I apologize, this isn't a new chapter. It seems to me that I'm a terrible writer with bad plot line, use of characters, and grammar/spelling/punctuation. This entire chapter is just a reply to all the complaints I got overnight.

This mysterious person spent 5 comments writing 56 complains about all the wrongs i have written in the first 5 chapters of this story. It ticked me off pretty well. I don't write this so you guys can criticize it badly. I just write this to get it out of my head. I don't need to continue writing, because I do have other things I can be doing. So, in those complaints I've noticed some things that you guys might have been curious about too, so that's why i created this note, so you guys can see if any of them answer your questions.

I do not take bed reviews kindly, and I'm sorry if I turn out to be a little rude and jerky in this note. My bad. I also usually blow off bad reviews and comments about my stories, and just leave them alone, but this one really ticked me off. So here you go.

You haven't read all of the story, because it isn't finished. You have no idea what I'm planning on doing.

How would you know about Water Tribe laws? It said nothing in the show, and plenty of other people are making up laws. It's the whole point of a fanfiction?

This is a Zutara story, she's going to be with Zuko. Not Aang. Telling her father that his girlfriend is evil isn't something he wants to hear from his daughter. He most likely wouldn't believe her.

What the heck does "chunky writing" even mean? It's my story I'll do what I want.

The difference between those two "Would you rather" is just a simple capitalization mistake, maybe that's how it was written, who cares? I type fast and it doesn't auto correct quotations.

He's the Avatar, he's moving around a lot, fufilling his Avatar duties. So what if I want Katara to stay with Zuko instead? There's nothing wrong with that!

In my story, Mai does like Zuko, but she doesn't love him like in the show. I sent her to Omashu to be with her family. And in case you haven't noticed, Mai and Zuko break up later. Canon-fail.

Ty Lee visits the circus to be rejoined with her friends there only for a short while, I never said it was permanent. In my story Hakoda does have a girlfriend, and Katara is in the same position as Princess Yue, both their father's are the chief of their tribe. That makes them both princesses.

I don't care if Katara is OOC, this is my fictional story.

I don't have any friends for your information, it's just me and only me.

Okay, my bad. My computer probably thought I was typing that and auto corrected it. I don't reread my chapter, I just post it.

Sakida is my OC, isn't supposed to look pretty, she has her own plans that you don't need to worry about and will probably find out in later chapters.

The way Hakoda and Sakida get together will be found out in later chapters, wait and keep reading before you judge.

Hakoda doesn't know much about the Freedom Fighters, so that whole thing was a lie to get Katara to stay in the Fire Nation.

I have no idea what living abroad has to do with my story.

My bad I said that Katara bloodbent Sokka and Aang. I had no idea you liked to point out the smallest, pointless and most used mistake there is.

If Katara fought back then she would have hurt Sakida, which Hakoda wouldn't take to kindly to.

You're going to criticize that? Katara being a damsel in distress?

Because it takes away all of my ideas if I put the Yu Dao thing. I don't want that.

That's your problem, go read another story if you want more Mai.

So Toph got a little angry? Oops?

Melodramatic. Okay. My bad?

OOC is kind of part of a fictional FANFICTION.

At least she didn't rat anyone out.

You said it yourself, Aang is over protective and he got upset that Zuko didn't stop the attack.

My story, my fights, my plot. Not yours.

She was upset that Aang lashed out on Zuko. I didn't know that was so wrong.

Some people can see Aang as overprotective too, it's not just Katara

Sorry for my grammar and spelling. I'm not publishing this.

Sinks? There are plenty of ships that are being written all over fanfiction and you choose to criticize mine?

Uhh, that complaint was pretty stupid considering everybody giggles.

I didn't want it to change so fast, but I wanted to flip from person to person.

Mai can't learn chi-blocking as another useful skill to have?

Gunna, Gunna, Gunna. I'm gunna blow up because of the amount of complaints you wrote about a few chapters.

Ha. Ha. Ha. I'm chuckling and I'm embarrassed at all the flames you posted about my apparent failure.

She ran out of water. Big deal.

I decided to stop changing the P.O.V's and just stuck to the narrator.

Plenty of other fanfics have christmas in their stories, what makes mine any different?

I had writer's block. Is that a crime for why I time changed?

Good for my punctuation. It's a lot better than most people.

Go ahead, I've been all over the world, go ahead and find all of my english teachers. I, unfortunately don't have the time.

Just because they spent a lot of time together, doesn't mean Zuko told Katara about his mother.

She only called herself what she believed, she doesn't believe that she's a princess, but she is.

He was trying to lighten the mood.

It's not like the whole world knows what it is! Because they don't, so how could Zuko know too?

He's in love, other stories are more childish.

That's the whole point to a fanfiction, to go outside the invisible box and write stuff that no one else has done before.

You're going to complain about that?

I have a school computer, and everything I type is monitored, so if I write something about Katara being "lustful" you probably don't know what the word means.

How is Toph being sappy?

I write in English, it might not be fixed, correct, or read by an editor, but it's the way I write.

It is called writing, some people don't have this skill.

I had writer's block, I'm sorry for liking this style of writing.

Mai was always going to Omashu, she never really had a reason to stay with Zuko if they felt no love towards each other anymore.

Because after all the times I've tried, I ended up failing, so what's the point in trying again?

Retorted. Retorted Retorted Retorted. Am I over using it now?

Description, I want none.

If you have any issues with my style of writing, tell me in a private message, not in a review please. If you are still confused about anything please message me! I would glad to answer them as kindly as I can! Thanks!

~EZ17