Hi, I was bored so decided to write the breakup scene from Fred's POV. It's not too great, but I thought since it was written, I may as well share it with you...
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Ally. She was perfect. I couldn't believe how stupid I had been. I had been a complete dick but she had took me back. I didn't deserve her.
Sure, she could be a bitch, and she was vain and a huge pain in the ass, but without those things I don't think I would love her.
Which is why I was going to propose to her. George and I always joked we would be eternal bachelors, but that had all changed now. I just wanted to be with Ally forever. I hated being apart from her. Since she had returned for the holidays, I had not seen her. I waited at the door, ready to whisk her away and make up for lost time. But she never came.
Ginny said she was going through a rough time. Which is why this evening was planned to cheer her up.
I waited nervously in the front room with George and Charlie, the ring in my pocket weighing a tonne.
"Are you really going to do it?" Charlie asked noticing my discomfort. I gave him a small smile, I feared that if I spoke I would be sick.
George laughed. "Haha, look at him all nervous."
I moved forward to hit him but the doorbell rang. She was here. I raced into the hallway, but Ginny got there first. She had Ally in an uncomfortable bone breaking hug.
"Jesus Gin, let her breathe," I said, looking carefully at my future fiancé. She looked breathtaking in her blue dress that she wore to Tonks and Remus' wedding. Ally looked up before running across the room and crashing herself into my chest. I enclosed my arms around her, never wanting to let her go. She snuggled into my chest tightly.
"You look beautiful." She did not speak. Something was wrong, but now was not the time to ask.
"Ready to go?" I asked. She nodded and secured her tiny hand in mine, pulling me to the door.
"Have fun!" Charlie and George called, giving us knowing grins. I glared at them before following Ally outside. Her hand began to tremble. I couldn't bare it.
I shut the door and turned to her. Her eyes looked so pained. It broke my heart. "What's wrong have you-"
I didn't have time to finish the sentence.
She threw herself at me, crashing her lips to mine. I was a little surprised but I pulled her closer, my arms winding around her back.
Ally pushed herself closer, as though our close proximity wasn't enough. She wanted more, and I did too. She parted her lips and I went in. It was all I could think about: her, my Ally, my perfect girl.
She pushed herself even closer, so she was right against my groin. Oh boy. As I moved my hands down her waist she let out an involuntary groan. I couldn't help but smile, knowing that I had the same effect on her that she did on me.
She pulled back panting. My cheeks were flushed and I didn't have to look in the mirror to know a huge grin was plastered on my face.
"I don't want to go now," I said honestly. Maybe we could skip the picnic and go straight to the hotel. As long as I was with her, I didn't care. I took a step forward and but she backed away.
"What's wrong?"
She looked down again. "Last week I realised-"
"You're not pregnant are you?" I blurted out. We had a lot of unprotected sex, could she really have our child inside of her. I raced forward and put my hand on her stomach, it was a little pudgy. Sure I was worried, a baby was a big thing. But I couldn't think of anyone better to have my child with.
She swatted my hand away and stepped back. "No of course not." She paused for a moment before looking at me with pained eyes. "What are we doing here?"
"We're going out." Well, we would be if she wouldn't keep stalling.
"Please be serious for once in your life," Ally snapped. "We're together for a day, have pure meaningless sex and then spend months apart moping."
"It wasn't meaningless," I muttered sadly but she didn't hear.
"It's not healthy," she continued, her chin rising up.
I stared at her in shock, trying to comprehend what she was saying. "I know we spend a lot of time apart, but I'm happy."
Her eyes widened. "You're happy?"
"You're not?" I asked. I was on cloud nine, I thought she was too. There was no way I was reading the signals wrong.
"Of course I'm not I'm bloody miserable. There's no fun or fire, it's just moping and fights." She motioned wildly between us.
"Well that's what tonight was for," I said, starting to get a little impatient. "Let's go and have some fun."
I grabbed my hand again, but she pulled away. "Aren't you getting what I'm saying. I'm bored of this, bored of you," she said harshly. It was like someone had slapped me in my face. I could not answer, I just stared in shock. "I tried to be nice, but let's just face it, you were right." She sighed heavily. "I guess I just liked you because you were forbidden or whatever. And these past few months have made me realise I'm a lone wolf who should be tied down."
I couldn't move. Was she breaking up with me. It was unbearable. I wanted to get on my knees, beg, tell her how much I adored her. She didn't mean it, she couldn't. But her harsh and pained expression told me she did.
"We can do more things. I can come and visit you, you can come and visit me..." I said desparately. I would not lose her. Not like this.
"We're too different," Ally reasoned loftily.
"Different? We're exactly alike. We're even standing in the same way; both flopping our arms around." I though I had cracked her when she began to smile, but it was gone quicker than it had came and her harsh expression had returned.
"We're very different and you know it. I'm more studious and intelligent and you're a bit of a goof. I'm younger, more fun, beautiful, living around where ever. You're just like 'whatever'.
You're living with your aunt and even before then you lived in the tiny house that you grew up in. I'm very high maintenance and need someone to support my needs. You can't do that."
I could hardly believe what she had just said, "So you're breaking up with me because I'm poor?" I asked, the anger evident in my voice. She remained silent and began to cry. "Jesus Al, when they hell did you get so snooty. It's not like you're a high roller yourself!"
"Listen, I'm not blaming you or anything. You're poor, that's your thing and you obviously like all living together and having hand me downs. But it's just not me."
I was mad, and rightly so. The muscle in myjaw was twitching. A look of remorse passed over her eyes but she sighed angrily and faced me again. It was like she was two separate people, having a fight in her mind.
"Listen, you and you're family are sweet people. At times a little overbar-"
What had they ever done to her. "You dare bring them into this," I shouted, waving a threatening finger in her face. This time she didn't step back. "Why are you doing this? Why have you suddenly changed? And don't you fucking dare give me the whole 'i realised' excuse because it's bullshit!"
She looked taken back at my language but I didn't care. How could she do this to me? I was ready to give her the world. Everything she ever wanted. I would have done anything for her. And now she had poached my heart and played around with it in front of my eyes.
I put my hands on the back of my head and walked back inside. But then I realised I shouldn't have to move. She didn't deserve to look so happy and carefree. I wanted her to know what she had done to me. I spun around and walked back toward her, taking the small ring box out of my pocket. A look of realisation crossed her face.
"Open it," I demanded, my eyes watering slightly. She just stared at the box unmoving. "Ally, open it!" I practically screamed. With shaky hands and tears streaming down her face, she opened the tiny box. She gasped in shock and remorse, but it was too late for that.
"I was going to propose tonight," I said monotonously. I felt dead, nothing could be worse than this pain. I wanted to cry, I wanted to scream, I wanted to kiss her and make violent love to her right her on the porch. I just wanted her, but she wouldn't have me. I snatched the box off her and shoved it back into my pocket. I sighed and looked at her sadly.
"You know, despite everything. I would still marry you in a heartbeat. A pretty stupid sentiment, right?" I laughed bitterly. I don't know why I told her. I suppose it was a small ray of hope. But it came crashing down at her next words.
"Yeah, stupid, pathetic, a bit like you really. Oh wait no, that didn't come out right." She looked guilty, but I didn't care. That was the final straw.
"Just leave Ally," I muttered. Her began to cry as mine welled up. Everything hurt.
"I'm so sorry," She said earnestly. She gave me one last longing glance before apparating away.
