For the time being I have chosen not to continue the story, apparently there are some people who believe that I have simply just copied and changed characters from the movie 'The Graduate'. Please note that I have never seen the movie and only wrote this story as and idea that I had after hearing the song 'Speak Now' by Taylor Swift. The review that was left was very rude and should have been sent via private message and not posted as a review to my story. The guest by an anon name was also extremely rude in saying that my idea was unoriginal, extensively and thoroughly copyright violation, as well as saying that my imagination should be more original than supposedly copying a movie that i have never seen before. They also believe that I should remove the story.