Hi,
So i got a review saying:
'Im kinda confused, so please explain. This is Tris, right. So is she talking about Will or Tobais. Because I'm pretty sure Will had blond hair and for a fact I know he had celery green eyes. Please give a better summary.'
This is my first fanfic i have ever written, so sorry if it isn't perfect and the summary isn't good enough.
It clearly says it is Tris and will, i know will has blond hair and celery green eyes but this is a fanfiction not every detail has to be the same, i can do what i want with it!:)
I'm sorry if you don't like it, but i can't help that!
I will update soon... Read and review! Any idea's would be good!
Thanks