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Marceline's brother
" So you say your my brother." " Yes?" "Right?... Well bye!" " wait wait I can prove it" " fine!" I thought of things that no one else knew about her except me and her... I got it! " when you were six Simon gave you your favorite bear. Ha!" " WHAT YOU STALKER! UGHAAAA!"The door slammed right in my face.
Soon after my emotions went haywire and couldn't help it I unleashed my fangs. I felt a surge of anger and I gave in, it controlled me! I screamed and hit the ground and punched a meter deep hole in the ground. When I finally caught my breath it was too late my supernatural powers had been provoked.
I demolished the floorboards in front of me. It made a terrible cracking sound like a chalk board being scratched and didn't take long before Marceline came out to see that there was a huge hole in her wooden steps. She flipped out and said " Oh My Fricken Glob! What..Are... You doing!"
I looked up and my hood from my black and grey striped jacket fell off revealing three bite marks. "Huh?Oh...I gotta go." Marceline yelled at me which sounded like Yah you better run. I hope she didn't notice that was more than a vampire than I should be.
Thx ZAPRAY
