Arf: Yay! Time for a review special! Dont know why just stalling till I get an idea! First review that caught my eye is one that I got during the Pitfall chapter.

~LilyGirl101

X-D That didn't go as planned...either time! Poor Byakuya...he can't seem to win for the life of him!

Arf: Yep. And I don't think I'll make him win any time soon. Actually, who knows? I might throw him a bone. Next is another one from LilyGirl and heres her review.

~LilyGirl101

That's an adorable way to start a friendship! *sniffle*

OK, a question...are you aware of the location of my secret base of ninja bunnies? *glare*

Arf: Yeah, it is. Hmm is that the one where I keep getting shot at from? Next is one from a long time reader concerning my Revised KOJI Guide.

~ bleachfan78

I liked the updates to how he interacts with the others. Good update.

Arf:If your happy, I'm happy. Next is one from a guy about My Prayer.

~ bluwings
Nice, lol. So that's what Byakuya prays for, but somehow I don't think all of his prayer will be answered.

Arf: (sarcastically)What on Earth makes you say that? Next is from bleachfan concerning the Seaweed Ambassador.

~bleachfan78

The Seaweed Ambassador is awesome. Hopefully, Byakuya will be able to meet him again one day.

Arf: I'll let you on a little secret. (*Spoiler in my story*)I plan on making him return in the Bleach DDR as a contestant. Next from Mungetsu.

Geez, Arf, If you like Byakuya so much, why don't you just marry him? XD jk...

You need to work on your grammar. ...Look, it's not so bad that it actually matters, but it's traditional for stories to be in past-tense.

Byakuya must've been scarred. If it didn't involve someone's death, I'd be laughing at his misery. To make Hisana's

death more impactful, you could add more elipses in her words (Those are the dot-dot-dots). Keep it up.

~Mungetsu

Arf: Mainly because I AINT GAY!

I feel it may be more impactful in present tense. That and i got a 4/10 in English class.

I may edit to make it more impactful. Thanks for the reviews.

This last one goes to a lil bunghole who at least was nice enough to PM me the review instead of waisting space.

~TheRealGoodyTwoShoes
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1. Non-stories: lists, bloopers, polls, previews, challenges, author notes, and etc.

2. One or two liners.

3. MST: comments inserted in between the flow of a copied story.

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Try re-writing your story like a traditional story and not like a movie script.

Arf:Please take notice that only afew of my storys break that rule, and other then you I've had no complaints. You want me to adjust those that break the rules, get a site admin who I can actually take seriously. Well that's all I have for now see you next time.