Dear my lovely readers,
Number One: 200 views...in one day. ADJFAEDKLFBGAOIH:))))))
Number Two:It has come to my attention( Mr. Guest) that I made a boo-boo. And Iposted on the interet. And now I feel stupid. So, here goes the revisions:
-Annabeth did lose her knife, her latop, and her backpack. Now, let's pretend that she magically had a pencil and paper in her pocket and that's what Luke and Beckendorf used to mke their map.
-Backpack stuff: I don't know why, I first read the comment as she lost her shoes. I'm not dyslexic, but sometimes I think Imay be. Percy happened to have a giant square of ambrosia in his pocket and Annabeth had some in her pocket as well. Just cut the nectar and teddy bear stuff. The teddy bear cut makes me sad because when I saw that in the Demigod Files I just had this vision of PErcy making fun of her for it The no food thing: Beckendorf asks, Percy realizes, freaks out, and finally realizes the reality of the no food situation. Annabeth still doesn't care.
-The great spider battle: Annabeth tries hitting the spider's nose, that distracts it, Percy kills it. Wa-la(:
- I completely forgot about Annabeth's ankle as well. The ambrosia heals that too.
-I forgot to put in there that Luke tells them that they only have five days.
I really needed to read that book again before I started writing.
I'm really sorry, guys. I sometimes think too fast before I can write it down and then I sound stupid.
Also, when I read, I sometimes tend to skip over paragraphs and phrases entirely. I have a feeling that's what happened with this whole scenario.
I'm sorry. I'll be better next time. I'll reread the book now.
Love,
Em