kidi: hey everyone! i got some new friends i would like you to meet! here are-

Vinc: Vinc! "Wanna go out with me?"

Mathi: Mathi! Vinc you-

Maxin: Maxin! No way Vinc!

Ine: Ine! Already have a bf!

Lotte: Lotte!

Lis: Lis!

Phea: Phea!

Sabri: Sabri!

Zoe: Zoe!

Many: Many!

Ysatis: Ysatis

Pata: *wishpers to kidi* whey did you let ysaatis here ?

kidi: *whispers back at pata* i don't know

kidi: anyway, on with the story!

Disclaimer: hey you forgot me!

kidi: oh yeah , you ya thing Disc!

Disclaimer: Kidi doesn't own anything besides Festiny, Destiny and Fate in the story!

Kidi,Pata: ON the with the story!

Fine the eldest twin is going to die in a cruell day, just like her mother..

The one Fine want to marry has to be brave enough, to die with her in the burning palace. Or... could they change the're own destiny?

"Fine!" Fine ran away...

Fine's pov

i ran away, i may seem brave but...
I'm a coward... I always run away of things like this...

I always run away... I don't know where i'm going, i just ran... Until i bumped into a tree... "Ouche! that hurts..!" i said while rubbing my nose... I noticed somehting about this tree... It looked familiar.
Then i looked at this old path, it also looked realy familair..
I was scared but my curiosity won over me. I followed the path, allone... Well that's what i tough...
I followed the path until i was infornt of an old dusty gate. It was closed, but i tool a step forward. And the gate opend, i was startled.
But got tough the gate, i looked a bit around.
It looks like this was a village. But, when i was half trough the village.. I saw it.. The burned houses, ash.. And the place where once a palace stood.
Then , i saw something sticking out in the ask, i grabbed it. It was an old pink doll.
On the back of the doll was a name written, i looked closer.. It was my name.. This doll was mine, wait.. so this means this was the place where...
But i tought it was there in our palace and not here... I was about to go back home until something shiney caught my eye.. I walked closer by,i wiped the ask away... It was an old buncker... (Kidi: how do you call that basement thingy where poeple hid?)

i pulled it , over... "arggh" It wont' open, again... "aaargghh!" CLICK! "YES! uh-? ... OW!" i fell on my butt.. But it finally opend! There where old wooden stairs, i got of the stairs... Dark... Until a candel lighten up, then the others followed.. So i followed the candels, at the end of the candels way was on old big door. I pushed it open, won't work.
So i pulled it over, but no use.. It won't open, but then i saw a keylock.
"Wait i don't have a key with me. aargh! Great how am i gonna open this?!" i slaped myself with the doll "Ouche!" i said while rubbing my red colord was something hard in the doll. I opend the back of the doll, there was a key in it.
I looked at the key then the keylock, i did that some 3-4 times. Then i put the key in the keylock.
It opend! But it was dark inside.. I took a step forward.. Slowly.. I took another step forward but then- BAM! "AAHH" The door behind me closed!
I heard things, things falling down, whispers of poeple! The light turned on , thank goodness!- "AWW!" i heard, i turned to the direction the scream came from. It was a little girl, about 8 years old i think?
She had black hair and purple eyes, she was wearing an ripped old white dress. But the girl din't looked like she was injured or something. "
Are.. You alright?" i asked... She was startled, she looked she at me. "You... Can see me?"
"What kind of question is that? Ofcourse i can see you!" i said to her. She looked at me as if i was some kind of god. "Umm.. Why are you looking at me like that?" I asked her..
"Onee-chan!" She cried out and hugged me..
"Huh?! Wa?- Onee-chan?! What?!" first this old palace , then the key and now this little girl? Wait who is she?
"Sorry, you just looked like my older sister.. When she was younger.. And my name is Festiny!"
"Festiny, huh? That's a rare name, but it's really pretty"
"You think so?! Nobody said that to me! They tought i was a wicth" She said and hugged me again.
"a wicth?" i asked while petting her.. And also sat in a couch. "Yeah.." She said, then climbed trying to sit on my lap. I smiled, i pulled her so she can sit on my lap.
"Why, did they called you a witch?" "I can see the future... I-i also tried to help a young woman... i told her that she was going to die in a burning palace.." ... Young woman? Burning palace? Could she be-?
"Wait wasn't the one who said to her, an elder woman?"
"I transformed myself into an elder woman..." she said while crying... I petted her..
"-Ine!" i heard.. "-Ine!" i heard again... "-Ne are you here?!" Rein? Shade? Bright? "Sorry Festiny , i have to go. I'm going to visit you some time. Bye." i gave her a kiss on the cheeck..

Normal pov

"Rein!" said the red haired girl... As she runned toward her friends.. They walked back to the palace, Fine told them everything.. But not about Festiny, she kept Festiny a secret from them...

Meanwhile with Festiny..

The little girl was gone, instead there stood a girl with long wavy hair and bloody red eyes... The girl looked at the direction where Fine and the others where...
"Fine, that girl was not the one who told you're mother that... It was me.." She said as she disapaired in thin air..


hey , imma in a hurry so what do you think ?

and thanks everyone who reviewed at my stories so far, i really love uuu! :D

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