A/N: It's me valfer321 and I was reading the reviews of this story and I was Very pleased with them. And Pinkie Pie said something very astonishing her name is Valeria and so is Mine That is like so cool! But... Since I did not update on Saturday... I'm making it to you guy's and updating today again.I would do anything for you people! And a bonus this story is going to be longer so Yay! let's begin :)


It was already 6'o clock and Holt should be already heading to Heath's house to meet his friends.
As He changed his clothes Holt began to be nervous.

"Why should the Holtster be nervous, it's just something I'm going to tell them" he thought

But deep down He was scared that when he told his Friends they would laugh at him.
They'll think he's a joke to be doing something so sneaky and stupid.

"No." He said "I'm doing this for her"

He sighed and started walking toward's the door.
As he was walking he saw it was raining.

"Shoot" he murmmerd

He knew once he stepped out in the rain his flames would burn down.
it was impossible for a fire element to cross and he didn't have a car either.
But he did what he had to do. He started walking.

"I'm doing this for her" he said again

Once he got to Heaths house he looked at his hands and saw every part of him was gray.
As he predicted his flames had burned out. He was about to ring the doorbell when it had swung open.

"Hey cuz what happend to you.. " Heath was holding in a laugh

"Shut up and let me inside please would you?" the hot tempered boy said

"alright alright sheesh but deuce and clawd are here so is that okay?"

"Yea it's fine" he sighed

Once Holt go inside he saw Deuce and Clawd eating a big bag of brain Puff's like pigs while playing a video game.

"hey' Holt said

Deuce and clawd didn't listen

"hey" he tried again

nothing.

"HEY I'M TALKING"

"oh hey bro whats up" said deuce

"i need to talk to you guys about something" he said

"uhhh... sure just let me and clawd finish this round" Deuce said

"fine"

Holt heard the game over song go on so he guessed it was over.

"You stupid head you were supposed to go over!" he heard deuce yell

"And you were supposed to go under!" clawd yelled back

"uh guy's? Holt wanted to say something." heath tried

"oh um sorry what was it you wanted to tell us?" Clawd said

"okay so you know Frankie's Boyfriend right?" he said nervously

"yea that big butt face who turns into a giant that came from skull shores that Frankie brought, And all the girls think he's hot? yea i know him." clawd said casually

everyone looked at him weirdly.

"we'll he hit's her pretty bad and it just makes me mad and-" he started

"because you like her right?" Deuce stated

"let me finish would you? as I was saying i think that i should tell her that i should go under cover and she would bring andy an make him mad so he can hit her than i would video tape it and send it to the police." holt said proudly

"wow dude..." deuce trailed off

"you should totally do it!" heath said

everyone nodded in agreement

"but you should tell her frist, like right now" clawd said

"really ?i know were she is but-"

"just go.." heath sighed

"okay"

and he headed out the door.


"as I said again NO ONE is touching my royel face" cleo said

"Fine but it's your loss" venus stated

"i do not get these fancy make up games" abbey said

"well abbey it's just for fun, you pick a partner and they do your makeup by blindfolded" frankie giggled " so choose a partner "

"I choose frankie you like sister so Abbey trust you" abbey said

"aw thanks abbs! ok so here is how its going to go, me and abbey are partner's cleo by herself, clawdeen and ula D and venus and cupid... NOW BEGIN!" frankie said

after a while of make up the ghouls were bored so they brought in the game truth or scare.

"ok cleo truth or scare?"said Abbey

"Scare" the princess said

"i scare you to call mr. rotter and tell him he ugly and fat" abbey giggled with the rest of the girls

"Fine"

cleo started to dial the number and she heard a voice.

"hello?" Mr. Rotter said

cleo put on a strange voice

"your ugly and fat try using make up for once" and she hung up

the girls cracked up laughing
cleo darted her precious eyes around the room in search for one ghoul
and she found her.

"Frankie" cleo started

"oh no" she thought here it was

"truth or scare?"

"RING" her doorbell rang

"I'll be right back" and she ran toward the door

"hello?" and she opened the door she gasped

"Holt? what happened?"

"my flames burned down but that's not the point i came because i know how to help" he said

"with what? come sit down on the porch bench" she said

he sat down.

"with Andy" he sighed

"Holt i'm fine i don't need help" she said

"yes you do i need to help you he's bad for you"

"Holt you should go home it's raining and-"

"please let me explain"

"No just go" she was starting to get a tear in her eye

"please"

"just go.."

"but I-" he heard the door slam

"i love you" and he started heading home.


omg so what did you guys think! i think it's one of the best ones yet! eeeeeep! i was so happy when i finished i know some of you wanted them to kiss and all but I can't have it over yet! i still have lots more planed ! NEW CHAPTERS EVERY Saturday! REVEIW!

Love ya! :)

xoxoxoxo ~valfer321~ (aka valeria)