CH.4 The gang

Hi all readers im back. Sorry for not posting but I neever had the time except for saturday and sunday but i was camping. So No Electronics while camping but oh well.
I hope you like this and I am still accepting OC submissions until chapter 6 which now I plan on a good long story. Cole is in trouble

Cole: Yes I am. The gang in a gunshop

shhhh they shouldn't hear you

Cole:Awwwww come on please.

NO you stay quiet. Back to our story.

"Oh No." Cole said as he saw the red hooded guys come in the store. "ITS HIM!" one yelled grabbing a gun and shooting. Cole jumped behind the counter with ruin and went in the back room while the men were shooting. "Who are they" Ruin asked. "Lets say they dont like when you destroy their home Okay." Cole looked over the counter behind the wall and saw the men reloading and calling for help. "Are guns back here?" said Cole while looking still "Yeah here is one." Cole started shooting the men so he got up. BAM "AHH" Screemed Cole then all went black.

***IN COLE'S HEAD***

"Cole, Cole wake up." said a voice. Cole got up and looked around and saw nothing. "Hello? Whos there?" Cole was still looking. "Its me Cole." said the voice which was now know to be Cole's dead dad. "DAD!" said cole happy to see his father again. "but wait your dead and im dead and ill never see..." "no Cole your alive just near death. You cant die." "What happened?" "You got shot in the stomach and yur in the ambulance." "what if I do die." "you wont my son. Remember me and try to wake up now."

***NORMAL WORLD***

"He's waking up!" "Mom." "Yes Cole im here." "I saw Dad." said cole still drousey. "You have visitors." Said the doctor letting some kids in. "Hi Zero, and Andy." Said Cole. "Hi gumball and darwin." "Hi cole how are you feeling. "Fine, Hey Ruin. Who that?" "This is Nick." "Its nice to meet you." said cole trying to raise his hand. "You should stay laying down" said the doctor.

I think thats a good ending point. I have extended my story so 6 isnt last.

What will happen next.

Cole:Ow. Are you sure im allowed to be out for this.

Not really but come on your a mercenary stop whining.

Cole: I GOT A BULLET IN MY STOMACH I AM NEAR DEATH

Watever ill take you back now. :(

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