ok so hi, i just wanna say that this chapter is going for trials to see if it is good enough for me to continue, so if you review give me all the feedback i need so i know if i should continue or not, so without further ado:

Matt

'Nice, Matt's having a good hair day'. Matt said to himself as he looked into his golden hand mirror. He looked at his dark hair and eyes and his chipped tooth that he thought made him look like a bad boy, causing all the girls to swoon. Or so he thought. He was currently checking himself out while walking through the large shopping centre all red and pink ready for valentines day tomorrow.

He continued to speak to himself, 'But then again aren't they always-oof!' he was cut off when he bumped into someone.

'Hey, watch where you're going man!'

He looked up from his reflection, which was pretty hard for him mind you, to see who he bumped into. He caught a whiff of ocean and instantly narrowed his eyes.

Percy.

Percy, his rival. From his toned tall body to his raven locks and 'dreamy' green eyes, he was a catch for the girls.

Said person was his rival from the start because of his totally hot girlfriend Annabeth (cue dreamy sigh). He has wanted her since the moment he laid eyes on her. Sadly she adored and loved Percy. He gagged mentally.

He quickly smacked a cocky smirk on his face, 'What are you doing here, huh, shopping for personality?' He quipped smarmily.

Ignoring his comment, Percy held his hands out excited,
'Actually I'm here for Annabeth, tomorrow is the big day and I wanna make it super special.' he walked off all giddy.

'Big day huh?' Matt said to himself scratching at his jaw. He walked on completely missing the red hearts hanging from the shopping ceiling, walls and fat men dressed as cupid carrying heart arrows and bows hopping around.
Matt thought to himself 'Could it be...

A heart arrow whizzed out of nowhere and stuck to his head harmlessly, then it hit him, literally, 'Valentines day!' he exclaim proud of himself.

~line break~

Matt revised his plan to himself once again in his mind and gave himself a pep talk.

'Okay' he said to himself.'This is my big chance, I cut Percy off at the knees by blitzing Annabeth with gifts and tonnes of Matt charm, then she kicks him to the curb and Annabeth and I are a red hot item'

~line break~
Percy was found at the local florist holding a bouquet of flowers while the cashier was swiping his card. 'these will be perfect for Annabeth' Percy said happily to himself.

Behind Percy, and without being noticed, Matt's head popped out within the display potter flowers, his head inside a disguise pot with holes for his eyes.

'Pffffft, yeah right' he said to himself as he flicked his hand in a careless manner. Reality melted into his fantasy sequences...

- during fantasy sequence-
Percy was ringing the doorbell at Annabeth's door holding a bouquet of flowers.

Annabeth opened the door and was greeted with Percy saying: 'Brought you some pretty flowers Annabeth' he said stupidly in a voice only heard in Matts fantasy sequences.

Annabeth shook her head in disgust and took the bouquet gingerly with two fingers and slapped Percy's face with it. 'Eugh whatcha do? pick 'em at a landfill?' she then sighed dreamily ' I wonder what that hunk, Matt, is up to'

-end of fantasy sequence-

Matt jumped from his spot throwing off his disguise and sauntered up to the cashier leaning on the bench with his arm.
'Hey i need something that would guarantee to wow a girl and make her dump her dopey boyfriend..."

~Line break~

Percy could then be found walking out of a chocolate store holding a pink heart shaped box full of chocolates.

Matts head appeared once again and also unnoticed from behind a wall.
'hmmmm' he said to himself, tapping a finger to his chin as he plunged into yet another fantasy sequence...

- during fantasy sequence-

Percy and Annabeth could be found on a bench in a park. Percy wearing a black suit and Annabeth wearing a pink dress with her curly blonde corkscrews out, as she checked for imperfections in her make up through a small compact mirror.

Percy turned to her whilst opening the box of chocolates and in a southern accent, he said ' lifes like a box of chocolates'

'No your face is like a box of chocolates' Annabeth said annoyed, and smothered chocolates all over his face.

- end of fantasy sequence-

ah hah!' Matt said entering reality once again, he had a brilliant idea!
Running into the chocolate store that Percy just exited he could be heard from outside.

'Do you do custom orders?...'

~ line break~

The last place Percy would be found in the shopping centre for that day was at the newsagents, next to the valentines cards on display.

Percy slumped his shoulders, defeated ' Gee none of these are right' he sighed and walked away.

Matt could be found not far from where Percy was standing as he plunged into hopefully his last fantasy sequence of the day

- during fantasy sequence -

Sultry and romantic music was playing in the background as Annabeth and Matt were sitting on the carpet in front of the fire place.

"oh Matt!" Annabeth said adoringly as she read her card from him. She leaned towards him, and then...

Everything stopped with a sudden halt, matt turned around, "no lookie this fantasy sequence is too good to share"

-end of fantasy sequence -

~ line break also valentines day ~

It was a beautiful day as Percy Jackson rang the doorbell to Annabeth's house with his valentines gifts in his hands.

"Happy valentines day Anna-"

"HOLD IT!"

Percy flinched as Matt came walking forward, he swatted away the bouquet of flowers in Percy's hand.

Matt scoffed "You call those flowers, THESE are flowers!" he planted a giant arch of flowers around her shoulders. Annabeth fell to the ground with an "oomph".

Annabeth scrambled up from the floor, gray eyes unfocused.

"Uh...thanks Matt, I guess" she said warily

Matt then glanced at Percy's chocolates in his hand.

"Oh and that candy" he said to Percy " you really cheaped out didn't you Jackson"

Matt stepped aside to reveal a life size chocolate version of Matt.

"Mmm that hair looks really yummy, doesn't it?"

"I'm pretty sure you shouldn't leave that 'yummy hair' out in the Californian sun" sure enough the sun was shining even more today and the chocolate was slowly but surely starting to melt.

"Pfffft whatever" Matt said a little too frantically, with a wave of his hand. "check out MY card!"

It was a giant card with a picture of Matt playing guitar wearing cupids outfit. Out wafted music that will only ever sound good in Matts ears.

"hey, Annie you won the jaaaackpooooooooot-" The card started to sing but then started to get out of hand and slowly started to catch on fire. Matt shrieked and started stomping on his card putting out the fire.

"ack! Lousy cheap sound cards" he exclaimed moving away, scared to see if the card was going to blow. He then turned to Annabeth nervously with an attempt of a suave smile.

"hehehe so was that the best valentines day or what?" he finished crossing his arms in a victorious stance. He was 100% sure he won Annabeth over. Okay around 90% sure, to tell the truth.

"wow you went all out, and it outs the stuff i bought to shame" Percy said dejectedly, glaring at the gifts he bought.

"you said it i didn't, although i was about to..."

"Percy, I'd love to see what you got me" she said imploringly.

Percy took out the flowers, " they're not much but..." he said warningly.

"oh they're lovely!" not expecting that answer at all, Matt fell surprised.

"and these are the chocolates that you've like since we were twelve" Percy said a little more confident than before.

"Oh seaweed brain, I cant believe you remembered" she playfully teased, but with a warm twinkle in her eyes. Matts jaw fell to the ground.

Percy then brought out the card now giddy with confidence, a dopey smile plastered onto his face " and here is your card, made it myself!" he said with such pride.

The card was simple and blue with an untidy picture of a heart with seaweed brain + wise girl.

" Dear wise girl, you will always be my girl" Annabeth read "cheesy but you know what Perce? You're the most best and most thoughtful boyfriend I could ask for, thanks for being there for me, i love you"

"I love you too" Percy replied.

Matt scrambled from the ground recollecting his jaw, dignity and thoughts.

"Well that was completely different from my fantasy sequences" Matt said rubbing his sore jaw.

"Mine too"

Nancy was there standing not far off tearing a chunk off her life size chocolate and nibbling on it dejectedly, the same chocolate she was planning to give Percy, but Percy and Annabeth were cuddling together without a care of what the siblings were doing.

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