A/N: Hi! This is the first chapter I wrote in Warriors. I know, it's horrible, so can you please comment? If someone comments I'll write them another chapter. So comment=new chapter. SO got it? COMMENT!
Ch.1
Brooke batted her sister's ears.
"No fair Brooke!" Mandy whined.
"Why not? I'm smaller than you!" Brooke replied before letting her sister go and grooming down a stray tuff of hair on her shoulder.
"Mommy, when will our eyes open?" Mandy asked a pretty ginger she-cat.
"Soon, my darlings, you are a moon old and they will open any day now," Havana replied before wrapping her body around her kits.
All of the sudden Mandy screamed, "I can see! My eyes just opened!"
"What color?" Brooke asked.
Havana replied, "Amber… a wonderful shade of amber!"
"Come on Brooke! Open your eyes!" Mandy begged her sister.
Brooke tried to open her eyes. Finally she managed to open them, but she couldn't see anything.
"Mom, is it dark outside?" Brooke asked.
Havana took a step back from her kit.
"Brooke, don't be silly! It isn't dark outside!" Mandy pranced around playfully.
"She… she's blind," Havana whispered. "She'll never be able to hunt or defend herself."
"What?" Brooke asked as she gave her chest a quick nervous lick.
"It's alright Brooke, I know a place where other cats can take care of you," Havana said as she scooped Brooke up and told Mandy to stay put.
Brooke's hindquarters scrapped against the ground. Cold wind blew her coat and sent cold chills up her spine.
"Momma, when will we get there?" Brooke whined.
"Soon, do you smell that new scent? That's Shadowclan's scent marker. That's where you'll be staying."
"Yeah, I do smell it. It stinks!"
Savanna and Brooke bumped into a Shadowclan border patrol.
"Rogues, why are you here?" Saltnose snarled.
"My daughter is blind. I was wondering if you could take her," Savanna said.
"Why would we want a blind rouge kit?" Echoclaw asked.
"Because you're a clan and you take care of all cats," Savanna snarled as she put Brooke down on the ground before running off.
"What do we do with the kit?" Saltnose asked.
Nightshadow replied, "Kill it; it's no use to our clan!"
"We don't kill Nightshadow, we'll take it to Lightstar and see what he want to do with it," Echoclaw said as he picked up the limp bundle of fur.
Brooke was placed next to a small vine den. A nice smelling she-cat named Mossfur came out of the den and took Brooke inside.
"Mommy, who's this?" a brown tabby tom asked.
"Dashkit, this is Brooke. She's blind and her rogue mom didn't want her anymore," Mossfur said.
"So she's going to be a member of Shadowclan?" Dashkit snarled.
"That's up to Lightstar," Mossfur replied.
"Hi Brooke, I'm Ashkit!" the other little kit chirped in as she brushed her little tail on Brooke's flank.
"H…h…I," Brooke stuttered back.
"She can't even speak correctly!" Dashkit laughed.
Ashkit batted Dashkit over the ears.
"Your mean," Ashkit spit at Dashkit.
All the sudden a voice echoed from outside.
"Let all cats come to highmound for a clan meeting!"
Mossfur picked up Brooke by the scruff and the two kits followed them.
Mossfur put Brooke down by a large mound of dirt. On top of the mound a light ginger tom sat as he watched as the cats gathered around him.
Mossfur whispered to Brooke, "That's Lightstar; he's the leader of Shadowclan."
Lightstar spoke once everyone gathered around him, "Cat of Shadowclan! Most of you know that Echoclaw's border patrol found a blind rogue kit on the border along with her mother. The mother didn't want her kit anymore so she left it in our care."
Meows of grumbled protest arose from the clearing.
"I have decided… to allow the kit to stay in Shadowclan. Brooke, come forward," Lightstar continued.
Brooke stepped toward Lightstar.
"Brooke, from now on until you receive your apprentice name you will be known as Brookkit. Mossfur will watch over you."
Only Mossfur, Ashkit, and an apprentice named Moonpaw cheered for her. The rest of the clan grumbled among themselves and let out startled hisses. Brookkit shrank back into her pelt. Clearly, the clan had not accepted her like Lightstar did.