This is not chapter 3!
HEYYA! and welcome to the first review response! I know I said that it was going to be a Q and A, but no one is sending any Q's. so I'll just Do a review response!
First I am going to have a little help from my characters from my story, not all of them belong to me
Alright introducing Cara, Chell, GLaDOS, Wheatley, Curie, Spacey, Anger, Knowl, Atlas, and P-body!
*All walk out from nowhere*
Wheatley: Hey people!
*loud applause*
Alright! lets get to the reviews! First, the reviews from the revenge!
From ASHPoD67 ...
Ooh I like this! Especially the evil Wheatley part. Please keep writing! I will await the next chapter... Soon... Soon... MWAHAHAHAAHAHAHA!
Me: I guess we have an Evil Wheatley fan!
Wheatley: Thanks! *flexing his muscles* I try.
Me: thank you for the review, I was trying to lead on that Wheatley was the bad guy, so people wouldn't suspect GLaDOS!
Alright! next review!
From ASHPoD67 (I love regulars!)...
Hmm... I really like this concept, but they are really out of character. GLaDOS isn't nice. And that's actually not her fault. She cannot turn nice at all, given the fact she is corrupted. Unless when she got in the body it got rid of her corruption, it doesn't make sense. Or, maybe that's just how they are reeling her in to like it. I don't know, but it is a great story and update soon!
Me:that is an excellent observation! I was only leading on that she was nice so she wouldn't be suspected until I gave it out.
GLaDOS: Hey! I can be nice! What did I ever do to you guys?!
Chell: you tried to kill me on more than one occasion!
Wheatley: You forced me to hurt my love!
Cara: You almost killed me with Nero toxin!
GLaDOS: I get your point now.
Next review is from our regular, ASHPoD67...
Ahh... There's the GLaDOS I know and love!
GLaDOS: What?
Nothing! Anyway, I like this story more that you put some character in GLaDOS, so I will be awaiting the next chapter!
GLaDOS: I HAVE A FAN! THIS IS SO EXCITING! SEE GUYS! EVEN THE BAD GUYS HAVE FANS!
Next Review!
From spiderwriters:
Its got a good plot. I haven't seen one quite like this so yay originality! Its a bit rough though there are some tense errors and a missing word here in there but still readable. Despite the erros here and there you have yourself one author following your story. This is a good piece so keep it up. Oh and bonus points for the Labyrinth reference.
Me: Thank you! My sister was watching Labrynth when I was writing that chapter. And I've had that line stuck in my head since I first saw it!
GLaDOS: I really liked that chapter.
Wheatley: I Didn't! but I have to admit, It was pretty fun to do!
Cara: I agree.
Next review is from ASHPoD67...
Ah yes, the good ol' Stockholm Syndrome! Definition: When a person falls in love with their kidnapper! I really like stories that involve Stockholm Syndrome, it's not that common. I shall read more of the story right now!
Cara: In truth, It wasn't stockholm syndrome. i was really in love!
Me: Nothing much is said
Next!
From ASHPoD67...
Ah... This story is getting more interesting by the chapter! Where did Chell get that frying pan? Oh well. Just watch on your capitals and grammar and you'll be good!
Chell: I had gotten the frying pan from the first chapter. Remember?
Alright! next review!
From luna-404
Very well written, a few typos and needs a little bit more detail but over all it had me reading till the end filled with excitement! Can't wait to read the next chapter!
Me: Thanks! I put alot of thought to this series!
All: Hey!
Me: We ALL put alot of thought into this.
Next! From ASHPoD67...
Very good, misspellings here and there. But, do not use age as an excuse! How old do you think I am due to my writing? 15? Nope. 12. Never use age as an excuse, for misspellings. Of course, the only main messups are your capitolization. So keep up on that!
Anyway, this story is great and please review!
Next is from ASHPoD67...
Another great chapter. Not many misspellings, but you need to work on your capitalization. Remember, capitol every beginning of each sentence. Capitol at the beginning of every dialogue, and capitol for each name. Just work on that, and this story will be like, twice as good. Question. Who leaves their frying pan at the door? Pfft... I thought Chell was smart.
Anyway, this story is great, and update soon!
Me: Thanks for the tip! I'll try to remember that!
Chell: Hey! It's not my fault! I had too many things on my mind! Like finally seeing my daughter again! And being sided with the moron!
Wheatley: Ey! Don't call me a moron! I'm not THAT stupid!
GLaDOS: Ppff! Says the guy that was created to make me stupid!
Wheatley: Could everyone stop picking on me!
Me: Okay! Okay! Let's move on!
Next is from fidofia...
Nice chapter. Less misspellings than the other chapters. Oooh suspense! I'm on the edge of my beanbag :P.
Me: Yay! thanks for noticing! I love it when fans notice My corrections!
Next! from a guest!
This is amazing
Me: Thanks!
GLaDOS: We try our best to get that reaction!
Chell: We didn't really think about the idea, just Cara and Meg.
Me: Don't say my name!
Chell: It's not like I'm saying your last name, or your exact coordinates!
GLaDOS: I'm surprised you actually knew that word!
Chell: I'm not the moron here!
Wheatley: again with the moron thing!
Me: Cut the chit-chat!
Next, two reviews from TaDOS1905
Just curious as to how Chell the fryingpan in the first place...
then
HOW LONG TILL FACE DOWN!
Me: First LOVE your name!
Chell: I second that!
Wheatley: I third that!
GLaDOS: I'm indifferent about it...
Cara: I fourth that!
GlaDOS: AW! come on Cara! What did I do to you?!
Cara: need I answer that? we already went over this!
Me: Alright! We have finished with "the Revenge"'s reviews! on with "Face Down"'s Reviews!
from sharpienation
Oh dear. Please do post more
BTW I very much enjoyed the last story.
Me:Aw, shucks! Thank you! And don't worry, we'll update soon!
Next from ASHPoD67...
*Reads* Great Chapter! A little shortish, at least it seemed, but still very good. Don't know why GLaDOS would suddenly be nice, but meh. And why do I get the feeling next chapter will have Rick hitting on Cara?
Anyway, this is a great story and please update soon!+
Me: Thankya!
Rick: Yep! that was correct!
Anger: you touch her I kill you!
Wheatley: Both of you! stop it!
Cara: thank you, Wheatley.
Wheatley: anyways! I had her first!
Chell: Your wrong about that! That was me.
GLaDOS: I had her first, i was the one who cloned her!
Me: yes, but I thought of her and created her.
Cara: Oh, brother...
Me: I thank all of you for reading this. and hopefully it will give me more ideas if you review some! If I get inspired by one of your reviews, I'll give you credit! Thats it for now! and remember, when life gives you lemons...
All: DON'T MAKE LEMONADE!