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Chapter 3: who's my dad?
What I see next has me worried, a whole bunch of kids in there teenage years come running up to us with all different kinds of weapons, spears, swords, bows and arrows, guns, and daggers. The look of horror on my face must have been pretty funny, seeing as Percy cracks up laughing.
"Welcome to camp half blood," yells a kid with sandy blond hair, and a mischievous look in his eye, which I don't trust one bit. Annabeth runs over to a group of kids that also have blond hair like hers, and grey stormy eyes which seem to be saying, what is your weakness? So we can take you down, or plot something. I grab a lock of my blond hair and tug on it, catching a bit of my only black streak in it.
A girl about my age with a little bit of make up on, turns to face me and smiles, her pretty brown hair seems to be glowing with beauty, "hi I'm Lulu I will be showing you around camp, I'm daughter of Aphrodite" she exclaims in her sweetest voice, and Delicately takes my hand and pulls me with her.
Lulu shows me the lava wall, the forest, the volleyball courts, the lake, the beach, the strawberry fields, the big house, the place where we eat, and finally the cabins, not one of the twelve cabins fell like home. I hadn't had a home in years; I was always running away, moving around, ever since my friend Corpcrica died. I have had no one, no friends, no family, the first time I ran away was when I was six, I had been sent to a boarding school, because my mum didn't have time for me so I decided if she didn't have time for me she couldn't have me. It took months of planning but I got away with my friend, three years later we started seeing them, by the I mean the awful, blood curling monsters, she got clawed through the chest by one and died, we use to fight them till that day now I just run from them.
Lulu takes me to Hermes cabin, after explaining about Greek gods, which I had no trouble believing, if monsters exist why can't they?
The guy I saw before, came to me with a sleeping bag under his strong arm, "sorry we don't have much room in here" he passed me the blue sleeping bag and takes me to a spot on the floor, "you're going to have to sleep here for now, by the way my names is Dylan, son of Hermes, and cabin leader."
I am about to say hi when out of nowhere, an angry shout erupts, and a cheeky grin spreads across his face, and he quickly runs of, shortly followed by a much taller, and stronger built guy. A horn sounds out across the valley and the cabin starts to walk out, when Dylan comes back still grinning, and pulls me along behind him to the eating pavilion with no roof, where we take our seats. Then I notice something, at the top of the pavilion sits a guy, which I figure must be the camp director, but next to him stands a animal sort of with a human chest and head, but the rest of his body is a horse, I am soon told the camp director is the god of wine, but only call him Mr. D, because names have power, and the centaur next to him, I think that's what they call that type of animal is called Chiron.
"Welcome to Shadow, the newest member of camp half-blood" yells the strange creature, after we finished giving some of the food to the god in offering form, and then eating the rest.
Suddenly we are moving out to a warm camp fire, in which we each find a place to sit, I sit next to Dylan because he's the only one I know other than Percy and Annabeth who seem to be having a great time when the fire starts to splutter and a creature, no wait a skeleton steps out holding a message in its bony hand, with my name on it. All the campers are on their feet with the dangerous tools in hand, but no one moves except Chiron who takes the note from the skeleton, and then in a flash of light the skeleton is gone, leaving everyone confused and puzzled. Bravely Chiron steps forwards, and reads the note it says two words and they are; "Shadow standup"
