of the second man's attacks, and swipped his legs with it's, causing him to fall to the ground. It then got up and glared at the leader, who was now stood up
"Tell me where you hid the child and the girl, and I won't hurt you anymore" it growled. The man laughed "So you got a lucky hit- The only one wanting mercy here will be you!" he took out a metal rod from his belt and swung it at the HS, who ducked, grabbed the man's arm and twisted it behind his back, before kicking him away
"Tell me where you hid the child! NOW!" the HS shouted
Meanwhile, with Musa, Tecna and Aisha, they were fighting the other two men, who kept trying to hit them with their own metal rods
"I've had enough of this!" Aisha shouted, and her, Tecna and Musa held hands "Believix Convergence!" they shouted, hitting the two men with the convergence and knocking them out
"Now let's find Flora" the brunette said "But what about the other men?" Musa argued
"No, it's trying to trick us. We need to get Flora!" Aisha argued back
"But those men could get away and try again!" stated Tecna
"Then you get those men, me and Tecna will get Flora" offered Aisha, and Musa nodded, flying off to help the HS
"TELL ME WHERE THE CHILD IS! TELL ME NOW!" the HS shouted, thumping the man in his stomach
"Never you brat!" the man shouted back, before grabbing a metal rod and hitting the HS in the arm with it with so much force the HS landed on it's side, on the ground, looking to be unconscious
"What? Can the little brat not take a little boo boo? Hahaha!" laughed the man. But little did he know, the HS wasn't unconscious, and was clenching it's hands tightly
Suddenly, faster than you could say 'Cheese Crackers'*', the HS was up on it's feet and the Man on the ground, clutching his jaw
"You tell me where the little child is or I'll-" the HS began, eyes glowing even brighter, before being cut off
"Stereo Crash!" shouted a voice- Musa- and the HS turned around swiftly, seeing Musa flying in the air and an unconscious man behind it
It's eyes glowed dimmer, and it crossed it's arms
"Trying to hit me, were you?" it asked in a jokey tone "Yes of course, I just have terrible aim" Musa answered, sarcastically. The HS grinned a little, and turned back around to continue fighting the man, but found that he was also unconscious. Musa knew why- It was because her Stereo Crash had split into two, one hitting the one man, the other hitting the other man. Shrugging a little, the HS turned to Musa
"Thanks" it thanked, before running off towards the cars and truck
"Huh? Hey! Wait for me!"
"I've checked all the cars, and no sign of Flora. Which means... The Truck!?" Aisha gasped in surprise, as she saw the Truck drive off
"Come back here!" Aisha shouted, flying off after it
"We need to slow it down somehow. Aisha! Use your Morphix to glue it to the ground!" Tecna instructed, and the fairy of Waves did just that. As that happened, a figure jumped from a rooftop to the truck
"Huh? What's wrong with this stupid truck!?" the man complained. He poked his head out the window and looked up. Right there, staring straight down at him, was the HS, eyes glowing golden
"Hello" it said, before thumping him in the face so hard he fell out of the truck, and due to previous injuries, fell unconscious
While this was happening, Tecna and Aisha had blasted open the door to the truck, which appeared to be filled with many boxes "You search the left, I'll search the right" Tecna instructed, and Aisha nodded, as the two started to do just that. As they were searching, a muffled voice suddenly was heard through the truck, and the two raced towards it- But were beaten, by none other than the HS, who had quickly ran towards it, pushed a few boxes out of the way and gasped. It quickly untied and took the cloth off the mouth of the girl, who wasn't Flora, but in fact Lilly
Lilly ran and jumped into the HS' arms, hugging it tightly with her right arm and crying into it. Although a little surprised at first, the HS returned the hug softly
"You're safe now... Don't be scared" it whispered to her. Aisha and Tecna were confused
"Lilly? Why are you hugging the HS? I thought everyone was afraid of it" wondered the fairy of Technology. Seeing them, and not recognizing them, Lilly hid behind the HS, who stood up and faced the two fairies
"No offense meant" it began, rather bluntly, crossing it's arms, it's eyes now not glowing anymore "But the only one scaring this poor girl right now, is you two. Even if I'm the HS, I think a bunch of girls, who this little child has probably never met before in her life, with huge wings on their back and who blasted the door open are more scary than a normal person with a hooded cloak covering their face"
"But-" Aisha tried to protest, but the HS had already turned back to Lilly
"Do you know where your cousin- Rosé's her name, I believe- is? She's not hurt or been taken captive either, has she?" the HS softly asked the sobbing girl, who shook her head "I-I think s-she's with... With Mum a-and Dad" she answered, and the HS nodded, before looking over to some boxes and eyeing them curiously. It patted Lilly's head softly and whispered "Stay there", before walking over to the boxes
Aisha and Tecna took this chance to try and approach Lilly, who still didn't recognize them, but she just backed away a little
"Hey you two" Tecna and Aisha looked over to the HS, who had it's back turned to them. Neither had noticed Musa fly in at that moment
"Firstly, I'm kinda surprised none of you have tried to kill me, capture me, or whatever it is you wanna do with me yet. Secondly, isn't this your friend here?" it told them. At this, the three ran over to where the HS was and actually pushed past it so quickly it fell onto the ground
Indeed, tied up there was Flora. The three quickly untied the ropes around her ankles and wrists and took off the cloth around her mouth. Unfortunately, she was still unconscious
Aisha turned around, confused "Hey, how did you- Huh?". The HS, while they were busy freeing their friend of her bonds, had left, and she just managed to see it jump off the truck and run off, after muttering 'See ya'. The fairy of Waves was about to fly after it and chase it, but a groan coming from Flora stopped her
"Flora!" her, Tecna and Musa shouted as Flora opened her eyes, groaned, sat up and rubbed her head "Ow my head... What happened...?" she asked
"We'll explain on the way" Musa told her, and she nodded a little. Tecna then approached Lilly, who was trying to support her left arm while timidly watching the four, a few tears still on her face. When she saw Tecna coming towards her, she backed away a little
"Lilly, I'm not gonna hurt you. You know me- I'm Tecna- you invited me and my friends to dinner at your house, where I met your family. Remember?" she asked, and Lilly looked at her curiously
"Y-You're... You're Miss Tecna...?" she asked, cautiously. When Tecna nodded, she ran up to her and gave her a hug with her right arm, feeling more safe than before, now she there was someone she knew there
Noticing how Lilly wasn't using her left arm and was trying to support it, Tecna looked at Aisha and asked "Aisha, could you make a sling for Lilly out of your Morphix? I think her arm might be broken" The fairy of Waves nodded, walked over to the two, and did just that. Lilly looked up at Aisha, wiped her tears away with her right sleeve, and smiled a little
"T-Thanks..." she thanked, and Aisha just smiled. "We should probably get going" Musa told the three, walking up to them with Flora, who she had helped up
"Here, I'll carry you Lilly. We're gonna take you back to your brothers" Aisha told the child, who nodded a little bit, and let Aisha pick her up
The four- Five counting Lilly- took off, and after turning the unconscious men to the guards, flew towards where Bloom, Stella, James and an unconscious Theo were. Aisha, though, was a bit distracted. Flora had a good guess why. She assumed it was something to do with the HS, and it actually was. Aisha was confused as to why the HS had helped the Jaqualina Children, and even helped find Flora. She wasn't sure whether to believe that it was actually good and wanted to help them, or think that it was trying to trick them and get close enough to hurt- Or maybe even kill- one of them, like what the Wizards of the Black Circle did. She shook her head. If the HS was good, then why would the King be after it and have every guard told to capture it on sight, and everyone be scared of it? The King would have a good reason, surely? However, the Princess of Andros had no answer to the questions now forming in her head
When they got to the others, they saw that Stella had already knocked out and turned in the other man, and was now knelt down like Bloom and James by Theo, who still hadn't woken up. Theo's Father, Trystan, was also knelt down, trying to shake his son awake, worried for him. It had started to lightly snow in the meantime
"He still hasn't woken up?" asked Aisha, as she put Lilly down. Bloom shook her head, as James turned to them
"Lilly!" he shouted "James!" his sister shouted back, and the two ran up to each other and hugged tightly- Lilly only with her good arm, however
"Lilly! You're arm- What happened?" Trystan questioned, getting up and looking at her arm. Lilly hugged her Father "T-They hurt it when I t-tired to get away. It h-hurts..." she said, her voice a little muffled because she was burying her face into her Father's shirt. Trystan looked at the others
"I phoned a Doctor and Lilac. The Doctor should be here soon, and Lilac told me Rosé is running as fast as possible to get here. She's having a hard time keeping up" he told them, before looking at his daughter "The Doctor'll help your arm sweetie" he told her, giving her a kiss on the forehead and smiling at her
"Thank you, for finding her. We would have been too late if it wasn't for you, and she would've been taken away to who knows where. How can I repay you?" Trystan asked the Winx
"You don't need to repay us with anything- You probably would've done the same for someone else" Flora told him. He was about to respond and say that there must be something, but was cut off by a loud voice
"THEO!" shouted a voice, and everyone turned to it. Rosé, looking out of puff and like she had run a marathon, quickly ran up to Theo's unconscious body and knelt down next to it, shaking him
"Theo! W-What happened to him?" she asked, while trying to get her breath back
"He was knocked out with a metal rod while trying to get James back" Bloom explained, as Lilac came running- Also out of puff
"Theo!" she gasped, seeing her eldest son. Never had she ever seen him so... Still. Trystan came over with Lilly and James and knelt down next to Theo as well. He hugged James while Lilac hugged Lilly, as the Doctor arrived
Yeah, I ended it there. It's cause I'm tired, I hurt, I wanna get a chapter out and I feel this is a good place to end it. Plus, this chapter is huge in any case. I'll begin writing the next chapter soon though, and hopefully I'll be able to post it in a few days time.
If the bit after Musa going to help the HS is rubbish, it's because I was still writing when my internet went weird and made me loose it all after that point. Which really annoyed me cause I had gotten so far. And then it bugged again and I lost everything after the HS says 'Hello' and thumps the man. That's kinda why it took longer to finish this chapter. GRR! .. I'm gonna have to save this more often... Thanks Internet :/. But after many annoyances and loss of content and words, I finally managed to finish it! YAY! Seriously though, I had to re-write the bit where they find Lilly about 3 or 4 times! .
SORRY xD But on the bright side, I think this has been the largest chapter yet! :D
Also, hope you don't mind Dragonlover, but although I did use your idea, I changed it a little. I hope you don't mind the changes...
PLEASE DON'T HATE ME FOR MAKING CHANGES! But also, you get a point cause you guessed the HS! And it WAS the HS! (I feel as if it was kinda obvious though... Hehe)
Anyway, onto the *'s!
*- A phrase I tend to use, and since Bloom has lived on Earth for most her life, I thought she would probably've picked the phrase up and started using it
*'- Umm. So me and one of my brothers were doing Biology and Mum asked where our homework was (Cause we're homeschooled). And so what he did was he said that "I burst into his room holding a spear and a shield, and I threw away the spear and shield and threw a pig at him, causing him to fall into a bucket of mud. I think hoola hooped over to his homework and began to nom on it while shouting 'Cheese Crackers!'" That's where the idea of Cheese Crackers comes from. And no, that wasn't true, it was just an excuse my brother made xD
You know, I kinda wonder how, with all the shouting going on, everyone stays in their homes and sleeps peacefully. Logic xD
Anyway, I really need to get to bed, so I'll just go ahead with this... Remember to review- Be it Insult, Criticism, Tips or Suggestions- to tell me what you think! And I'll see you all in the next chapter!
BYEEE!