A/N: So now reviews yet, *sigh* until I get 2 reviews, I'm not going to write a third chapter, because I don't know if you guys are liking it, or hating it. Same goes to all my other stories. I can see the 500 visitors I get to my stories that don't review; I know you people read it. With that said, here is chapter 2.
Peter:
I could never stand losing. From a very young age, I could never take losing the race or drawing contest, I just had to be the best at everything, and I still do. I guess you could call it OCD. I was sure that I would rank highest for the second stage. My times were so low, I was sure I would win again. I should have foreseen how the stiff was so unaffected by everything. If I saw the signs I could have disposed of her earlier, like I did to Edward. Luckily I have a plan, and two others who are willing to help me. Drew and Al only think we are going to scare her, but I want the little bitch dead.
The plan is like this: when Tris leaves her bed(She is a restless sleeper, and gets up for a short walk almost every night), Al grabs her, and we take her to the pit, where, if the plan is successful, we drop her body down into the chasm.
That night, we all pretend to go to sleep, and we wait for Tris to get up and leave. When she does, I whisper quietly to the boys to wait a minute, so that she is far enough that no one hears us, and we get up to follow her. She is at the water fountain, but peaking around the corner, watching something. I get a feeling, when I look at her, like a sort of butterflies, but I quickly expel it from my mind. I motion for Al to grab her. He puts a hand around her mouth, and waist, so that she can't scream or run.
"Ow" cries Al. She must have bit him. The bitch has fight.
"Shut up and keep her mouth covered" I say, hushed so that no one besides Drew and Al can hear.
I tie a cloth around her eyes. Drew Shoves her from behind, Al holds her mouth, and I pull her arms.
"Hurry up" I say "Wonder what it sounds like when a stiff begs for mercy?" not like we will give her any.
We keep pulling her towards the pit. She struggles, but it is no use against three boys who are twice the size of her. When we get there, I say
"Lift her up, c'mon" I order, and Tris starts the thrash madly, and scream, although no one is around to hear her. We lift her up so she is almost sitting on the railing. We bend her over, so that her back is arched, and her head hangs over the chasm. I grope my hand along her chest. She thrashes more
"Are you sure your 16 stiff? Doesn't feel like you're more than 12" I say, and the other boy laugh. "Wait, I think I found something" and I squeeze her breast. I love the way she is squirming, as if she is both physically and mentally in pain. Al looks a bit… miffed. He takes his hand from her mouth momentarily to shove me,
"Stop that" he says, and he lets go of Tris. She falls to the ground thrashing, and she bites down as hard as she can on the first thing the feels, which happens to be my arm. She bites so hard, there is blood. I punch her hard in the face, and pull my arm from her grip. I kick her in the side, and she gasps, obviously winded, but I'm not done. I take a handful of her hair, and slam her head into the metal railing, and she is momentarily stricken. Al runs away, not wanting to participate any longer, while drew stands lookout, in case anyone comes. Tris pulls the blindfold off, right before I grab her by her throat, and hang her over the chasm. She kicks but it is no use.
I hear a shout, and Drew falls to the ground, as he is punched, by someone tall and strong, but I can't see his face. I quickly release Tris, and I run, not sure if Tris falls or, hangs on.
I stop when I reach a hall where I can see what is going on without being seen. The man who shouted, Happens to be Four. He is pounding Drew, who was to slow to run, into a pulp. When he is satisfies, he rushes to Tris, who managed to hold on to the railing. I watch the gentle way he picks her up and holds her, and I feel slightly jealous.
What, what the hell is this, I don't care about her. Peter Wake up, I'm mistaken; I don't know why I'd ever be so mean. I could be falling in love with Tris! No I can't be, but maybe that's why I'm in such a hurry to get rid of her. I can't deal with these thoughts, especially with the competition, and I'm dating Molly, I can't be with someone else, not to mention that "someone else" is Tris, the girl I just tried to murder. No, I will not think these thoughts again, I say to myself, and I turn to walk back to the dorms, though I doubt I will be able to sleep.
A/N: so how was it? Did anyone catch the hidden starkid avpm lyrics, in honor of a very potter senior year coming out today? If you did, review, because I really really want reviews. I wish there was a like/dislike button for fanfiction, so that I could know whether people like it or not. I won't post another chapter until I get 2 reviews. Reviews from bellarox2002 and 64thestarkidwholived do not count, because you are my friends, and that doesn't count. Anyways, Four has finally been cast in the movie. He will be played by theo james!