Hey, here is the seventh chapter. I noticed that people dosen't like my story so i decided to stop. Now only you can change my mind.
Tell me what you think anout this chapetr and then i'll tell you if i will stop or if i will go on.
Dpov
"Vika, so good to have you back in my arms" my little sister, my little flower. I love her so much.
"Yeah, i'm happy to see you too, big brother." Victoria look a lot like me, ony she is a girl. I always took care of her and she always wanted to be around me. Even if she have anothrt 2 sister, i was the one she took pices of advice from . She likes to call me her diary.
"So, Vicatoria, i want to introduce you to ..." Rose, i said in my mind, where was she, 2 second ago she was behind me.
"You mean that girl you kissed when i arived here?"
"No, i amlost kissed her... and the reason why i didn't is you." Vika rolled her eyes and than said:
"Is she your girlfriend" this is Vicktoria, my little flower with a big BIG mouth.
"No"
"Then why you wanted to kiss her"
"Because i like her. God, Victoria, you are so childish" she rolled again her eyes like she didn't care. "come, let's look for her and introduce you to everyone" i took her hand and entered in the living room.
"Hey, i'm Victoria, but you can call me Vick." Said Victoria. Everyone came and kissed her cheeks. They all were children and Victoria fit right into that group. Everyone was here beside Rose. I decided that i have to look for her. I knoked 2 times at her door without answer. When i knoked the thirth time she answerd
"Who is?"
'It's Dimitri, can i come in?" i asked first but i didn't wait for her answer so i entered.
"Get out. I didn't allowed you to came in." Her eyes were read. Was she crying? And if yes, why?
"Rose what's wrong. Why did you cried?" now she looked at me with so much hate in those beautiful eyes.
"Like you care" that was her easy answer that cut my heart in two. Of course i care about her. I care so much that i'll give my life for hers. Why was she so blind.?
"Hey, i care, i realy do. Now tell me what's wrong!" for a second she hesitated and when she was about to talk someone came into the room.
"Hey, so, this is Rose?" Yep, this was Victoria. She sat next to Rose in her bad. "I'm Victoria, you can call me Vika. Nice to meet you" she said smiling. "Why are you sad?" then my sister turn her head to me "what did you do to her Dimka?"
"Nothing, he did nothing. " Rose said looking at me.
"So, everyone here is so friendly. I like in here. There is a guy... i think his name is Adrian, he is so gorgeous."
"Adrian is her brother, Vika" but i bet she didn't heard me. She was too busy dreaming with eyes open.
"Has he a girlfriend? " she asked looking at Rose. She sat up away from me and further from Vika.
"you make me sick, people" she practically yelled at us.
"We what?" Victoria asked.
"You ask me if my brother has a girldfriend when your boyfriend is in the same room." She yelled again.
"My what? Do i have a boyfriend ? where is he ? Dimitri can you move, maybe he is behide you and i can't see him" wait did Rose think Victoria is my girlfriend? Why would she think that?... OMG she misunderstood all i had said to her? All the time i was talking about Victoria she thought was my girlfriend? God, i was such a fool.
"Vika, can u leave please, i need to talk to Rose alone."
"How you say big brother" she rolled her eyes and left.
"Brother?" now Rose's eyes were big and i could read shame on her face. "She is your sister?"
"Yeah, and sorry if i made you think thst she is my... God i can't even say that world about my sister. She is too young for such a thing"
"This is really embarrassing, sorry. And even if it was true i had no right to act like that. " now Rose was looking down at her hands. She was so sweet, so small and adorable. She really looked as beautiful as a rose, or even more.
"No Rose, i think this is sweet. You wanna know why?"
"I think that no matter what my answer is you are ganna tell me anyway, right" she smiled, God she smiled so beautiful.
"Hey look at me!" i took her face in my hands and forced her to look me in the eyes. I wanted her to know that i speak the true and that all i say its all i feel.
"No Dimitri, its embarrassing" she tryed to look away but i didn't let her. She had to listen to me and right now.
"no its not. You acted like you should when you are jelous. I was jelous too when Mason kissed you, but i acted diferent because i am diferent." She closed her eyes and a tear fall down her face. I quickly wiped it away.
"Dimitri, i.."
"Shhh, you didn't let me finish. I loved the way you acted because it tells me that you like me and... hey, look at me! I like you too from the very first day i saw you, i like you a lot." I was very nervous. What if i misunderstood her? What if she dosen't feel the same way? I will lose her forever.
"Then kiss me!" i frozen for a moment. Was she talking to me ? of course, Dimitri, there is no one in the room. She was talikng to me. She told me, ME to kiss her. And i did. I kissed her. It was a long and a very sweet kiss. I loved to feel her lips on mine. It felt right to kiss her, like she belong to me. I want her to be mine forever. She polled away first and i felt empty.
"Did i do something wrong?" i asked closing my eyes.
"Nope, it was perfect... a very perfect first kiss." She said smiling
"then i am very glad"
"Would you... ummm, would you like to be my last first kiss?" she was so sweet asking me that. Like a fragile flower. My flower , and i'll make sure i'll always take care of her.
"I'll love to" was my simple answer and i kissed her again. This time she wrapped her arms around my neck pulling me closer. This little act made me kneel front of her. I warpped my arms around her waist pulling her closer, if that could be posible.
"Would you like to be my girlfriend ? and the anly one?" i tryed to joke to make her smile. And i did.
"I thought you will never ask"
"is that an 'yes' or an 'no'?" she didn't answer but kissed me.
"is that the answer you wanted?"
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We walked into the living room trying to have some fun with our friend. There we found Christian looking desperately for something.
"Hey Christian, did you lost something?" i asked him
"No Dimitry, i'm just looking for the day of yesterday. Did you saw it?"
"i'm was just trying to help." Some of Christian's jokes were good but some i just couldn't handle.
"I'm looking for my keys. Adrian is out of cigarettes and i have to bring him downtown." Adrian didn't knew but i and Rose are the reason why he is out of cigarettes now.
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Hey tell me what you think and i want 5 review, please.
There let's say it's a happy ending. I have lot of things in my head for this story.
Tell me what you think and if i should go on.
I know it a short chapter but i wanted it to be all about Rose and Dimitri. And Rose has 17 years old in my story.
Have a good day.
