Ollo! My name is Lily Zheng and I am this person's best friend. We've been sharing an account for a while so I thought I would help assist by editing and adding a character in her fanfic.

I could also be called Pika,

My accounts

GoldPikaCandy

You might know me there. I also am working with Hannah on Assassins break, Spies put it back Together. I do May's POV in that one. SO in this one I am adding a character which I control. You will find out who she is in the end but try to guess now. So this first paragraph and some of my editing on Dawn's crew is here.

A brunette laid snug in her bedroom. From the windows the sun shone on her eyes. She yawned and blinked rapidly at the light. With the drowsiness rolling off of her like fur she felt as limp as ever. She sighed stretching her sun-kissed arms toward the ceiling. A lone tear dropped off the dusty pale pink cheeks of her cheekbones. She held on to a small golden frame with a picture of a girl with blue hair.

"Good morning, Dawn," She said wiping away the tear. She spread her white sheets apart and swung her legs defiantly over the side of the bed. Taking notice to her closet she managed to grab a crimson tank-top, a red plaid jacket, and blue designer jeans. "Tsk, tsk, perfect!" She muttered slipping it on quickly.

"Keyboard is locked," Interrupted her custom-made cellphone. She turned around grabbing the cellphone unlocking it and looked at the time. 6:45, she shook her head debating over taking a quick walk outside. She decided on taking a walk outside seeing that the weather was beautiful. She quickly brushed her teeth and scrubbed her face.

"Hello, sweetheart," A woman with light brown curls greeted cheerfully. Her marine eyes sighing at the look of her daughter's face when she saw the cookies. "Fresh out of the oven, hun. Take one before your father and brother eat it all."

"Yeah, mum!" She grinned stuffing cookie chunks in her mouth. "Delish!" The mother sighed going back to her cooking shows.

"Today, on the news! Around the area of Florida there has been strange sightings of cannibals or men in pink ugly suits. Felicia, an grandmother of four grandchildren managed to survive and to tell us this tale." The news-castor replied with a serious expression on his face. The camera zoomed in on an old lady drained of color. Her eyes were dark red and her face was frail with no sanity left.

Suddenly the old lady known as Felicia grabbed the old mic as if it was the most holy thing left. "You can't escape now, they're everywhere! In your house, your toilet, your room, we're all gonna die," In the background you can see two brawn security guys removing her from the seat. "Trust me! The government.."

"Sadly nobody has transmitted of what they have seen." The news-castor replied as if the lady on the set was no problem. "Lately a school in Orlando, Florida has been wiped out of humans. Nobody knows where they have been and you may be next! So out on the news, AHHHH!" Suddenly the television sent an electrical shock and died down. The brunette frowned deep in thought.

Her mother turned around questioning at the television set. "Orlando, Florida," She replied tapping her chin repeatedly. "Isn't that where-"

The brunette nodded her eyes shining a dangerous blue. "Dawn is? Yes." She retorted her voice hinted with concern. "I'm going to call her."

The mother glanced at the television and shook her head. "Go ahead, dear. I'm going to call your father and see if he can fix this." The brunette nodded heading outside. The California sun hit her squarely in the eyes.

... bleep

... bleep

... bleep

... Hey! This is Dawn! I'm not here right now but if you leave a message

I'll get back to you as soon as possible. beep!

Sigh. "Dawn! Where are you? Call me!" The brunette shrieked into the cell. Her face nearly drained of it's usual tan glow. A bunch of what ifs stormed her mind. What was this catastrophe? Was her best friend going to be alright? Her eyebrows scrunched together deep in thought. Her legs as if in a trance headed toward the evergreen park where she spent most of her mornings.

She rubbed her sore thumbs together while sitting on the nearest bench. The fresh California air wavered in and out her nose. Something wasn't right about the air this time. The brunette shook out of her thoughts.

"Excuse me," She turned around facing the same old lady from the television. Except that this time Felicia was layered with flowery clothes. You couldn't even see her face except for two beady red eyes.

The brunette nearly jumped in shock at the old frail lady that was now standing in front of her. "Uh, hi?" She edged away from Felicia with a look of utter bewilderment. She knew that the T.V station wasn't that far from here but how did Felicia get here?

"Now, now dear. Won't you help me sit down?" Felicia asked her voice eerily dark and husky. The brunette didn't know what to do but being kind she shrugged her shoulders and helped the old Felicia.

"What do you mean it's gone?" Gina nearly screeched in frustration. Her dark emerald irises narrowed into dark slits at the assistant.

"W-well, we put it right here." The assistant twitched nervously. Her face was drawn and stressed in contrast to Gina's lively and beautiful face. She motioned quickly to an empty box. "But it just went poof!''

"Yeah, you're gonna go poof if you don't find it." Gina's voice corresponded. Her poker face twitching at the annoying scared look of her assistant.

"Y-yeah. O-okay. We'll find it."The assistant didn't know what was in that box but it must have been very important. But the thought made her want to look in it.

"Good. Don't disappoint me." She said and stalked off. Her high heels tapping to the ground with each confident step. The assistant sighed and held her breath until after Gina left the room.

Gina strode into the white house and went to the place were she left Jack. Unbeknownst to Jack but Gina has upgraded the zombies. Gina sighed finding the closet where she left Jack . When she looked at Jack she gasped in horror.

It wasn't like she meant to kill her father, but he had gone far too long. Seeing him lay there dead sort of gave Gina the chills. It also gave her the feeling of having control over people's lives. Looking at her dad she spat on him.

"I never liked what you did. Here comes a new dawn, new creative ways to kill," Gina leered. "Guess what, dad? I upgraded your so-called zombies. Do you really think I was all that dumb? Now these zombies are able to transform, talk, and endure longer. I'll kill the human race." She snickered kicking Jack for good measure.

"I'll create a whole new world just for Mary and I."

"Ahhhh!" The brunette grimaced. Her sapphire eyes blinked rapidly at the frail woman. 'I swear her eyes went cross-eyed.'

"What is it, dear?" Felicia asked in her husky voice. The brunette widened her eyes as Felicia stood up. The old woman quickly shedded her flowery clothing to reveal an ugly blue purplish skin. The brunette felt like vomiting when looking at it.

"Y-You're, y-you're," She stuttered reaching into her pocket to see if she had a weapon. 'I need to escape.'

"A zombie?"

"Yes." The brunette cried dashing off. Suddenly a blue hand gripped her arm and held her in place. The brunette squirmed in panic.

"What a pretty face," Felicia whispered hungrily. The brunette with her other hand reached into her pocket to feel anything. An idea shot through her as she grabbed it and lifted it into Felicia's eyes.

"Ahhhhhh!" She screamed and flashed her custom-made cellphone into Felicia's eyes. Felicia blinked at the light and was caught off guard. The brunette made a run for it.

Gasp. Paul clutched his chest and shook heavily. Dear God. Please let her be asleep and too airheaded to notice. Slowly his steel eyes locked on the sleeping beauty. He let out a breath in relief.

Paul scanned his surroundings. The clock read, 4:32 P.M. "Wake up." He prodded. His lip was now an annoyed twitch.

"W-wha?" The blunette gasped in surprise and struck a blow. Paul grimaced impatiently as he caught her hand before he was about to be hit. "Just a few more minutes Paulie" She yawned when she found an odd plum-haired boy waking her up. She assumed it was Paul, well hoped it was.

"Get up now, troublesome!" He uttered again. This time he glared at her and said her nickname.

"Fine!" She spat. She yawned and spread her arms. She glanced at the others in her killing squad. "Should we wake them up?"

"Probably," He answered and was about to wake the others up.

"Wait!" Dawn exclaimed and cocked her head in interest. "I hear something."

Paul stayed silent until Dawn let out a breath in frustration. "What did you hear?"

"Nothing." Dawn sighed and stepped out of her bed. "We should probably wake the others."

"We're awake." The group in the other room chimed. Dawn blushed in embarrassment.

"What's all the commotion?" Shiyoku asked sleepily. Apparently the whole group was awake and ready to rumble.

"Okay, while you guys get some breakfast or something-"

"Dinner." Shiyoku said solmenly.

"Okay dinner! Paulie and I will copy this formula and-"

"Whoa, whoa! I'm not working with you! I'm going with Shiyoku and the rest."

"Fine, who wants to help?"

"I will." Misa said."Okay." Dawn replied faking a smile at the teacher.

"And guys!" She said. "Go get some hotel food. I wanna save what we have for a emergency."

"Fine." Paul mumbled.

After the rest of them left, Only Jack, Misa, and Dawn remained.

"What can I do?" Jack asked.

"What do you want to do?" Misa asked.

"Take, a long shower!" He chirped.

"Okay. C'mon Misa. Grab some pens and that hotel paper." Dawn said.

"Blue or green?" Misa asked."I don't care. Surprise me!"

She came back with two blue pens and a pad of hotel paper.

"Let's start!" No sooner than when they started, Paul came and the gang came in.

"T-they're everywhere!"

"My dear, army!" Gina announced pleasantly at her freakish army. "Do you value your lives."

"Yesssss!" Hissed the crowd of bluish people. Gina smirked at her perfection.

"She will kill us all! She is a monstrosity! Kill her and bring me her watch!"

"Yesss!"

"What do you mean their everywhere?" Dawn asked, not looking away from her paper.

"Zombies. Their new and definitely improved. Harder to kill." He breathed, locking the door once everyone was in.

"Keep on writing." Shiyoku urged.

"Okay." Dawn sighed.

"Okay. how far are you?" Shiyoku asked. Dawn held up her not even half finished paper.

"Done!" Misa said. Holding up 5 copies.

"How'd you do that? Each one is exact!" Raye said.

"I took a forging class from this one cute guy I met." She giggled.

"Make more!" Paul urged.

"Okay. Okay." she said.

After 10 minutes, Misa came up with 7 more.

"Give everyone one. Now copy this." Dawn said.

"But that's not even copied corectly." Raye pointed out.

"Exactly." She smirked..

How'd you think? You can tell some of the parts were done by me because of the description. I hope this is alright. Tata!