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Previously:

"Ugh I don't like Sam he seems like a player he just met me today and he asked me out."

"Yeah about that, Max I want to do this before anyone else does."

"Do what before anyone else does?"

"Ok umm Max will you go to the Dance with me?"

Chapter 16

Fang POV (sorry Charlotte Haddix I just wanted to post this today and I didn't want to hurry you too much.)

Oh my holy sweet dear lord Jesus! Did I seriously just ask Max to the dance? Oh well let's just see what she says. When Max didn't respond right away oh god she's gonna say no was the first thing that I thought. I called Max's name a few times before she responded with rambling

I tuned out most of it just waiting to hear her answer which was…(I'm gonna be mean and not give it away yet!)

Max POV

What did Fang just ask me to the dance? Holy crap! Umm what should I say… yes, I should say yes.

"Max are you there, MAX!" Fang looked hurt I wasn't replying.

"Oh sorry I was just thinking about it. First of all I didn't know there was a dance coming up. Second of course I will." I finished with a smile

Fang started grinning too making my heart flutter.

"Hey max." Fang said softly, "can I kiss you?"

I slowly nodded my head, nervous about the kiss I was about to receive.

Fang leaned in both of us closed our eyes and when our lips touched It was like the freaking Fourth of July (this means there were sparks.)The kiss was sweet and cute without an open mouth, but with a crushing force. Fangs arms slowly wrapped around my waist and I returned the favor by putting one hand on his manly hip and the other around his neck. The hand around his neck was drawing small circles, and then getting tangled in his hair. (they are still sitting down on the floor just some FYI) Fangs arms slip up from my waist up to my shoulders. Then he pulled back out of breath.

"Wow." We both said trying to catch our breath.

"Well I have one more question this is the last one I promise."

"Ok shoot."

"So now that we've kissed do you wanttobemygirlfriend?" he said all in a rush so I could barely understand it.

"Umm hold on close your eyes." he did as he was told.

I leaned in slowly then gave him a quick kiss then tried to pull back but found out his arms were wrapped around me so I couldn't move. I felt Fang's chest rumble with chuckles. I gave up and continued kissing him this time with less crushing power but more hunger. Fang opened his mouth and slid his tongue across my lower lip begging for admittance into my mouth, I opened my mouth slowly with teasing. Fang growled at that and when my mouth was open enough his tongue charged in and fought with mine for dominance. He ended up winning and exploring my mouth. I began to fell lightheaded and pulled back slowly.

"I'm taking that was a yes." We heard soft giggle and turned around to see a small girl holding hands with what seemed to be her twin brother

"Umm hi?" I said confused

"Hi I'm Angel, Fang's little sister, and this is Gazzy my brother. What's your name?" she said in an angelic voice.

"My name is Max you're soo cute!" god even Fang looked at me like I had gone crazy, what can I say she softened my up.

"Are you Fang's girlfriend? If you are I like you much more than that nasty Lissa." The little boy, Gazzy, said.

"Yeah I am, I don't like Lissa either!" Wow it felt good to say that I was his girlfriend. Fang put his arm around me once I finished saying that.

"Why are you guys up it's like three in the morning?" Wow three in the morning we were kissing for a while because Sam called me at eleven fiftyish.

"We wanted to ask you where the febreze was Gazzy lived up to his name." what did that mea- oh I get it he farted.

"Here I'll get it." Fang went to open a cupboard filled with cans of air spray and handed Angel one then came back and sat next to me.

"Now go to sleep." They left up the stairs without another word.

"You're so lucky to have them, and they're so lucky to have you."

"Well now you have me too." I smiled and buried my face into his neck feeling my face heat up.

The last thing I remember is him chuckling and saying he won the bet an then I fell asleep. Hmm I wonder what he's gonna make me do now.

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