The End of All

by A Renegade Time Lord

This is a continuation of "Luna, My Love", another piece of fiction I have up, albeit twisted and dark. The fighting between Luna's New Lunar Republic and Celestia's Solar Empire has long since grown to it's apex. And now, everything is dying or has died. Everything. This is a recount of the last battle from Celestia's perspective. And what happens after the fact. Please review!

2. Not a chapter

I don't usually do this, especially since this is a finished story, but I feel rather compelled to do so now. This is a response to an anonymous review.

some guy:this fic is strange at the very least. the wrighter tryed to hard to make every death sad and in the end didnt make it sad at all. the wrighter had given an innaproprit job for many of the main six for exsample fluttershy as a war stratagist is just wrong considering she wouldend evan hurt a fly indirectly i just cant see her sending ponys to kill other ponys. the last thing is this ehoc pony (im not looking at his name so sorry if i miss spell it) this is a pony i have never herd of and you wright of him as an over powerd god and celestias best friend. i didnt like the wrighting nor how easy celestia killed luna it was a sloppy pice of work and i could be better if you spend more time on it and get rid of this op god like pony. lots of love 3 from some guy

First off, I would take you a bit more seriously if your spelling and grammar were, you know, legible.

Second, if you are going to unload that much hate on it, at least leave your pen name, or, if you don't have one, something other than "some guy". Leave that much burnin', don't say it from behind the shield of anonymity.

Third, it was a world war. If you aren't fighting, you may very well be doing an inappropriate job. Fluttershy's job, for example? You've clearly never heard of Slaughtershy or at the very least the jokes about her shed. (They are quite a piece of work, in my opinion.) They are not the same, my Fluttershy and Slaughtershy, but they do share at least one parallel.

Fourth, this is an extension/alternate ending to one of my other stories; if you had read that, you'd know to whom I refer when I included Enoch. Yes, you did spell it wrong. (SPOILER.)And he is hardly over-powered, simply very intelligent, and Luna's husband.(SPOILER) During Luna's... banishment, he became Celestia's best friend, nothing more. Just a friend. You want an over-powered god, go for Cthulhu/Nightmare Moon hybrids.

Fifth, I don't like how Celestia killed Luna either (I am a Lunatic, a member of the New Lunar Republic, devoted to Luna and tearing the Solar Tyrant from her throne.), but that was the most feasible ending I had thought of at the time. And when I had thought of other endings to this, I had already long-since published it, and received good reviews on it, so I thought I should leave it as it is.

Lots of love 3, A Renegade Time Lord

P.S. Response, some guy? Send me some mail with a bucking return address!