Thanks to everybody who reviewed I will definitely try to add some of your suggesting's. I put a number at every chapter because when I type it on Microsoft I number the pages and if I don't finish writing on the whole page the number stays on the document.
"What where you guys doing?" Puck asked, once the girls came out of the fort.
"Not your business pea brain." Sabrina said in a snarky tone.
"Briar I demand you tell me what you were talking about!" Puck whined.
"You demand?" Briar mocked.
"Yes I am your father and I will ground you if you don't tell!" Puck yelled. His face turning red.
"You're not my father, yet." Briar alleged.
"Arrrggggghhhhh I hate girls!" Puck yelped as he buzzed away. Daphne laughed.
"He didn't mean it you could tell he didn't mean it because a piece of Briar didn't disappear." Daphne said. Sabrina turned bright red like a cherry and walked away. That left Briar and Daphne.
"Daphne, we have to get them together so I don't cease and I have a plan." Briar whispered.
"What?" Daphne asked and Briar whispered her plan into Daphne's ear, with Daphne's smile growing with every word. "So we'll ask Snow after our practice at the pavilion? Right?" Briar nodded.
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Briar didn't really know where to go so she went to Granny Relda's fort.
"Hello dear there are some people I want you to meet." Granny Relda said. It seemed like everyone who Briar met in the past had tried to figure out how to use her. Snow, Sabrina, Briar knew they were just trying to win the war but it was just she had only been in the past a day and she was already signed up for training, killed a dragon, and almost ceased. That counted as a lot in her books. Briar was also excited to be doing something; in the future no one let her do anything. They didn't know she was capable; she watched the army practice every day and mimicked their moves. She had gotten good she often practiced with Sammy who was part of the army, you had to be fourteen to be in the army so Briar had one more year. She often won. Sammy was the only one that knew how good she was.
"Yes old lady." Briar said. That's what her dad called her great grandma so that's what Briar called her ever since she was a baby.
"This is Veronica, Henry, Basil, Jacob, Mr. Clay and Red" Old lady said.
"Briar Grimm." Briar said and plastered a fake smile on her face.
"She's not a Grimm, I've never met her." Henry said.
"Would you like to bet on that?" Briar smirked.
"Yes." Both Jacob and Henry said.
"Ten dollars each sound fair?" Both men nodded.
"My Aunt Daphne opened a vortex I got sucked in. My parents are name Sabrina and Puck. Henry's nickname is Hank. Jacob you have the gnome king belt. Basil was named after opa Basil. Mr. Clay's first name is Tobias. Veronica helped Scrooge open a store." Briar said. "I'll take those tens now." Everyone was staring at her with their eyes wide open and their jaws dropped.
"PPPUUUCCCKKK!" Henry yelled as he raced out the door looking for Puck.
"Well I guess I'll get those tens another time." Briar said as she flew out of the fort trying to save Puck from Henry. When Briar was flying she saw Sabrina, grabbed her and flew back into the sky.
"Let go of me!" Sabrina cried.
"Sabrina we are going to save Puck from the wrath of Henry Grimm." Briar said only half kidding.
"Fly as fast as you can or maybe a little faster." Sabrina suggested. Okay Briar flew so fast Sabrina was sure she had bugs in her teeth. Briar suddenly stopped and dive-bombed in between a raging Henry Grimm and an unsuspecting Puck.
"MOVE TINKERBELLE!" Henry yelled. Briar put Sabrina down, her face contorted red and purple with rage. So much exactly like Puck Sabrina thought. Briar shot into the sky.
"I'M NOT TINKERBELLE, AM I THE SIZE OF A THIMBLE? NO! DO I REPRESENT LITTLE GIRLS ALL OVER THE WORLD? NO! I AM THE ALMIGHTY TRICKSTER QUEEN! SO I WILL NOT MOVE I THINK I'LL STAY IN YOUR WAY, GRAMPS!" Briar screeched as she stood in Henry's way. She's definitely dads least favorite. Sabrina thought. Puck had finally turned around and saw Briar sitting in front of Henry. He smirked and that turned into a grin and that turned into a huge smile.
"Grimm I'm so proud." Puck said to Sabrina, his eyes watering. Sabrina gave Puck and icy glare and walked over to Briar and Henry. Henry was yelling and Briar was shouting NO.
"Guys!" Sabrina shouted. They both looked at her and frowned. "that was the most immature thing I have ever seen."
"Yeah that was pretty immature, gramps." Briar hissed. He shot a dirty look at Briar and walked away. Puck came toward them.
"I'm insulted Grimm, that was the most immature thing you've seen and you live with me." Puck sighed. Briar's face looked tired and bored like she had been working to many hours.
"I've fallen threw a time vortex and done something's that well changed things. Where am I supposed to sleep?" Briar asked yawning.
"Well there's no room in my fort, let's go ask go ask Snow where you can sleep." Sabrina said.
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"There's no room, you can share a room with Goldie if you want." Snow said.
"Sounds good." Briar mumbled, falling asleep on her feet. Sabrina practically had to drag Briar to the fort she was sharing with Goldie. Briar collapsed on the floor of Goldie's perfect looking fort. Sabrina through a blanket on her and left a note for Goldie about her guest.
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BAM! Sabrina beat on the pan with the spoon but Briar wouldn't wake up. She was just like Daphne; she could sleep through the civil war.
"whatchadoinwitallthebanging." Briar grumbled with her eyes still closed.
"Up an at em time for training." Sabrina said.
"Zits ike six!"
"Get dressed!"
"Should I pull out my portable closet?" Briar grumbled sarcastically.
"You have a point I'll go get you some jeans and a tee-shirt."
"Golly thanks mom." Briar's voice dripped with sarcasm.
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Once Briar was wearing a rock and roll shirt and jeans, all of Sabrina's clothes fit her, they went to the pavilion. Puck and Daphne were also there looking bed wrangled. Snow looked as beautiful as always.
"Okay kids I just want you to show me what you guys got. Sabrina and Daphne you fight and Briar and Puck you fight, no fatal injuries please." Snow said.
"To bad." Puck said giving Briar an evil smile.
"Yeah to bad." Briar said returning the evil smile.
"Go!" Snow yelled. Puck charged and Briar ducked he flew right over her head. When he was over her she grabbed his wooden sword right from his hand. Then she charged and tackled pushing him to the ground. She had her knees on his chest and the sword pointed above his neck. Snow's jaw dropped.
"Were you already trained?" Snow asked. Briar turned scarlet.
"N-not directly."
"What do you mean?"
"Well I'm not exactly supposed to be trained, I kind of uh watch and mimic." Briar said looking flustered. Sabrina's eyebrow rose, she would have done the same thing.
"I want you to fight me." Snow said.
"No I can't I won't w- Snow charged Briar ducked again but this time she hit Snow in the shins with the part of her sword that was flat. Snow tripped and Briar shoved her to the ground and held the sword above her stomach. Then she pulled it away and helped Snow up to her feet. Snow looked grim then smiled.
"I really hate saying this but our army stinks." Snow said almost laughing.
"And?" Briar asked.
"You need to train them." Snow said grimly.
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