Thank you for the kind words and reviews. Had a few people questioning the songs in the last chapter, the first one was Travelin Soldier by The Dixie Chicks and the second was Let It Be by the Beatles. I love both songs, I had so many that I wanted to try and use, music is a huge influence for me in many things. I have to stop myself from infusing more music into the story. I hope that everyone likes the story and continues to read.
Part of the reason it took so long to get posted was it has be written, deleted and then re-written at least 3 times. When I first started the chapter, I thought I would go a completely different way. But then I changed my mind and liked this better. Sorry for the wait. This chapter is shorter than the last few have been but I am working on the second part, I figured I wanted to get what I had done posted.
Thank you for all of the new followers and favorites. It does my mind some good. Now time to carry on.
Landing with a soft thud outside Shell Cottage, George notices the light is still on. Hoping that only a few of them are up, he needs to talk but not sure who he wants to talk to. Walking in and sighing in relief he sees only Bill, Sirius, Charlie and Fred still up, "Hey guys."
"You don't look very happy for having been alone with your girl." Bill is saying to George as he joins them at the table, "You actually look like you two had an argument."
"There is normally not arguing with Hermione, it normally is her yelling at you and you sitting there and taking it," Fred replies smiling.
Shaking his head, "Not an argument and she probably doesn't even know that I am upset." Drinking out of the glass Bill handed him, "Not upset, just concerned."
"What's troubling you?"
"Charlie, you sounded like mum right then when you said that. It was kind of scary." Causing the others to laugh, "Hermione wants to have sex."
Causing Sirius to choke on his drink, as he is pounding him on the back Bill is groaning, "Please tell me you didn't, not at the Burrow. Not when you two aren't spending the night together."
"No, we didn't. I said she told me she wants to, not that we did, I mean we did snog a bit but she said that afterwards. She just said she doesn't want to wait until the wedding and I am afraid she is making her decision for the wrong reasons."
"She isn't a flighty bird; she isn't going to make her decisions on a whim." Sirius replies offering his advice, "I mean she thinks about everything."
"I have seen the way you two react to each other," Fred is supplying his opinion, "you two are drawn towards each other. I think you would have gotten together your own even without the marriage law. It might have taken a little while but you would have. You couldn't keep your eyes off her that night at the dance club." Shrugging his shoulders, "Neither could half the men there but that is neither here nor there. She looked hot."
"Yes, yes she did," Nodding with his brother's opinion, "I couldn't believe the shirt she had on" Charlie is raising an eyebrow at George, "This shirt was open to her belly button, Gods, I couldn't think straight."
"Then you were kind of an arse."
"Yes, I know." Rubbing his face, "While we were dancing, she had pulled me real close and she was dancing against me made me completely lose all common sense." Staring off into the corner of the rom, "Did you know other than mum, Hermione is the only person who has ever touched my ear, I mean where it should be, not on accident. She actually touches it and it doesn't put her off? That was what did me in that night, I don't even know what it was exactly but she wrapped her hand around the back of my neck and traced her fingers down the side of my face and grazed it slightly and it made me want her right there and then. I had to leave before I did something stupid." Grimacing, "but then leaving was the stupidest thing I could have done."
"At least it was Lee that came after you; Ginny wanted to Bat Bogey you."
"That would have been wonderful, that was the worst thing you two could have ever taught her," Looking at Bill and Charlie, "Why did you teach her that one?"
"We figured it would be something that if any boys really messed with her, it would teach them a lesson but wouldn't harm them too badly therefore not getting her expelled from Hogwarts." Charlie is grinning, "I just never knew she would get so wicked at it."
"Half the school was afraid of her with it." Sirius is snorting and nodding his head in agreement. George says sighing, "I felt horrible and you could see it in her face. She really thought that I was coming back in to tell her I made a mistake and wasn't happy. When in all honestly that was all I could think about was how lucky I was. I thank Merlin, that she believed me when I said I was happy. That night was the first time I saw a bit of her jealous side. The bartender was flirting with me in front of her. Wow, if looks could kill."
"I know! I saw her go at Alicia, what did she say? Did she end up telling you what she said?"
"Alicia, that bird from Hogwarts?" Sirius is questioning, "The one you were talking about at dinner the other night?"
"Yep that the one. Well, the high points of their conversation were, I took down Death Eaters, do you think you have a chance?" Laughing at the memory, "You know how much she hates the Gryffindor Princess title? She told her, that the ministry wouldn't like to hear that the Gryffindor Princess' fiancée is getting a hard time from someone. Then the best part ever, she pulled out Rita Skeeter, said the reporter owed her a few favors, that she could probably dig up some dirt on Alicia if Hermione asked."
"I love her more and more every day," Fred is putting his hands over his heart, "God I am glad she was on our side. Could you imagine how much more trouble we would have gotten into if she really disliked us?"
"So who is Alicia and why is Hermione threatening her?" Bill is asking, "Circe's knickers you didn't have a girlfriend when this all came out did you George? I swear to Merlin if you did."
"Gods, no! Looking back, I was always comparing girls to Hermione and that is why they never lasted more than a date or two." Sighing and saying it really fast, "Alicia is the witch I lost my virginity too."
Shrugging his shoulders Bill is saying, "Sometimes girls get really hung up on that one, I mean their first as well."
"She had been around, a lot," Turning to Fred, "Did you know she slept with Wood?"
"Really? I thought that was a rumor," Fred is telling Bill and Charlie, "He was a seventh year our third. I guess, they were in the locker room and he told me that she basically jumped on him."
George continues for Fred, rolling his eyes, "Wood was a horny all the time, sex and Quidditch most all he talked about at that time. He has changed since then but I told him how she went crazy on me after wards and he said she did the same thing to him."
"Crazy afterwards?" Charlie is questioning, beckoning him to finish the story.
"I told her I didn't want to again, I felt horrible the next day, like I had used her. I didn't feel the way I should have to have slept with her to begin with but I was sixteen, I was stupid."
"But now she is paired with a Slytherin, Marcus Flint, who contrary to popular opinion has actually changed since school. After the Battle he helped rebuild part of Hogwarts and came around to St. Mungo's, he stopped in one afternoon after I woke up and he had changed his views on blood status. He and a few others were hoping to get into the Ministry and work at updated some of the laws. Him, Adrian Pucey, the Greengrass girls and a few others realized the beliefs of their parents were backwards and absurd."
"Hold up," Sirius is saying, "You lost your virginity at 16?"
"Yes, why?"
"Just curious, so how many since then?"
"None."
"You are so not a Weasley." Charlie is shaking his head and chuckling at the glare he is getting from George, "Really, even Percy has been with more than one witch. Ladies love us gingers."
"Don't get me wrong, I had plenty of offers, I just couldn't." Shrugging his shoulders, "I found my way to several broom closets around school with several willing witches but beyond feeling them up and getting my hand up a skirt or two, it never went too much further. Plus the whole brink of war thing looming over our heads put a damper on my libido."
"Ok, I guess I will give you that," Sirius is handing Fred the bottle of Fire Whiskey, "So then what's with Hermione? I mean, isn't it a good thing she wants to have sex? You guys are getting married; wouldn't it worry you more if she wasn't interested?"
"I know, that it is a good thing for her to be interested, I just don't want her to only want to because she thinks I can't wait."
"Really George?" Looking at his twin like he is an idiot, "She held out this long, don't you think that if she really wanted to she would wait until the wedding?"
"She just confuses me, one day she is embarrassed because you and Angie walk in on us kissing in our own kitchen. Then tonight, she was like a totally different person." Groaning and dropping his on the table, "Gods have you ever just wanted to talk about something but not sure if you should? I swear to Merlin if it gets back to her and she doesn't kill me or you, I will."
"We all understand. I mean, you don't know what you can say without giving us too much information but at the same time you need to talk about it." Bill is saying shrugging his shoulders, "Plus you don't want to give us too much information about her and make us uncomfortable around her, right." Both twins are nodding their heads in agreement.
"Cause who are you going to talk to about things like this?" Charlie say, explaining more in detail, "We are brothers, like Bill said, we should be able to talk to each other about it and not be completely weirded out. I mean, I love Hermione, she is like a little sister but at the same time I get that she, just like Gin, are adults and are going to have sex. We all get that." Nodding to Sirius, "I mean, you and Remus have to have some discussions and Tonks is your cousin."
"I think part of it is James and Lily getting back at me for all of the crap I put Remus through in school with the girls I was with. I mean, some of the stories about how I was are a little blown out of proportion but I was a horrible flirt and I had my fair share of girls in the dorm room but it's life." Taking a drink and thinking about something, "I think it is safe to say we can all look at each of the young women we know and realize they are each sexy in their own way. You can define someone sexy without necessarily wanting to have sex with them. Does that make any sense?"
"I mean George you always though Angie was gorgeous, you even saw her naked before I did."
"How in the bloody hell did you see Angie naked before Fred?" Bill is shaking his head, "Last I knew snogging in a broom closet didn't end in being naked?"
"God no, sorry Fred, I never fancied Angie like that but yes she had a gorgeous body she did shag Oliver, that is how we saw her naked."
"So this Oliver guy, the one you play Quidditch with now, shagged Angie and this Alicia girl? Both while they were in their third year? Weren't they kind of young to be shagging a seventh year?" Charlie is holding his hands up at the glares he is getting, "Hey passing no judgments on the girls but for him, that is questionable"
"Well both of the girls were older in our class; they were twelve when they started Hogwarts. Both of them had underlying circumstances and couldn't start earlier. So our third year, they were 15 already and he was 18 or 19, gods, we are lucky they didn't kill us." George is looking at his brother confused, "Think about it, girls mature faster than boys, so they were already ahead of us in that department and then you put them in a class with us and Lee?"
Waving Fred off, "So George, what was the problem tonight?" Sirius is leaning back in his chair, "I mean is it something you want to talk about?"
"I do but I don't know what is too much information, you know when does it become too much?"
"Ok, I think Hermione is rubbing off on you. You are over thinking everything." Bill says laughing at his brother. "Anything you say, one of has probably done, tried to do or wanted to do. I mean, we are all men." Grabbing the bottle of Firewhisky from behind him, "Here, let's loosen up a little. I mean, what's the worst that can happen? You give us too much information and we tell you and you know to reign it in a little." Pouring him a shot and passing the bottle, "Here goes, I fell out of bed one night in the middle of everything with Fleur, I was naked, she was naked then she couldn't stop laughing at me. Do you know how mortifying it is to have your witch laughing at you while you are naked? I know that she wasn't laughing at me but it still doesn't do wonderful things to your self-esteem."
Rolling his eyes, Charlie is fessing up "I walked in on Bill, not once but twice. Luckily in school in the Prefects bathroom the girl was more or less dressed but here with Fleur I got to see more of her and him than I ever want to see."
"I guess, it's not really embarrassing, I just hate sometimes how I lose my mind around her. She makes me lose control so easily. I kept her for a bit afterwards only because I wanted to find out what was bothering her. We were talked about it and then before I realized it, we were snogging. Let's just say belt buckles don't feel very good according to her." Causing the others to laugh, "I really didn't want to do anything tonight because well one, I don't want her to think that is all I think about. Plus, I really didn't figure Fred here, would stay away, I was afraid he would jump out or prank us at an inopportune time but like always with her my brain shut off. The things she learns reading, you know she can do wandless magic but tonight I think she did silent wandless magic," Blushing at the memory, "To make things go a little easier, you could say, it was a cold surprise." Hitting his head on the table, "I can't look at anyone of when I say this. For the third time in less than 24 hours she has gotten me off in less than five minutes. I feel like a bloody teenager."
"I hate to say this but it happens," Bill says laughing "I admit it, even after getting married and having sex on a regular basis, sometimes it happens." Clearing his throat, "There are certain things if Fleur says in French, yeah, I am done."
"I guess I have to agree," Sirius is rolling his eyes; "Sometimes there is just nothing you can do about it."
He head still lying on the table, "I just don't want it to happen then, when we finally do. You know..."
"Really George," Harry is saying from the doorway of the living room "you can't say it?"
"Sweet Circe! Don't sneak up on us Wonder Boy!" Fred is shaking his head, "I would hate to tell Ginny we hexed you because you snuck up on our sex conversation."
"Come on," Bill is pointing at a chair and sliding him a glass, "Join in."
"So where were we?" Charlie is asking, "Oh yes, George and his teenager tendencies."
"Shut up Charlie," Bill is rolling his eyes at him.
"Then you just make sure that you have done everything you can for her before you actually get to that point." Sirius is tipping his glass at him, "There is a saying happy wife, happy life. There is nothing that makes a woman happier than having a man that can please her."
Smiling at the others around the table Fred is winking, "You tell her about your school girl fantasy?"
Whipping his head up, "What are you talking about?"
"I was joking but I think that confirms it," Ducking as George is throwing a wad of paper at Fred, "That you want to see what she looks like back in her uniform."
"That is another normal thing. Hell there is nothing better than a little dress up," Bill is explaining, "Plus you never know what may happen. You do know where the girls are going tomorrow, don't you?" The others are shaking their heads, "Lust." Getting confused looks, "It is a lingerie and sex shop outside of Paris in the magical section. I guess it was Mione's idea to go. At least that is what Fleur said. She also said all of them liked the idea of going but it was Mione who suggested it."
"Amanda already has a penchant for lingerie, so I won't mind if she buys more."
"At least I reminded Hermione of my favorite color. Knowing the way Luna and Ginny can make her do things she wouldn't normally do, she won't be coming home empty handed although I don't know why she would buy any, since she hates wearing knickers."
"Dear brother but half the fun of lingerie is taking it off." Charlie is smirking with an eyebrow cocked up, "Like unwrapping a very sexy Christmas present."
"Sometimes Charlie you are wrong, just so wrong." Harry is shaking his head.
"Ok, this question we will ignore you with just to humor me. George tell me you didn't think the same thing the first time she took any of her clothes off. Or that first time that you made her come undone." Charlie is looking at him, "Can you? There is nothing wrong to admit it."
"Oh gods, the first time it happened, I was speechless, she was so fucking gorgeous."
"That is what you need to think about, when you two do get to the point of having sex but don't worry about it." Bill is telling him, "Actually your objective at all times should be to make sure she gets off first. Ladies first, dad gave you the talk too, didn't he?"
"Yes!" Both twins wrinkled their noses and pretended to be sick.
"What talk is that?" Sirius is laughing at their reaction.
"Oh well Dad talked with each of us boys about treating the witches we were with, with respect. He stressed that they should always be taken care of. Even suggested reading material if we wanted it."
"I think it is a pureblood thing. Orion Black had a different approach; he paid for Regulus to visit with a few ladies for lessons. His opinion was that you could control a witch by knowing what buttons to push when. Leaving her wanting and you could get her to do anything for you." Rolling his eyes, "I never understood that bullshit and I really didn't want to think about my parents in anyway like that. I just liked the company of a woman and I can be a selfish bastard in many things but not in bed." Barking out a laugh at the look Harry is giving him, "Be glad I never gave you any type of talk like that" then looking at the twins, "and be glad it was your dad, could you imagine if Molly was involved in the conversation?"
"So not right Sirius!" Charlie is looking a little green with the mention of his mother.
"We will ignore that you mentioned her right now. You like getting her off, right?" Bill is looking at his younger brother.
"Well, yeah, I can't imagine anyone not wanting to do that for the person they love."
"I knew it," Fred is smiling, "I told you so."
"Told him so what?" Harry is asking.
"I told him, he has loved her for a long time but he didn't want to admit it." Continuing on Fred is explaining, "I love my twin but Merlin, I could have beat him senseless at times when you guys were gone. We were all worried about the three you that much is obvious, you guys are family too. The mood swings on this boy when he was worried about Mione were all over the place."
"I know, I know but I couldn't help it. I was worried about her."
"That and you missed cuddling."
"Shut it!"
"Hey, you were the one who had a death grip on his pillow." Pretending to rub his face into a pillow, Fred is smirking, "Ah Hermione." Sighing and laughing at the glare he is getting from his twin. "It is true, you know."
"Fine, you are right, I did miss it." Shrugging, "She is a snuggler and I love it."
"Tell me about it. Try sharing a cot with her." Holding up his hands because of the glares he is getting, Harry is defending himself, "Remember, dead of winter? In a tent? We slept in the same cot to keep from freezing. Not to mention I know she wasn't eating the way she should so I wanted to at least keep her warm since she was losing weight."
"Sorry for that Harry," George is apologizing, "That's something else, I have never been a jealous guy but something about her brings it out in me."
"I get that," Harry is agreeing, "I didn't think I was a jealous person until we were out one night, Mione, Ginny and I. This guy kept hitting on Gin, it is a good thing Mione was there or otherwise I may have been in some serious trouble. I almost hexed him" Wrinkling his nose, "That would have been a mess, he was a Muggle. Mione, literally hit me upside the head and told me to get over it and leave him be." Laughing at the memory, "She said if I didn't she was going to take Ginny home. While I knew what she meant, a couple of guys around us thought well… you know…" Blushing at the glare all of the Weasley's were giving him, "Ok maybe that wasn't the brightest thing to say."
"No," Shaking his head, Bill is stating "No it wasn't. You could talk about any other two girls together and it would be fine. I draw the line at any talk about Ginny and Mione." Rubbing his forehead, "That's going to give me nightmares." Tossing back a shot and grimacing.
"Ok, happier topic, getting George on board with the idea of shagging his fiancée," Charlie is smirking as George's blush, "You didn't think I would let it go did you?"
"Well, George, let me say something, as the person here that knows Mione the best." Shrugging his shoulders, "She is finally putting some confidence she has in everything and everyone else behind herself for once. When we took her shopping, we were looking around and she wasn't sure where to begin looking. Anyways, I told her, you wouldn't care what she wore; you think she is beautiful regardless. She said she was a lot of things but not that."
"It about killed me," Sirius is continuing for Harry, "I mean, she is gorgeous. I can admit that. I mean you can see it when people watch her. I am hoping she is turning a new leaf over, I mean her swimsuit is a prime example, what she was wearing tonight was nowhere near what she would normally wear." Rolling his eyes at the others, "Ok then how about this thought, have you ever know Hermione to not weigh out all of her options? Does she make any hasty decisions? No, so I think you are safe to figure she is ready."
"Sirius is right though," Bill is scratching his head, "You have to make her comfortable and feel good. Let's be honest, it is not like it is uncomfortable for guys, outside a little fumbling we get the easy part the first time round. No matter how you look at it. They adjust to us, they tend to be smaller build then we are not to mention most men get off 99.9% of the time. It is a little more elusive for women. I will give you the same advice I gave Percy a couple of years ago, if you aren't sure you are going to get her off during sex make sure you do beforehand. I learned shortly after school I loved eating a girl out before sex, if you listen to some witches talk it is difficult to find a guy that likes it." Grinning wolfishly, "So I learned that I had one up on most wizards and I wasn't afraid to admit it."
"I have to agree with him," Charlie is nodding his head, "I love it too. There was one girl who just the sound of her getting off was about my undoing. One time she literally got me off with her voice. I don't know what it was but one minute she was calling out my name and then I was hers."
"You are such a man whore." Harry is shaking his head, "Entertaining though."
"Well then let's hear something from you."
Harry's eyes are darting around looking everywhere but at any of the Weasley's, taking a shot "Really? You do realize, I have seen two women naked, your sister and Hermione? And only ever been with Ginny, I don't exactly have a wide array of stories to tell."
"Oh shit, no I hoped you had at least one story somewhere about someone else." Charlie is grimacing, "I don't want to hear about Gin."
"Why the bloody hell have you seen Hermione naked?" Bill is looking at him with a small amount of suspicion "Especially if you have only ever been with Gin?"
"Well nothing like what you guys are thinking," Holding up is hands in surrender "I told Sirius this story when we were shopping. While in the Forest of Dean, while she was showering and a spider crawled in the shower and she let out this blood curdling scream. I would have sworn Voldemort himself was in the shower with her. I go running in thinking she is hurt or something and she screams at me to kill the spider. When I do, she says thanks Harry and tries to hug me." Burying his face in his hand, "Who tries to hug someone while naked? I about had a heart attack. I bolted before she got too close. I couldn't look at her for a couple of days. I saw her in all her glory and she played it off like it was nothing."
"Ok, so out of curiosity, did you ever fancy her?" Charlie is asking as he pours another round of drinks.
"I did but I didn't. I know that doesn't really make sense but when we were on the run we talked a little about it. Did you know she was the first person besides Hagrid to give me a hug? Mind you living through one of her hugs is a feat sometimes, I swear she realigned my back a couple of times." Shaking his head, "So Hermione has always had a special spot with me. I mean, she didn't want anything from me but be my friend. I knew she would stand by me through anything, then our third year when we rescued Sirius, that was when I thought I fancied her."
"I wondered about that!" Sirius is barking "You kept stealing glances at her."
"Shut up Sirius, let the boy talk." Bill is giving Sirius a look that rivals Molly's stare.
"In the course of the night, she clocked Malfoy, which that would make any of us proud. Then the first time through the night, she got beat to hell by the Whomping Willow, stood between me and a mass murdering Azkaban escapee telling him that he would have to go through her first to get to me. All the while our other friend is laying there unconscious. Then after thinking her favorite professor had betrayed us all, she stuns another professor just to give Sirius and Remus time to explain everything to us."
"She stole my heart right then and there, that wonderful little girl." Sirius is playfully sighing and holding a hand over his heart, noticing the glares from a few Weasley's "Right, shutting up."
"By the time we come out from under the Whomping Willow, Sirius asks me to live with him but the joy is short lived. Snape and Ron regain consciousness but at the same time Remus realizes the full moon and that he hasn't taken his potion. So now she has kept her head while being stared at by full grown werewolf who Sirius attacks. She held my hand the entire time, keeping me going. All I could think was that I had lost the one person who would love me all because of a damn rat we had the whole time. Horrible night lets skip to the part that highlights her brilliance. She had hid the whole Time Turner thing from me all year, I had no idea what Dumbledore was talking about when he said If you succeed tonight, more than one innocent life may be spared. Three turns, should do it, I think. I thought he had gone round the bend. Not Mione, she already had a plan forming. She got me through the whole night, a second time without being caught and helped me save the one person who loved me as much as my parents did. She even flew with me."
"I am sorry but I have to interrupt again," Sirius is putting his hand up like in class; "I loved Harry from birth it didn't matter that I hadn't seen him in 12 years. This little swot, she had a look on her face just like Lily used to do. Pure determination, if I had really wanted to get to Harry, I knew at that point in time, she would have most likely fought me with her wand and her hands if she had to. Because of that determination I knew he was loved. I knew she would stand by him that made it a little easier flying off on Buckbeak that night. No matter how much we fought when we were all at Grimmauld, she had my respect; she put her neck on the line that night for me, a man she didn't know at all, only because I was Harry's godfather." Rolling his eyes, "Now for a secret of mine, real quick then you can get back to your story, I must have asked about her one too many times because I got a lecture from Remus about she was underage and I was being inappropriate. Me? Inappropriate? Never," Causing all of the others to laugh at his expense, "I told him, she was too smart to be interested in a man like me and that shut him up for a bit because I think he actually thought I had thought about it."
"God that is so wrong!" Harry is gagging a little, "Back to the end of my story, after it was all said and done. We made it back to the hospital wing in time and Poppy made us stay the night, we were talking because neither of us could sleep. Between adrenaline and Ron's snoring, I thanked her for doing what she did and she turned and looked at me and said I love you Harry, I would do anything for you. I must have looked gob smacked because before I realized it she was climbing in my bed just to be with me. We lay there together just talking. I didn't really know what it meant to love someone, in any sense of the word; the Dursley's never showed me any kind of affection. I felt something for her I had never felt for anyone in my life. She might have been my first crush but I never thought about kissing her or anything like that. She loved me unconditionally and would do anything for me. I mean, even if she doesn't believe it I always thought she was pretty, we understood each other, she made me happy, she helped me regardless of how I treated her and she hugged and loved on me." Looking at his hands, "I soon realized that we were too close to ever be able to be anything but best friends. I realized I loved her like Sirius and Remus loved my dad. That I would die for her just like she would for me."
"Wow, she really has no fear when it comes to protecting her family does she?" Bill is questioning with a sense of awe in his voice.
"No she doesn't," Sirius is remembering, "Her posture and voice was that of someone much older and mature. Any sane person would have been scared of her all I wanted was the rat but looking back, she was a warrior even then."
"I would have died several times in school alone without her by my side. If I could do it all over again, the only thing I would change is how hard I was on her at times. I mean, if Ron was upset with her about something, I ignored her too. She still helped me with homework and research for whatever weird was happening that year no matter how bad I treated her."
So this is a good place for me to stop, I already have a large portion of the girls' conversation done. It won't take as long to get posted as this chapter did. I apologize for the length of time in between postings. I am trying to get back into writing some each day unfortunately my job I am on a computer all day so some days ( a lot of days lately) the last thing I want to do is be on a computer at home. I do appreciate the reviews, the follows and favorites. I don't own anything and as I have said before I write without a beta. Please let me know if you like or don't like part of the story, I want readers to stay interested. Thanks again.
