Day 22- Expensive
This is also a preview for a story I am planning to write. It is essentially the Cat's Eye manga but with One Piece. Some characters may be ooc and if they are then please tell me about it! Reviews tell me what is good about my work and what I need to improve on!
So after that, your story...
It is a dark and stormy night in Japan. Outside of the modern art museum, the police are patrolling in case - no, for when - something occurs. Inside exhibition room three, Detective Luffy munches on a steak (or rather, three steaks) in anticipation. He is staring at an expensive - some might even call it priceless - painting called 'Lady of Alabasta'. It looks similar to his girlfriend Nami, but without the orange hair.
"Ha, yeah, she sure is beautiful. Nearly as beautiful as meat. Or Nami. I can see why Cat's Eye wants to steal this one," he murmurs to himself. Chopper tells him to be serious. Luffy shrugs it off, laughing, and takes a massive swig of the juice Nami had made for him earlier.
"Hey Chopper, d'you want some? Nami made it! It's really good!" Chopper takes a sip from it.
"It's really good! How about you guys?" He asks the guards. They politely decline.
"Suit yourself," Luffy says, and is about to take a sip when Chopper falls to the ground unconscious.
"Oi! Chopper! Can you hear me? Oi!" Luffy shouts before he falls unconscious as well. At that moment one of the guards steps forward and removes their hat, revealing bright orange locks. She carefully removes the Lady of Alabasta off of the wall. 'Thank you Vivi for that way of disabling the guards.'
"We place sleeping pills in the juice. It's almost too easy." She hears Vivi say in her mind. Cat's Eye disappears into the night, another heist complete.
As I said, please do review. It really makes my day. And any other author really. Also instead of that vote via review on the drinking contest, I have a poll up for it. There should also be a poll there on things for Cat's Eye-One Piece style that I need to sort out and if anyone has a better name, you should know what to do. This part is in present but I will probably revert bach to past tense next chapter.
Reviews always, always appreciated!