Authors NOTE
Hello Guys,
I might have written and published Chapter 13 but I am not sure whether if I've made a Mistake in getting them together too quickly. That's why there are two different ways things could Progress and to be honest I've already written two different Versions of Chapter 13.
The one published is one way things could go but there's another way too, where the Dasey doesn't happen for another while. I haven't actually written the whole Chapter yet but I think I've made a Mistake in getting Casey and Derek together in the last Chapter... It was too quick... There's so much I could put in before they finally get round to telling each other... And that had been my original Plan...
Sure „A Doctors Odysee" Is supposed to be a Dasey. And trust me the Dasey happens in the alternate Version of it, too... It just happens slower and more gradually, meaning it has more buildup and more adventures with Casey and Derek working together, before they actually become a Couple...
In Hindsight I feel like I've made a mistake with the whole Sex-scene. It happened too quickly, even if these two have been waiting since High School to jump each other... I should have done it with more build-up... What do you guys say?
Am I just a Insane Writer musing too much about a story or are my doubts justified? I just want to know you guys opinion. I mean you are the ones who are reading this. Seeing as I got no reviews for Chapter 13 I thought I'd gone wrong but I need you're input... I need to know if I've taken the wrong path with this story...
I'd be glad to know what you think.
-Keisha