Wow, that was quick
I was frankly amazed by the reviews I got for this one.
Guess I gotta finish it now.
I got SEVEN in the first two days! Guess that beats five…
Oh, btw. I don't own Gundam Seed, any of the characters, settings, etc. (did you really think I did?)
So, this is how I'm gonna do it. These are the reviews I got and my responses. Next week or later this week sometime I'll replace this with the first chapter. Consider the other one a preview.
I'm going to start with the end of the battle where the Blitz is destroyed and continue through his capture into his escape and up to the destruction of Orb. (Although there will be several surprises, I think. :) ). I'll end the story around there.
I'm not sure about pairings, but there will definantly NOT be any NicolxFlay. Sorry, but I just don't see that happening.
OH! I got a chapter of a different story up. It's called 'Confined Anomalies' and it's not Gundam Seed, but I still hope you'll read it and review. It's a fantasy AU of a different anime series. I'd appreciate it if you'd give it a chance. The link's in my profile. Thanx!
Kill for Revenge-
wow! this is pretty good! aww.. your so cruel.. 5 reviews! (im already psyched up about the next chappie.. but you wont update untill 5 reviews? (.. sniff.. well i hope people will review so that i can read the next chappie already! anyways, please update soon..and i wish that you would get the 5 reviews ASAP! ciao! oh and by the way, is this a nicol x fllay? i hope it is!
Response:
Thanx! I'm glad you like it! Sorry, but it's not going to be NicolxFlay. I don't like Flay that much and I don't see it happening. And I guess your wish was answered! I got enough reviews by the second day…
Blue Mystery-
I really hope this is a Nicol x Fllay story. I don't know what it is about them, but together I believe they'd make a great pair! Not many people like Nicol x Fllay pairing, for a lot of reason. One, they hate Fllay, two Nicol's not really a major character and finally Nicol and Fllay never meet and their complete opposites. But I love Fllay, and I do mean love. And I adore Nicol so its only natural I'd like the two together.
Anyways, let me stop babbling on. I really enjoyed this chapter and really can't wait till the next one. I hate to burst your bubble but its very unlikely to get five reviews. Unless this isn't a Nicol and Fllay fic, cause then you'll get plenty! Hopefully dispite my words and doubts you'll update this wonderful fic. Cya!
Response:
Sorry, but it's not gonna be a NicolxFlay story. Also, I think I'm gonna spell Fllay, Flay because that's what my computer works with. And I like Nicol too. He's so cute, and I was so sad when he got killed. Heh, you were wrong about the reviews. I got seven in the first two days, and eight by the third. Although that is more then any of my other stories and they've all been up longer…
Alikhar-
Please, finish it. I like the story, and i hope what Frey have an ending very tragic ( i don't like her) But, The meeting between Kira and Nicol must be really dramatic, because both them are friends with Asrum.
Response:
Looks like I am going to continue; mebbe finish, mebbe not. Depends on the reviews I get over time. I'm glad you like it though, and I don't like Flay either. I don't know what'll happen to her, if anything, but she won't get together with Nicol. Or Kira, or Athrun, because I like them. Heh, hope you like the continuation. Thanx for the review.
Precognition74-
hm... i don't quite get what was happening at the beginning of the fic. if you could put in a little bit of the conversation before the first line, it would give us a better insight. this is a good idea though. very very good idea! i'd like to see how this plays out. also, it woule be better if you put in more descriptions. describe the actions more and if possible, decribe the chracters more. i assume your writing 3rd person from Nicol's POV. he doesnt know them, true, but if the characters were described mroe throughly it'll be easier to imagine what they actually look at. look forward to reading the next chapter!
Response:
Glad you like it and thanks for your review! And the constructive criticism. This was just a short half page deal I wrote before math class. My next chapter should make this one a bit clearer. Not sure about the POV yet, I often change as I go through. Let's see…. Oh, the descriptions. I might put more in when Nicol sees them for the first time, but I'm not sure. I figure that if people have seen the series, they already know how things look. Don't know yet. Thanks for your review and I hope you like the next chapter.
Luna-
Continue.
Response:
I will. Thanks for your review.
Darkness-
I think you have to upgrade. Because it is a great story.
Response:
Yep! I'll upgrade. Thanks for your review.
Jiang Mae-
I like this fic but I kinda got lost. It would be better if you make the chapters a little longer. Otherwise, I like this fic and I will review it and still read it. I'll even put it on my favorites list.
Response:
Glad you like, and thanks for the constructive criticism. This chapter was just half a page I wrote in five minutes before math class because I was bored. Now that I'm going to go further into it, I should have time to get more detailed and longer. And I'm going to go into the past and continue from the point where the AU starts.
SpiritsMelding-
Please continue it! I like it that you brought Nicol back, he deserves to live. -grins- Please update soon.
Response:
Looks like I will. Thanks for your review.
TBC! Remarkably!
Although I could use suggestions….
(hint hint)