I've been rereading my fanfics again, not to mention finally catching up on Naruto XD, and I've decided that my writing in this fanfic is crap and needs to be completely rewritten. Hopefully by the end of the week I will have the new and improved 1st chapter up for reading with better details and stronger visuals. Ive actually gotten pretty far now in Naruto and I think I can do much better at this. So, I apologize for my terrible writing and my inconsistency with my updates. College is a very busy thing to deal with. I cant tell you how much I appreciate that you have all stuck with me this long despite my terrible writing and lack of updating, I promise to try to do much better from now on.