Sorry it took so long. If you have any suggestions for my story I'd love to hear them. I know how I want the killer to be like, but I don't know why the killer is angry with certain people. If you have an idea I'd love to hear them.


Chapter 4

Dawg gets up and runs after the ball as soon as it leaves your hand. When the ball lands he picks it up a few seconds later and trots back. When he gets to you he sits and you take the ball from him as his tail wags. Again you throw the ball and he goes after it. When he gets back you and Natara start petting and congratulating him on a job well done.

"He learns fast," comments Natara. She starts to talk to Dawg in a high pitched voice, "You're so smart! Yes you are! Yes you are!" He drops the ball and starts licking her face. "How's the rest of the training going?"

"I signed up for an obediance class. He's not quite house broken," you tell her.

"So you're keeping him?"

"It looks like it. He seems to like his life right now."

"He does look happy at the station. It was really nice of the captian to let you bring him in everyday."

You chuckle, "She had to, Kai wouldn't stop annoying her about it." She nodds and looks at the puppy.

"Have you considered having him as a police dog?" she asks. You notice the puppy who is now running in circles.

"What makes a police dog?" you ask.

"Well... A dog also has to be good with people, not get distracted easily, and is obediant. How many basic comands does he know?"

You think, "Oh about... none."

Natara starts talking to Dawg, "Dawg, sit." He stops and looks at her, but doesn't sit. "Oh well."

You look at your watch, "I've got to get going. The game is going to be starting soon."

"Football game?" You nod and walk towards your car.

"By the way, is there any more news about those killings?"

"The killer stopped at 8:00 on the day this case was opened. So far there haven't been any more reports." Natara looked worried, "I just hope whoever is doing this will be brought to justice soon." You nod in agreement and then you open the passanger door for Dawg.

"I swear I've seen those people before," you say before you shut the door.

"If you ever do remember where you've seen them, call me."

"I will." You and Natara then say goodbye and before you know it you're in your recliner with Dawg on your lap. You watch the screen as one football player is close to another who has the ball. "Tackle, tackle!" you say. The football player then tackles the other and you start to celebrate.


It is a few months later and Dawg is an adolescent. In the lab you are with Ken, Amy, and Natara. All of a sudden you hear sounds of running feet and Kai comes into the lab.

"We're being robbed!" he exclaimed. Everyone looks at him.

"Are you serious?" asked Amy. Kai nods.

"What idiot robs a police station?" exclaims Ken. You and Natara start running to the main room, and when you pass your office you notice Dawg running after you. When the three of you get to the main room you see a man with a knife. As you and policemen make your way towards him and he starts to run. You and Natara start chasing him with a curious Dawg following. After chasing him out of the building he runs down an alley with you hot on his heels. Before you can reach him something hits you and Natara in the head and knocks you down. Dawg dodges out of the way before he gets hit by the object. You notice the object is a trash can and look up and notice a woman standing on a balcony.

"Sorry!" she says. You look towards the running robber.

"You're lucky this isn't one of my best days!" you shout. You point at him, "Otherwise you would have already been tackled!" At the word tackled Dawg runs in the direction you're pointing and jumps onto the man, pushing him down. He looks towards you as if waiting for a reward. "How did he know to..." You look at Natara who is looking left at a dumpster.

It's a body," she confirms. You look at the person and actually you know who he is.

"I'll be back!" You run off to your car and start to drive home. When you get there you run to the box Kai had found and take out the yearbook. You open it and see all of the victims as teenagers.


You are Natara Williams. Seeing Mal run off made Dawg want to follow as he jumped off the man and runs towards where Mal left. Now free the man stands up and throws his knife towards Dawg. Thankfully all it does is scratch the side of him, but he still whimpered. The knife clatters to the floor as Dawg makes his way into your open arms. You wrap one arm around him and see the man faint.


I think I'm experiencing writer's block. Please help me if you can.