Let's get this chapter up and running. Italics are flashbacks.
Edmund stared out the window, gazing at the fountain in the courtyard. The teacher was droning on an on but Edmund already knew this. He whished that they had stayed in Narnia.
But he didn't blame Lucy for finding the way back to there world. He didn't blame anyone but himself. Although his siblings say it wasn't his fault, and even Aslan, he still thought of him as the traitor. He still remembered her icy touch. He still remembered her threats.
Suddenly flashbacks from the past took control of his mind.
"Edmund there's too many. Get the girls and get them home" Peter yelled. The Witch's forces were overwhelming them.
"You heard him let's go" Mister Beaver cried tugging Edmund away. They ran up a hill and turned back to the battle field. Peter was fighting off a Minotaur and a few yards away the White Witch turned there allies to stone. She began to walk towards peter that was locked in combat, unaware of the evil Witch. He drew his sword an idea forming in his mind.
"Peter said to get out of here" Mister Beaver said pointing in the opposite direction.
"Peter's not king yet" Edmund retorted and ran along the rock formation. He ran as fast as he could throwing the Witch's footman of the cliff as he passed.
The Witch was almost upon Peter, when he jumped off the cliff.
"YYAAHH" he let out a war cry and aimed his sword at the Witch's wand. But the Witch pulled it out of the way in time. She glared at him for a second then lunged at him. Edmund dodged and brought his sword down on the wand and this time it met his mark. A flash of blue light erupted from the wand.
Edmund looked at the Witch hoping that she would surrender, but he was wrong. She swung her sword in her other hand and used it to fling Edmund's sword away. Then stabbed him with what was left of her wand.
Pain erupted from the spot and spread through his body like a wild fire.
"Edmund" Peter screamed as he watched what had happened to his baby brother.
The Witch pulled her wand out of him and glared at him. He looked back with pain twisting up his features then he dropped to the ground. He saw the Witch throw the wand to the side still looking at him, then turned and walked away. He couldn't get up, he couldn't move for that matter. He was going to die.
There was a cracking sound and Edmund was pulled out of the flashback. He looked up to find that the teacher was staring outside in disbelief. Everyone was staring outside, and when he turned he gasped. The whole fountain was covered in ice. But it was only Fall, not yet Winter. There was another cracking sound and he turned to find everyone in the room frozen.
He got up and walked slowly around, waving his hand in front of everyone's faces. Nobody moved. He started to get a bad feeling and ran to Peter's class. There he found his brother gazing in wonder out the window.
"Peter something's not right" Edmund exclaimed.
"Eddy I think you should see this" Peter said slowly. Edmund walked up to his brother and found that the whole city of London was frozen.
I shall stop there for now. Please review.