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Later that day, around 4, Luke and the boys come home. Kelsey and Lorelai are playing a board game when they hear them walk in. Kelsey runs over to Luke and jumps up on him.
"Hi daddy!"
"Hey there, how's my movie star?"
She giggles. "I'm good."
"How was the photo shoot?" He asks as he puts her down and walks back into the living room where Lorelai, and now the boys, are.
"It was so much fun. I even made 2 new friends!"
"That's great." He smiles, and notices that she seems very hyper. "Kelsey, did you eat ice cream when you got home?"
"Daddy, you know I can't have that much sugar two days in a row. It's not good for me." She says in a 'duh' tone of voice.
He eyes her carefully. "I know, and I also know that you and you're mother break that rule almost everyday."
"Mommy gave it to me." She rats her mom out and Lorelai opens her mouth wide.
"Snitch."
Luke just glares at Lorelai and then rolls his eyes. "You know the rules Kelsey."
"But it's not my fault."
"Then whose fault is it?"
"Mommy's."
"Well then I guess I should punish her and not you."
"Yes you should."
"Okay, Lorelai go to you're room." Luke says, trying really hard not to laugh.
"You have got to be kidding me."
"He's not kidding mommy, you're in trouble."
"I'm 40 years old, you're 7."
"So what?"
"So, you should have to go to you're room, not me."
"Lorelai Danes go now." Luke says teasing her. Lorelai gives him an evil stare and walks upstairs. Kelsey and Luke give each other a high five and laugh. But when Lorelai didn't come down for dinner, they realized that their joke wasn't very funny anymore.
"Katrina, could you help clean up dinner. I'm gonna go bring some food up to you're mom."
"Sure dad."
"Dad wait!" Brendan yells and runs over to him.
"What's the matter?"
"Don't leave us alone with her."
"With who? You're sister?"
"Yes."
Katrina is just standing there, not saying anything.
"Why?"
"Because she's sweet and says she'll clean up when you are around, but once you leave it's, I'll get you my pretty." He says in his best witch voice. Luke just laughs and roughs up Brendan's hair.
"It'll be fine. I'll be right back." He says and leaves the room. Brendan just looks at his sister.
"I'll get you my pretty, and you're little dog too. Hahaha." She says and tries to scare him. "Brendan, dishes now. Kelsey help him and Colin,"
He looks up at his big sister with his big blue eyes. "You get to sweep the floor."
"Sweep?"
She nods. "Here, this is a broom." She hands it to him and gets him out of his booster seat.
"Broom?"
"Yes, watch me do it." She shows him how. Then he smiles and takes the broom from her and starts "sweeping" the best a 3 year old can.
Meanwhile, upstairs, Lorelai is sitting in the bedroom, watching T.V when Luke walks in.
"Hey."
"Oh is my punishment over now." She says sarcastically.
"Lorelai come on, it was just a joke."
"Well it wasn't funny."
He sets the plate of food down and sits next to her on the bed. "Oh come on, it was a little funny."
She tries really hard not to smile, but it doesn't work. "Okay fine, it was a little funny." Then she hits him with the pillow.
"Ow, what was that for?"
"For making me sit up here all night."
"You didn't have to. You knew it was a joke, you could have come downstairs."
"Yeah right, and get yelled at by my daughter for not listening." She says, rolling her eyes. Luke just laughs, making Lorelai laugh too. They sit in a comfortable silence for 5 minutes when they hear yelling from downstairs.
"Well the silence couldn't last forever." Lorelai says as they both walk downstairs to see the mess their kids made.
Three days later, it is another nice day out, so all the kids all playing soccer outside in the backyard. Lorelai is sitting by the pool and Luke is grilling hotdogs.
"Pass it to me!" Kelsey yells to her big sister. Katrina kicks it towards her, but it goes too far and goes into the woods area of their backyard.
"I'll get it." Kelsey announces. She walks down the path towards the tree house that Luke had built them back there; the ball is leaning up against the side of the ladder. She picks up the ball and starts walking back when she trips. She looks down and sees a foot; she turns and looks, seeing a tall dark man hovering over her.
"Ah," Her screaming is cut off by the guy coming her mouth and picking her up. She tries to kick him and bite him but nothings working as the man runs off with her, deeper into the woods.
In the backyard of the house.
"Luke, did you hear that?" Lorelai heard a little scream coming from the woods.
He shakes his head. "No." Then he looks around the yard and doesn't see Kelsey. "Lorelai, where's Kelsey?"