THE BETRAYAL
HI IM BACK WITH NEW IDEAS. I STOPPED WRITING BECAUSE I GOT TOO OVERWHELMED WITH OC'S SO IM GONNA TAKE A FEW OUT IN THE NEXT FEW CHAPTERS. IF YOU WANT YOU CAN PUT IN REVIEWS WHAT YOU WANT TO HAPPEN. AND FROM NOW ON ILL BE UPLOADING EVERY 7 DAYS. MAY NOT BE LONG. NOW LETS GET TO THE STORY.
OC'S STAYING ALIVE
Ruin
Nick
And some more
Cole was running down the schools hallways when he ran into Tobias "Tobias dud help me" Cole said out of breath "Oh I will" Tobias was acting strange and told Cole to go in the science room with him.
"Why did I leave my things at home." Cole told himself multiple times while tobias was in his desk. "OK EVERET GET DOWN ON THE GROUND OR I BLOW YOUR GOD DAMN BRAINS OUT" Screamed Tobias pointing a Desert Eagle at Cole. "Why are you doing this Tobias. "YOU KEEP YOUR MOUTH SH-SHUT" Cole heard Tobias stutter.
IN THE HALLWAYS
"Come on I heard yelling" Zero told Andy (For the future I might wanna say this now R.I.P Andy R.I.P Zero) "And?" "And we should check it out. Come on it was in the science room" There was now another Pirate (Pirates are the one who attacked the school) with Tobias and Cole. They opened the door came in and saw the pirates and Tobias with a Desert Eagle to Cole's head "Tobias why you where our friend" said Andy before getting shoot in the head by the pirate and Zero ran at Tobias and was shot in the face."Youll die for that" Said Cole filled with rage. "Oh yeah? You and what army." "This one" Cole said as the military's elite team broke through the windows killing the pirate and taking Tobias. "Your going away for a long time. Hello sir" Said the team leader "Well thanks for the help earlier" Said Cole rolling his eyes" (to catch you up before last chapter Cole was made a Commander wasn't put in the story Sorry) "Sir. Permission to take down the pirates" "Permission granted" Then a ton of elite solider stormed the building while one gave Cole his sword and new red M16 "Thanks you lieutenant" Cole walker out of the room shooting pirates and stabbing the Melee pirates. He took the liberty of shooting and killing Jamie on "Accident" because she was a bully While Cole was doing this the leader of the rebels (New oc) Daraki (Dare-ak-eye) Busted in the roof and started mutilating the elite team and shooting students. In all the commotion Gumball and Darwin took Anias and darted home at sonic speeds.
2 OC'S DOWN SORRY FOR THE CREATOR OF THEM BUT I HAVE TO I WILL KEEP RUING AND NICK AND I STOPPPED HERE FOR SUSPENSE. INTRODUCING NEW OC DARAKI HE IS 6 FEET EXACTLY WITH A OBSIDIAN M16 AND OBSIDIAN AK47 WITH A SET OF BLACK CLAWS. HE ALWAYS WEARS BLACK BULLETPROOF ARMOUR AS HE IS A LITTLE PARANOID. HIM AND COLE ARE ENEMIES AND HE WILL TRY TO KILL COLE. HE HAS A DARK ATTITUDE TOO. OK SOTRY WRITERS I WILL TELL NOW BOTH MY OC'S (DARAKI AND COLE) ARE FREE TO USE WITHOUT MY PERMISION I WONT MIND BUT YOU CANT USE THEM IN FANFICTIONS RATED M TILL I RELASE "THE RAID" WHICH WILL BE MY FIRST RATED M STORY EVER ON THIS SITE.
THANKS FOR LISTENING AND BYE (not accepting ocs anymore)