Okay, so Chapter 2 is up. I know that NOBODY HAS READ THE NEW VERSION YET BUT I'M GONNA KEEP GOING! So yeah, this IS the updated version so some of the reviews might seem really wrong but I DON'T GIVE A SPARKY, OKAY? NOW ENJOY THIS PLEASE!

Chapter 2

The Fight

The Super Robot landed in the Pit of Doom where the astronauts were sitting around lifelessly.

'Well at least we don't have to wear those boots from . . . last time.' Nova shuddered at the thought as she followed the rest of the team out of the robot and keeping her distance from the astronauts.

Chiro and Jinmay walked up to the nearest astronaut. Chiro tapped him on the shoulder. "Hey guys, there are these really strange doomholes sucking in people. You and your friends don't wanna be here."

The astronaut ignored him. Nova cringed and got ready to run.

"Why aren't they listening to me?" Chiro asked his girlfriend.

Jinmay shrugged. "I don't know. Let me try." She cleared her throat and said as politely as she could "Excuse me sir, we're here to rescue you."

Nova was surprised when the astronaut turned around revealing that it was just a man in a spacesuit. "Oh thank you so much! We've been waiting for so long for somebody to rescue us!" he cried dramatically.

"No problem. We're just doing our job," Otto smiled.

"Well now that you're all safe, perhaps you should go into the robot and we'll return you home," said Gibson.

"How can I thank you enough?" said the spaceman.

"You needn't. Helping others is its own reward," said Antauri as they walked towards the Super Robot. Most of the astronauts had already gone inside the Super Robot but that man was still staying inside.

"I really must thank you though," he said.

"No seriously, you don't have to," said Otto.

Suddenly the man's mood changed. He grabbed Otto in one hand and Gibson in the other. "Oh, but I insist!"

All of a sudden, all of the spacemen began to change. They grew skinnier and skinnier until they were as thin as sticks. Their faces became old and wrinkled and their eyes popped out of their sockets and they turned colour. Most of them turned green, some of them turned blue and the rest of them turned purple. Space zombies!

"RUN FOR IT!" Nova shrieked and scampered behind the Super Robot's right foot. The others watched her in confusion, but not for long because the zombie who was holding Gibson and Otto was glowing at the mouth.

"Quick! Remove his helmet before he drains their energy!" Chiro shouted.

Antuari was the one to do so. He leaped on the zombie and ripped its helmet off.

Nothing. The zombie continued to glow at the mouth and Gibson and Otto were beginning to panic a little.

"Monkey Doodle! Now what do we do?" Sparx yelled.

BOOM! Too late, the zombie struck the blue and green monkeys with his beam, draining their energies away from them.

"Don't . . . just . . . stand . . . there," Gibson rasped. "Do . . . something!" he added before the two of them passed out in the zombie's hands.

But the team couldn't do much because they noticed that the zombie was still glowing at the mouth. What was he doing now?

FLASH!

A doomhole appeared on the walls of the pit and its wind began to suck hard.
The Monkey Team quickly stood their ground but noticed that the zombie (who was still holding Gibson and Otto) was looking at the doomhole in a peculiar way.

"NO!" Chiro cried out, realising what he was up to. He leaped out quickly but the zombie was quicker- and threw the two helpless monkeys into the doomhole. The team saw a flash and both Gibson and Otto disappeared. They were gone.

"We're just going have to fight them," Jinmay sighed.

Antauri and Sparx nodded in agreement they and Jinmay leaped into action.

"MONKEY MIND SCREAM!"

"MAGNA TINGLER BLAST!"

The zombies were wiped out in seconds as Jinmay shot bullets out of her fingertips and Antuari slashed them with his Ghost Claws. Sparx shot electricity from his magnets but couldn't help keeping an eye on Nova. 'Why is she so scared? It's not like her to run away from battle,' he thought to himself.

"MONKEY VU!"

Chiro struck more space-zombies with his power while trying not to fall into the doomhole which kept on sucking as hard as it could.

Jinmay was also making good progress. "Keep going! If we can defeat all of them then we might be able to close the doo- ahhh!" The robot girl screamed as the leader of the space zombies trapped her in his beams, draining away her energy.

"NO!" Chiro cried out as he saw her collapse- and let the doomhole drag her towards it! Chiro frantically leaped out and made a grab for her hand.

And missed.

Chiro watched in horror as his girlfriend disappeared into the doomhole. He'd just lost her.

The girl he loved.

She was gone.

"Jinmay . . ." Chiro whispered and buried his head in his arms. He couldn't believe what had just happened.

Sparx turned around and saw Chiro lying there in grief. 'He just lost her,' he thought to himself. 'Poor kid. That's exactly how I felt when Nova- NOVA!'

He turned around and caught sight of one of the space zombies glowing at the mouth in Nova's direction. Unfortunately the yellow monkey didn't notice because she had her back turned in fear.

"Oh no you don't! MAGNOBALL BEAM SPLITTER!"

Sparx successfully pelted the zombie with his beams, knocking him out. Nova turned around sharply when she heard the noise- and saw the chaos. Otto, Gibson and Jinmay were gone. Chiro was just lying there in front of the doomhole. And Antuari was struggling in the hands of one of the zombies.

"Come on Nova. You're a warrior, not a coward," Nova told herself. She jumped up and pulled out her giant fists. "BOOM BOOM WAKE UP!" she yelled, knocking out the zombie who was holding Antuari. Nova began to punch her way through several more. 'You know?' she thought to herself happily. 'These guys aren't as tough as they look. Why was I so scared of nothing?'

Sparx watched her admiringly. "She's back," he grinned and joined in the fight.

"FLAME FIRST FURY!" Nova shouted, striking even more zombies. This was too easy. She was making such good progress . . .

Suddenly one of the space zombies grabbed hold of Nova and shook her around like a rag doll, making Nova dizzy. She then noticed him aiming her towards the doomhole . . .

"NO!" the yellow monkey shrieked but the zombie ignored her and threw her full force towards the doomhole. She bounched off the ground hard, flipped around helplessly several times and then felt her body beginning to sting as she flew through the doomhole . . .

She was inside the doomhole . . .

"Gotcha!"

It was Sparx. He had leapt out and grabbed her arm just in time. But the force of the doomhole was so strong that it nearly knocked Sparx off his feet and would've yanked him in if he hadn't grabbed onto the wall of the Pit of Doom with his other hand. Seeing this, Antauri ran up to Sparx and grabbed his tail.

"I can't hold on!" Nova cried to the red simian who had most of his body inside the doomhole too.

"Just hang in there and I'll pull ya out!" Sparx shouted.

She could tell that he was holding on as tight as he could and pulling as hard as his strength would allow him. Nova turned around and a terrifying yet almost familiar-looking sight filled her eyes. The doomhole was like a long white tunnel, twirling around, dragging her full force. It looked so scary and reminded her so much of . . . of . . .

All of a sudden, Nova found herself having a hallucination, no longer being dragged in midair but lying on her back on what seemed to be . . . the Dark One Worm! And it wasn't a doomhole that was pulling at her- it was a wormhole! Ahead of her she could see the rest of the team (except Jinmay) clinging onto the worm for dear life. Right in front of her, Sparx had tied himself to a flagpole and had his arm stretched out as far as he could, trying to keep hold of her boot with her foot in it.

Nova had no idea what was going on but in a panic, managed to gasp out "Don't let go!"

"Don't worry! I gotcha!" Sparx grunted. He tried to pull her towards him- and Nova felt her foot slip out of her boot and then she was falling and she heard him cry out her name in despair but she just kept on spinning around and screamed. "Help me . . . SPARX!"

"Nova! Nova! NOVA!"

Sparx's voice brought Nova back to reality. She was still in the doomhole but she wasn't falling and Sparx still had a good grip on her arm. "I need you to reach out with your other hand, grab my arm and hold on tight!" he instructed.

The tired and scared yellow monkey didn't know what was going on but managed to fight the doomhole's force and grab onto his arm and clinged onto it as tight as she could.

"NOW!" Sparx yelled at Antauri, who yanked at his tail so hard, it sent the red and yellow simians flying out of the doomhole and crashing into a wall of the Pit of Doom. As soon as he realised they were both safe, Antauri started using his mind powers to close the doomhole, Meanwhile, Chiro had finally come to his senses and beaten the rest of the zombies.

"Well that went well," muttered Sparx sarcastically. He went to rub his head which he had hit when being yanked out- and noticed that Nova was still holding onto his arm.

"Uh, Nova? You can let go now," he said tryingto stay cool but he could tell that something was very wrong with her. He shook his arm as hard as he could. Still Nova would not let go.

Sparx suddenly noticed that she was staring into nothing, her eyes were just opened wide and filled with fear. He waved his free hand in front of her face. Nova let out a shriek and slapped Sparx's hand away.

"Is she alright?" There was concern in Antauri's voice.

Sparx shook his head. "I'm not sure. We should get her back to the robot and deal with her there."

So that's Chapter 2 re-done! For those who have already read it, I hope I haven't changed TOO much! Me and my impulsive brain . . . X_X

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