I am very proud ouf you guys reviewing more than usual and this is now a cowrite with me doing Max and Charlotte Haddix doing Fang. Anyway here is the chapter.

Beep beep beep SLAM. Another morning in the life of Fang. I pulled myself out of bed, reluctantly, I might add, and threw on some black jeans and a t shirt. I don't know I just like black. You stick with what works, I guess.
After eating breakfast and the uneventful drive to school, I saw Max cracking up behind a tree. She looked so nice when she laughed. Carefree. At peace. Focus, Fang. Cut the sappy emotional stories.
I asked her what was up. I heard a couple mutters of "jerk" and saw some girls walking off. What's heir problem?
She pointed at a surprisingly pimply Lissa pouting on the ground. She'd tripped. That's what you get for wearing six inch heels and trying to swing your hips at the same time, sweetheart.
I let myself chuckle a bit. Serves her right.
"Listen, we need to talk," said Max, serious again.
"Okay."
She led me to an empty classroom. What was this about? She sat down on a desk and I copied her posture, waiting for her to speak.
"Well we're kind of friends now but my other friends hate you, no offense. And I really don't want them to hate you so I have a plan worked out so that they can trust you. Are you up for it?"

"So? What's your plan?" I asked.
And she told me.

Time lapse to end if school.
This should work, I thought as I got into my car.
I looked at the little book Max had given me "revenge planner", she'd called it. I didn't really want to know the details.
I pulled up to Max and her friends Nudge and Ella. Those were their names, right?
They looked kind of surprised as I got out of the car, like if they were expecting someone else and handed Max her planner thing. She hugged me, and afterwards I turned to Nudge and stuck my hand out. "I don't believe we've formally met. I'm Fang," I said. She smiled and shook my hand, as did Ella. It worked, then.
"Hey don't forget about practice," I said.
"Why not just now?" Max asked.
"Works for me," I said. This day hadn't been too bad after all.

Max POV

Me and Fang got a soccer ball from the P.E. supply closet and walked to the field.

"I'm glad that worked. I really thought it wouldn't but it did. And I guess you were wondering about why the book was called the revenge planner right?" I blurted.

Fang just nodded typical Fang.

"Well…" and then I told him everything we had been doing and he just laughed at the appropriate times.

"You're not mad at me are you?"

"What? No, of course not I'm proud of you Max."

"All right then let's get our game faces on!" I said now serious.

I plugged in my IPod to the speakers that they use for events. And one of my favorite songs came up and apparently Fang likes it too, so we started singing along.

Bold= Fang italics=Max

Hey, girl, you know you drive me crazy
one look puts the rhythm in my hand.
Still I'll never understand why you hang around
I see what's going down.

I don't know why but Fang was looking at me when I said that.

Cover up with makeup in the mirror
tell yourself, it's never gonna happen again
You cry alone and then he swears he loves you.

Do you feel like a man when you push her around?
Do you feel better now as she falls to the ground?
Well I'll tell you my friend, one day this world's going to end
as your lies crumble down, a new life she has found.

A pebble in the water makes a ripple effect
every action in this world will bear a consequence
If you wade around forever, you will surely drown
I see what's going down.

I see the way you go and say you're right again,
say you're right again
Heed my lecture.

Do you feel like a man when you push her around?
Do you feel better now as she falls to the ground?
Well I'll tell you my friend, one day this world's going to end
as your lies crumble down, a new life she has found

Face down in the dirt, she said,
"This doesn't hurt", she said,
"I finally had enough."

Face down in the dirt, she said,
"This doesn't hurt", she said,
"I finally had enough."

One day she will tell you that she has had enough
It's coming round again.

One day she will tell you that she has had enough
It's coming round again.

Do you feel like a man when you push her around?
Do you feel better now as she falls to the ground?
Well I'll tell you my friend, one day this world's going to end
as your lies crumble down, a new life she has found

Well I'll tell you my friend, one day this world's going to end
as your lies crumble down, a new life she has found

Face down in the dirt, she said,
"This doesn't hurt", she said,
"I finally had enough."

Face down in the dirt, she said,
"This doesn't hurt", she said,
"I finally had enough."

"I always feel bad for the girl that he's talking about in the song." I say quietly

"I do too. I would never do that to my girlfriend ever, I hate that man for it.

*time skip to end of practice*

We sat down tired from running around and pushing each other, and listed to the next song together.

This is the story of a girl,
Who cried a river and drowned the whole world!
And while she looked so sad in photographs,
I absolutely love her,
When she smiles...

How many days in a year?
She woke up with hope but she only found tears.
And I can be so insincere,
Making her promises never for real!
As long as she stands there waiting,
Wearing the holes in the soles of her shoes!
How many days disappear?
When you look in the mirror so how do you choose?
Your clothes never wear as well the next day,
And your hair never falls in quite the same way-
But you never seem to run out of things to say...

THIS IS THE STORY OF A GIRL,
WHO CRIED A RIVER AND DROWNED THE WHOLE WORLD!
AND WHILE SHE LOOKED SO SAD IN PHOTOGRAPHS,
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE HER,
WHEN SHE SMILES...

How many lovers would stay?
Just to put of with this shit day after day!
How did we wind up this way?
Watching our mouths for the words that we say.
As long as we stand here waiting,
Wearing the clothes of the souls that we choose!
How do we get there today?
When we're walking to far for the price of our shoes!
Your clothes never wear as well the next day,
And your hair never falls in quite the same way-
But you never seem to run out of things to say!...

THIS IS THE STORY OF A GIRL,
WHO CRIED A RIVER AND DROWNED THE WHOLE WORLD!
AND WHILE SHE LOOKED SO SAD IN PHOTOGRAPHS,
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE HER,
WHEN SHE SMILES...

Your clothes never wear as well the next day,
And your hair never falls in quite the same way-
But you never seem to run out of things to say...
This is the story of a girl,
Who cried a river and drowned the whole world!
And while she looks so sad in photographs,
I absolutely love her-

This is the story of a girl;
Her pretty face she hid from the world!
And while she looks so sad and lonely there,
I absolutely love her,
When she smiles...

This is the story of a - girl!
Who cried a river and drowned the whole world!
And while she looks so sad in photographs,
I absolutely love her,
When she smiles...
When she smiles.

I smiled and hugged Fang.

"What was that for?"

"I don't know this song just makes me happy."

"This song reminds me of you smiling, and I just want to do this…" he started walking toward me put his arms around my waist and… hugged me. You hoped I was gonna say kiss right? Well sucks for you cuz he didn't why would he even do that come on guys!

All right that was the chapter tell me if you have any Ideas that you want me to an when I said what book this story was based on I meant the plot not the characters and personality. So that rules out maximum ride god I thought you guys would be smarter! Jk! If no one gusses it this chapter ill tell you what the answer is next chapter.

This chapters question is: Have you ever had any cliché moments?

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