So for starters, what the Fuck. I put out three chapters last week and gave the simple goal of 20 reviews. I know there are a lot of people reading this story to. 97 per day. So can you guys make it to 24 this week? I believe you can!

Now for fan Qs to be answered:

Okay, first off: How did you come up with this idea?

My method is a little weird. Have three friends over. Take a few shots. Then, I played Tron and the Matrix at the same time as Mass Effect. That's how I came up with Users.

Question 2: What does Ty look like?

I'll describe in later chapters.

Question tres, do you work with anyone on this story?

I like to think I work with my fans. Seagreenshoes has practically helped me write these upcoming chapters. Liege Lord gave me great matirial to use later on. DZEASE gave a request that there is no way I am letting down. I like to think I am telling a story that you want to read.

Q-four: Is there going to be a sad ending to this?

My characters get the ending we make for them.

On to chapter 12...

Ty POV:

I sat outside the airlock ready for whatever new threat Feros would have. My squad assembled quickly. Garrus had his weapons ready to go. Danny was still hung over from the night before and couldn't hold a gun, let alone use it.

Shepard's group was a bit slower than us. It was him Wrex and Liara. They all took place in front and the doors opened.

Usually, this part of the game starts with you meeting a guy and he gets blown up by a missile. Instead, we saw him run passed at a sniper took his head off and his corpse fell hard to the ground.

We were immediately in action mode. Shepard ran out of the airlock with his assault rifle firing. Liara and Wrex put up barriers and joined him. Garrus took cover by some boxes and started giving suppressive fire. I stopped Danny and made him wait inside and ran out to fight the Geth.

I was pissed and ready to take it out on something. The Technocytes had fully encased my body now and I was in Hayden's corrupt armor. Besides that, there was a sort of scratching in the back of my skull that gave little pain but enough to cause and annoyance.

I stepped out from the airlock and was seen by every geth. Missiles locked on and began firing at me. I saw this and ran at them. I was moving faster thanks to the technocytes and had better reflexes. I quickly grabbed a missile out of the air and chucked it back at the geth. It took out two missile launchers but a destroyer quickly took their place.

It charged forward and fired rapidly at me. I met it head on and punched a hole through its mid section. It fell and the rest of the geth began to flee. But I wasn't going to let that happen.

I drew my glaive and began using it to kill the geth left and right. Rocket troopers fell sliced in half. Destroyers had their heads severed. The prime was cut into four different sections. I showed no mercy.

It was all over quickly and I was getting a curious look from Shepard, "That wasn't your normal fighting style.
"I improvised."

"Yeah I can tell. You sure you can do this mission?"

"Shepard I can do this now leave us alone!"

Shepard gave me a puzzled look, "Did you just say us?"

My head began pounding, "No, we...I mean I didn't say us."

Shepard p[ut his hand on my shoulder but I shrugged him off and started walking toward the stairs. Garrus ran after me and Danny came out of the Normandy looking better. Probably Chakwas sober serum.

We moved down the stairs and out into the court yard where Shepard ran to meet Fai Dan. My team just chilled and waited for him to come back.

It was the worst ten minutes ever. I kept getting looks from the colonists. They all just pointed, stared, or gawked at me. Whatever the cost I needed to get rid of the technocyte. I was so distracted I didn't pay attention to how much Danny was sneezing.

Danny POV:

Danny hated Feros. It was too hot. It was too cloudy. It was too...dusty. He could feel the pollen just floating in the air. Normally he wasn't allergic to anything but something on Feros was the worst.

His eyes couldn't open hardly and every breath he took hurt. Danny began thinking of all the thing it could be and came to the conclusion that it was the Thorian. He must have been allergic to the Thorian.

Luckily, Chakwas caught up with him and gave him a shot of something that sobered him up. Now, all he had to worry about was the army they would be fighting through for the next few hours.

The trio walked to the entrance to the building that had the elevator to the skyway. Ty lead them...down?

"Hey, Ty, shouldn't we go up and like back Shepard up on his way to Exogeni?"

Ty turned back and looked at Danny, "No, We have a plan."

Danny raised an eyebrow, "You mean you have a plan."

Ty just looked around and began walking, "That's what we said. We have a plan. We are going to camp in the Varren tunnel and wait for Shepard to return. It will keep us safe and the place has some armor for Garrus."

Garrus cut in, "What has what for me?"

Ty ran ahead once they got to the bottom of the stairs and began turning on the water gate, "Their are some tunnels up here that the Varren have taken over. We are going to take them out."Ty got up as he finished the first gate and moved to the second, "It will be much safer and less exerting if we do that."

"Sounds like a plan",Garrus replied.

They finished their work and walked up to the door. Ty hit the button and they were attacked by a pack of Varren. Ty ran forward and began the melee the shit out of them. Garrus (of course) resorted to sniping. Danny decided to have some fun here.

He pulled out his pistol and focused on the gravibomb from Ratchet and Clank. The gun quickly morphed in to the launcher and Danny began letting bombs loose all over the place. Quickly, the Varren were all dispatched and the three were up at the Mako tank retrieving their rewards. Danny took a shot gun and transformed his launcher back to a bolt pistol again. He didn't catch it till now but morphing the weapon took a lot out of him.

He was walking to Ty to tell him that this was a piece of cake when the ceiling caved in and a geth colossus rose from the rubble.

Tali POV:

9 minutes prior to leaving the Normandy

Ty held Tali in his arms close and protectively. Tali herd Joker say they had ten minutes just a little bit ago. Tali finally stopped crying and had one request of Ty.

She reached into her pocket and pulled out her camera, "Would you wear this while your out? I want to be able to watch you and know what's happening. I f something happens to you I want to know and there is really no reason for you not to...I babling aren't I?"

Ty let out a chuckle, "Yes, you are." He reached down and took the camera. He stuck it to his helmet so that Tali could view anything that happens. Then he let her check it.

"Okay, it's on right. Be careful alright."

Ty smiled and leaned down to whisper in her receptor, "You worry too much."

Tali gave him a look of confusion but he was already gone.

one minute after leaving the Normandy

Tali worked on her console, finishing her duties for the day. She had one final diagnostics program to run then she was free to do whatever. She flipped on the program and activated the camera she put on Ty.

Tali gasped at the merciless behavior he was showing. He just kept killing and didn't stop. The power he was using must be coming from the thing that encased him.

Tali watched as he began hacking and slashing a prime apart and found that she was happy with its destruction but not the manner at which Ty did it. He was just attacking to attack, there was no second thought or brief idea on how to attack. He just threw himself at the enemy and destroyed them.

She began trying to open a com channel to him but it wouldn't go through. It was like someone was trying to block her out. She quickly began bypassing all the blocks and forgot about the engine diagnostic program. She kept bypassing till the program came up first on her screen saying there is an apparent problem with a vent.

Tali worked fast grabbing her tool kit and ran over to the vent. She opened it up and crawled inside. She crawled until she reached the blockage. She had no idea what it was and pushed on it to try and move it. It felt organic, she was a little scared at this fact but she still tried to move it with a prod from her knife.

It growled at her.

Shepard POV:

Shepard flew down the prothian skyway in the Mako. He was going full throttle and ran into any geth on the bridge. He kept going until he picked up some com chatter hailing them, "hello? Is anyone there? We are refugees from-"

"No get away from there."

Shepard stopped the Mako and looked at Wrex and Liara for some direction. Wrex just pointed out that they had a mission to do and saving people wasn't part of it. Liara suggested that it would be a smart Idea to check up on the people.

Shepard agreed with Liara and they left the tank to speak with whoever is inside. They walked in and several guards all aimed directaly at Shepard.

Okay, so this Chapter is shorter than the others. But with good reason. Did you see all the cliff hangers. Feros is going to be fun to write. BTW start submitting ideas and thoughts on Virmire via reviews.

Next Chapter, 7/6/12