To say the least I couldn't wait until Monday to update, so I put it up today, and I'm damn proud about it! Tell me what you think?!


Madeline struggles, tears began to fall from her eyes. She's scared of what Eris is doing to her. She doesn't want to become the queen of discord!

"Through the golden apple of chaos..." The queen chants a black shadow begins to from around the duo, in the black mass sparkles also surround. "Let me hear the screams of the damaged, let there song of misery reach us"

The blondes head snapped up to the ceiling she could hear them. The screams of the dead and suffering people, it's so loud and clear. Her heart that was racing stops, as she continues to hear them. They beg for mercy and forgiveness but Madeline knows they will longer get that, that they will only get the bitter sweet death. "Make it stop..." Her voice is low barely audio able to the human ear.

The queen of discord heard her, the sly hidden smirk grows until visible. "She now bites the forbidden fruit oh! Golden apple of discord come to me!" A perfect sparking gold apple appears from the black mass that surrounds us. From the black mass a hand comes out, it made from the black shadow. It hold the apple next to discord. "Open your mouth"

Her violet eyes widened she shakes her head quickly. "Please don't make this harder than it needs to be" again she shakes her head. "Alright then have it your way!"

Many hands from the surrounding mass come out and grab Madeline two open her mouth open, she's once struggling to be let go. The hand that holds the apple inches closer to her. Madeline shuts her eyes closed this is the end of her and she knew it for a fact. The apple hits her upper teeth only a small piece falls into her mouth. The hands close her mouth and make her chew the apple. The golden apple had a sweet flavor to it, but it was a forbidden bitter sweet fruit.

A gold light over takes Madeline it shines brightly, somewhat blinding Eris. "Take her away with your sweet ness. Let her become one with you, make her the new queen of discord..." The light glows brighter and brighter.

The screams that Madeline heard slowly die off. She feels herself be covered in wax, what was going on? Her heart still doesn't skip a beat, will it ever pound again?

Even with that bright golden light the light becomes captured by black power snakes taking away the golden color. They go through her whole body carving, symbols onto every exploded skin.

Eris holds her down and watches as the snake bite, carve, and burn the young child. Eris had made a sound prof cloud around them...the black mass. As Madeline screams and begs to be let go, to stop the snakes from killing her no one would hear her. Eris's eyes turn as black as coal, as she watches glee floods through her, it was fun seeing others In pain, Madeline would soon feel the same. She could see that Madeline's marks are red and burning her skin making them permanent forever.

The three snakes that in-bedded the symbols stop. "Every full moon maddie your marks will come back you will feel the pain as you did on this day. The beautiful day indeed the day you child became the new queen of discord. Though don't worry I did pity you for a bit, you won't get all my powers until your 15th birthday, every full moon you will slowly get more and more power..." The snakes looked at her darkly...deadly "my time is up..."

Madeline watches in horror as the three black snakes of dust go and eat up the ex-queen of discord. Eris doesn't scream she just laughs and laughs. She doesn't bleed either, no mess was made in the end all that was left was a small mount of black power.

Madeline looks at her body symbols are carved and they are glowing red. Her body hurts so much the pain is unbearable. It's terrible she has never felt that much pain before. She can no longer cry anymore from the pain. Her body gives away and she falls on the bed, the impact makes her scream, not that loud that she would wake up the house hold, but loud enough to make her look around in horror.

Every full moon, of every mouth of every year she would feel this pain. The pain of discord. The curse of chaos. Madeline only being five she knew that she was forever going to be the queen of discord...chaos would come with her around...

Wouldn't it?

She closed her violet eyes, sleep took on her cradling her speaking words of comfort.

The mount I black dust turned into a small snake. Slithering up it creeped Into Madeline's right eye, the snake went into her blood stream and turned it black...black as can be...forever to be discord.