Hello lovlies! I'm so incredibly sorry for delaying this story! Life happened. You know, that boring world out there. I'd much rather stick to my stories ^_^ I hope you all enjoy this little chapter. More will be up soon! Please continue reviewing because it helps me figure out where you would all like for this to go and so on.
Reviews:
Dannazione 3/16/12 . chapter 8
I love how this is going on, and I absolutely adore the way you write.
P.s.: Thanks for suggesting that song, I now love it!
Reply: I'm glad you like it! I find their music incredibly emotional and beautiful unlike a lot of the music out there right now.
Aikoyu Saotome 12/10/11 . chapter 1
I'm adopted, too :D have you found your biological family yet? I have! What an experience... I love this, it's a good beginning. I'm so interested, and I hope you continue with it. I LOVE that you put in Alice in Wonderland, and pirates of the caribbean with the green light XD
Reply: I have not found my biological family yet and I doubt I ever will. I sadly have no last name to go off of, so I'm quite limited to searching. I'm glad you caught that reference! Not many people did. I might be adding more characters in the near future *wink wink
rawry4evas 6/1/11 . chapter 4
Oh you left it as a cliffhanger please continue soon
Reply: I can be quite evil that way. Where is Loki when I need him?
Bezawesome 4/25/11 . chapter 3
Please continue! I love ur story and I'm glad Wendy has a strong character :)
Reply: I was practically forced to give Wendy a strong character. As much as I like the thought of creating a new Wendy, there would be no original story behind her character. I merely added to her personality, expanding more of the background. Thank you for your reviews! They've been very helpful!
Rebecca Riddle 7/13/10 . chapter 2
OMGOMGOMGOMG!
MORE PLEASE! xD
No one seems to write decent Hook stories, except YOU!
Can't wait to read more!
Reply: Thank you :) I'm glad you enjoyed it! More is coming to a fanfic near you...XD
PurpleFullMoon 7/11/10 . chapter 2
Ahh just what I have been looking for ;) ooo captain hook
I really like this story wait no sorry I LOVE this story! I can't wait for the next chapter :33
Reply: I'm glad I could quench your thirst. Jason Isaacs as Captain Hook is VERY drool worthy.
Celtic Celia 7/10/10 . chapter 2
*Applause* Well done! I like where this is going. I think it's great that you've incorporated Alice Liddel and Wonderland into your story. Also, I'm enjoying your Hook very much!
Reply: Thank very much! I hope you continue to enjoy the story. I still need to expand on Hook's character a little more and add more detail, so look forward to a chapter very much dedicated to our great Captain.
slythrn-barnbum 7/7/10 . chapter 2
Yay! I'm really impressed with how well you've gotten Hook's personality so far. He can be a hard character to write, and I really liked the way you introduced him here. Keep up the great work, and I hope you'll update soon!
Reply: I've found his character harder to write than I thought. I'm still expanding on his personality. There will be a chapter dedicated to him soon ;)
This chapter is dedicated to my reviewers and Kittie Darkhart, who has been extremely helpful reviewer. Enjoy my friends.
"Alice! Alice wake up dearie!" Madame Leferve lightly tapped at her cheek trying to rouse her. She was deep in the dream now though. Madeline and Sarah had gotten up at their regular time only to notice little Alice was still fast asleep. They had tried desperately to shake her from her slumber, but to no avail did she awaken. So they had done the only other thing possible. Get the headmistress.
Madame did not fool around. She was always serious about her responsibilities and had no trouble giving the young miscreants a good whipping. Alice however was another case all together. Apparently there was nothing technically wrong with her. She was just sleeping. They ended up moving her to the medical ward.
"What is happening? Why now?" Madeline wailed. Sarah was quiet as usual, but even sheheld an air of sadness. Their black dresses of mourning were wrinkled with the constant praying they had gone through that earlier.
"Maybe it's fates way of balancing things." Her voice was quiet and scratchy. It seemed as if Sarah never got proper sleep. She always had dark circles under her eyes and she jumped at the smallest things. First Wendy then Alice. A soft breeze slid against Madeline's skin sending chills up her spine. Something bigger than that was going on though. Life had a way of making things more complicated than they should be.
"It looks as if we will get rain"
Sarah's head turned at that. She walked quietly over to where Madeline was. Indeed storm clouds were brewing overhead, sending Walworth's into a dark shadow. Hidden from the warmth of the sun, Sarah shivered. She had always hated storms. This one seemed more ominous than the rest. It seemed as if it was bringing more than rain and lightening this time.
Oooooooohhhhhhh yeah that just happened. Sorry darlings, you'll just have to wait and find out what happened to Alice. And to my Labyrinth fans, I hope you understood the last paragraph. Please R&R! Let me know what you think by pressing that magic button. I might even throw in a shirtless Hook for you XD
