A/N: Hey guys! It's me Valfer321! And I know you've been upset about the new chapter...But here It is! But First...
Shout Out Time and My favorite Reviews of all time! So here I go!
1) This review is from: JennaJNI2001
:D :D :D :D :D :D :D yay valeria! HANKIE 4EVA! FANDY truely and honestly sucks. oh and do you want to hear one of my secret couples?(torelai and manny!) there both jerks, and there both hairy! :D
lol(Im the same way with Hankie i just love them It breaks my heart if their not together!)
2) Alteredroses
I love the story! Valfer321 dont worry bout it! People need to understand that not all people can get it done right on time!( Thank You so much for understanding means a lot!)
3) BookCraze
I'm waiting for the next chapter to come out, but right now I LOVE IT! I can already see your name on a bestselling book, and I hope you make it. You have alot of creativity! Good luck, BookCraze (Thank You Ive mentiond your name before but I want You To know That i love reading this coment it makes me feel special thank You!)
4) And last but not least...pinkie pie 101
yayy we have the same name high five girlfriend _ wait valfer321 omg i'm so stupid why didn't notice your name before ? the val part oh i thought your name was valfer without the numbers and i'm so glad we have the same name and we're friends , valeria :) holt made me laugh when said hey i'm talking , poor guy was walking in the rain poor holt and he didn't even had an umbrella with him aww, he-he confused to her he said i love you but it was too late aww, and the part about hehehe funny i love this chapter anyways , val i'll be right back i have to go feed gummy brb (Lol this comment made me laugh Thank You Your awesome as we'll as the rest i just love reading your comments! )
now shall we get back to the story?! :)
Holt felt alone Like there was nothing else he could do, he felt helpless.
He wanted to help her. He really did but their was nothing he could do.
Nothing she would allow him to do.
Without her His life was junk. No joy in his life. no happiness.
so he sat. He sat in the middle of the street. He didn't care if there were cars driving.
He just sat. Thinking about his life. How he was never going to be complete.
But he decided to ignore frankie He was going to do his plan anyway no mater
what she says. So He got up and walked. As he was walking he heard a noise in the bush.
The noise was weird. like a person moving.
"who's there?" Holt said
rustle rustle was all he heard coming from behind.
this time Holt walked faster the walk turned to a run.
suddenly he heard footsteps coming closer.
he was knocking on heath's door but it didn't answer.
"dang it" he gritted through his teeth.
the door was about to open when he heard a voice behind him
"Finally I found you" said a voice
holt froze he knew who it was.
"sweet pea don't ever run away like that again" the voice sneered "come on lets go"
just as holt was about to doge or respond he felt himself being dragged away...
"Who was it?" said abbey
"Holt" said frankie
"what did the boy want" said cleo
"I bet that boy likes her!" said cupid in a sing song voice
"he does not" pouted frankie
"then tell us, something is not an answer" said venus
"we'll.." Frankie trailed of
"WAIT!" screamed draculaura
"What?" said clawdeen
"let me get some popcorn" she grinned "It's boy time!"
everyone rolled their eyes
"What? you always need some popcorn.." she said
"is popcorn really important?" sighed frankie
"yes, yes it is i'll be right back" and she got up
the girls waited there for about a minuted and they heard the microwave ring
"ok ready" draculaura had sat down
"it's time i tell you guys the truth...
so there it is! sorry it's short and I posted it late.. I had to walk all the way to wal-mart lol! Thanks so much you guys i will be doing more of the shout out thing if i did not get to you I will I promise! UPDATES EVERY SATURDAY!
Love ya!
xoxoxoxo ~valfer321~ :)