Hey This is the Second revised chapter of my first story guys let me know what you think.

Disclaimer: I dont own Naruto or anything not my idea.

5 years after the Incident

Inside a secret location

"To think that the demon is graduating today?!"

"We must have him killed!"

"There must be some way to cripple it!"

"ENOUGH!"

The leader glared out at his co-conspirators. "The boy is not to be touched. Have you not considered his role in any plans I might have made? He will be dealt with when his time comes, no sooner, no later."

One of the men disagreed and spoke out, " and why should we listen to you?! Your plans trump our own? How about I just handle the demon myself-URK!"

The man could not finish his sentence as his throat had been slit by the anbu that appeared behind him.

"What the hell is wrong with you?! Why did you kill him?"

The others stared at the cooling corpse as the leader glared back at them.

"You will be silent. I allow you in on what plans you do know on a whim. Do not mistake my generosity for any type of need. My plans would unfold with or without you, as you can see. Now I won't say it again. The boy is to be left alone. Kakashi is the perfect teacher for my plans. I guarantee it..."

The group dispersed as a cold wind blew through Konoha...

MEANWHILE, AT THE BELL TEST

"NARUTO LOOK OUT!" Yelled Sakura to help naruto. She screamed because Kakashi had just appeared behind him with his hands already ready to perform a jutsu. While she hated the loser, she didn't want him dead!

And then the weirdest thing happened, naruto disappeared!

Kakashi was confused. He had expected naruto to be exactly like his file had said, loud, obnoxious, and rash. He expected a loser, someone that was as cocky as Obito without any of the strength he proclaimed to have. What he got was a genin who WILL explain exactly where he learned to have anbu level stealth. It was only because he had extreme skill in tracking that he even knew where naruto was! " Now naruto i believe the first lesson should be taijutsu, you seem to have stealth down."

And suddenly naruto was in front of him. He looked at Kakashi with a smirk that promised pain. "So Kakashi, you want me to fight you in hand to hand combat? You seem a little relaxed for that!" Kakashi sighed and realized that naruto was cocky enough to taunt him. He will learn that a jonin is too strong for him. " Don't mind me Naruto you aren't a threat." and Kakashi proceeded to take out his book and began to read. Naruto looked stunned at Kakashi and waited for the trap he was sure going to come. "Well don't just stand there Naruto your running out of time for me to decide you are able to become a genin..." And Naruto's face slowly turned from stunned to anger. And then a smirk, which became a full blown grin spread across his face. But it was different. It was a grin that promised whomever it was aimed at an extreme amount of pain. " You will not underestimate me again, Jonin, or you will find yourself without an arm to hold your book."

As Naruto finished speaking his fist shot out with lightning fast speed and Kakashi had to use every bit of skill to dodge it. As he looked up at Naruto finally, he could see the specks of madness within those blue eyes, and he realized that he may be in a bit of trouble.

Then he spoke in a voice that chilled Kakashi to his bones, " You disgust me! You walk around the village, flaunting your porn in front of those who can't stop you, treating those around you with no respect at all! Oh I know you Jonin Kakashi, and you will learn to Suffer as I have Suffered!"

Kakashi was now officially creeped out. " Naruto I don't know what the he'll is wrong with you, but I assure you I won't be suffering anything today!"

Naruto rushed in at low Jonin level speeds and this again stunned Kakashi. How did the dead last gain skill like that?!

He blocked a punch, and instantly regret it. It felt like a sledgehammer had hit his arm and he knew it was broken. He screamed out in pain, " AAAAAAAARGH!" and jumped back in an attempt to get space to no avail. The boy simply kept coming and as he dodged a kick he felt his jacket rip, from what seemed to be a blade made out of pure chakra?! What the hell is this kid? "I don't know where you learned these skills but," He raised his headband and issued a proper warning. " Naruto I'm about to get serious with you!"

Naruto then appeared in the middle of the field. "Oh Kakashi, you Poor, Deluded, Fool. You want to get serious?! How about we talk about that eye of yours that you as good as stole from your dying teammate! You feed off the power of others, leeching off the fourth homage in order to gain fame, stealing the eye of your teammate and using it to steal from every minus you fight! What suffering have you felt Kakashi?! When have you felt the pain of loss, when have you truly felt the rage that the desire for vengeance brings?!"

And then he flared his chakra.

Kakashi, who had been watching carefully, slowly growing more enraged, screamed out in agony as his eye could not handle the brightness of his chakra, and then he was kicked in the stomach, shattering his ribs. If that wasn't enough, before he could fly back from the force of the blow, Naruto grabbed his hair and began raining down punches to his face and torso. Despite his size, naruto managed to shatter his collar bone, his nose, his jaw and caved in his eye socket, along with shattering his shoulder blades. As naruto dropped his broken and beaten body onto the ground, Kakashi could not even gather the energy to get up. He was for all purposes, blind, and simply breathing caused agony to spike through his body.

But Naruto wasnt finished.

He grabbed Kakashi's ankle and dragged him to the nearest tree. Kakashi was simply too weak to stop him so attempted to stick his body to the ground with chakra. Bad move. Naruto simply used chakra to enhance his strength and began to crush the bones in his ankle, breaking his focus.

As naruto got to the tree he began to speak once more while removing objects from his bag.

" you are a leech Kakashi, a bothersome bug that sucks on the life of the people around you. And why? Because you don't value the gift you were given, the gift of life!"

Naruto removed a kunai and lifted Kakashi to the side of the tree.

THWACK! THWACK! THWACK!

"ARGHHH!"

Three times Naruto pounded the kunai into the wood of the tree, through the flesh of his right arm. He then added something to the kunai but Kakashi was in too much agony to notice.

As Naruto began securing something over Kakashi's sharingan, he began speaking once more.

"You see Kakashi, people like you, people who take life for granted, they need to be educated. People like you suck the life of those around you, and drag those down with you. Your father, an honorable man, killed himself because you declared him trash for ignoring the mission. Your teammate, obito, was left to die by a teammate who was too arrogant to help those around him. Your sensei, the fourth homage, sacrificed himself to save this pathetic village from destruction. You threw away these sacrifices and wasted twelve years of your life living what could have been. Well now you get to live in the now."

Naruto stepped back and began pacing with a smirk on his face.

"Your eye has been covered in a low powered exploding note. This note is rigged to your right hand. The same hand that has been impaled with a kunai that I have also wrapped an exploding note around. You cannot remove the wire as that will detonate both notes and you will die from blood loss. You cannot cut the wire as the same will happen. Now you have a choice Kakashi. You can either sacrifice your hand, leaving you unable to use the very jutsu that you worked so hard to steal, or you can lose your sharingan, the very tool you use to steal the jutsu you use. Make your decision Kakashi. You will now suffer the way so many before you have. You will feel the pain of loss, and should you live through this, you will thank me for the gift of life. Yank your right hand to sacrifice your eye, and yank your face to the left to sacrifice your hand. "

"You have thirty seconds."

I'm gonna cut it off here, I don't actually know how to make a poll, so I guess just post in your review, whether you'd like him to lose his hand, arm, or be stubborn and die. Three different stories folks, lemme know whatchu think of the new chapter and the plot twist. Thanks