So someone asked me if Percy could summon water out of people and get really dark and angsty, which is probably a yes, but you'd have to ask Mr. Riordan. That won't be included in this story, but I'm sure there are some out there.
Also, I know I kind of put the damper on the demigods' powers, especially Percy. I do realize that I didn't quite do them justice, but I'm not perfect so cut me some slack, okay? ;) And also, I kind of needed them to start getting beat at the beginning of the battle for the story to progress right (not saying they're definitely going to win or anything). And I was kind of looking at it like the Avengers (especially Romanoff) and the agents were mostly trained in hand-to-hand while the demigods were more used to fighting with swords. They're pretty darn good at hand-to-hand as well, but I felt like the Avengers/soldiers/agents would be slightly better since they've been trained since a young age in hand-to-hand and stuff.
So…yeah. I love you guys! Thanks for all the support and reviews!
Oh, and also, I really am sorry I only sporadically update. I'm trying my best. Nanowrimo's been devouring all my creativeness, and this story's been kind of put on the back burner with everything else getting flinged at me. Don't worry, I will finish it as quickly as I can! This is just an advance apology for late updates! XD
Oh and one more thing (sorry this is so long). You guys are the reason I continue to post on fanfiction, and you fuel so much of my creativity and stuff its crazy. I really really love you guys and can't thank you enough for all your love. And even if you don't like the story and feel the need to flame me, I'm not going to be offended or hurt or anything by it. A lot of you have expressed opinions, criticisms, and ideas that are all very helpful in the making of this story. Thank you for that. But also, I understand that I made this story way too complex for me to handle and I've screwed myself over because I have no way to fix all the mistakes I've made with it. I understand that, I appreciate you guys for helping me see the flaws in it so that I can improve my writing. But please, cut me some slack, okay? I'm just a fangirl who likes to write fanfiction in her spare time, not a famous author. And I'm not complaining about criticism/flames/etc, I didn't report anyone-'m not offended by it-or delete any reviews, and my feelings aren't hurt, I'm not being a crybaby or anything, I'm just asking that you guys please understand there's only so much I can do. I know this story's been on a rapid downhill recently, and I've tried to fix it to the best of my abilities, but as I've stated earlier, I am royally screwed. So before you write another ten paragraph essay on why this story sucks or all the reasons why it doesn't line up, please remember that I'm doing my best, okay? If you don't like it, don't read it. Hopefully sometime after I finish it I'll be able to come back and revamp it quite a bit. I really appreciate you guys and all your feedback, so thank you.
And also, this doesn't mean I'm discontinuing the story. I will finish it.
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