Hello hello! Wrote this as it just came to mind. Though it was briefly inspired by the title "3 words 8 letters and I'm yours". Here it is (short, but in my bragging and can-never-judge-if-own-work-is-good-or-not opinion, quite good):
Suddenly the door burst open and in stepped a furios-looking Erin, showing teeth and breathing heavily. Only Vlad was there.
"Say it!" she screamed, "Say it!"
Vlad walked over to her, though keeping a bit of distance.
"Say what Erin?" he asked.
Then came an answer he hadn't expected.
"Say that you hate me!" she shrieked, a crimson red briefly flashing her eyes. "Say it!"
He was confused, his mind swirling with thoughts. Why had she come?
"For devil's sake" she was shaking now and she reached out and pushed him, "SAY IT!"
Then he saw it, the tears forming in the edge of her eye, the lips of hers struggling against it though still forming a sob. It escaped her mouth and she looked at Vlad, hunched over, though still anger showed. "SAY IT!"
He took a step and hugged her, "I love you."
Erin leaned down her head at his neck and Vlad felt tears dripping onto his skin.
"He left" she said through the sobs, "And said he hated me. You never said that."
She never put her arms around him, but he kept his around her, the sobbing at his neck he let be. "And I never will."
What d'ya think? Was it good or was it bad? Reviews will be appreciated... so please review, hehe?
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