I felt that chapter 3 was short so i decided to update chapter 4 but i also realized that chapter 3 was rushed even before i got reviews for chapter 3. I was hoping my reads would be as oblivious as Corey is in the show about the rushyness of the chapter (yes i just said rudhyness...don't judge) To be honest i am really scared that i will lose readers because of chapter 3. also i got some suggests of what some of my readers would like to see, i had already written the first 3 chapters so i didn't use any suggestions. i actually like the suggests i got and plan on using some of them to write my story. to the girl who isn't allowed to have a email, i loved a particular suggestion that you had so in latter chapters it will be used ;) anyways i am really sorry about the rushing of the last chapter please don't stop reading my story because i made a little mistake. i was kinda unhappy with the chapter myself but i did write in a few nights ago at 3:00 am so maybe that's why. this chapter will be a funny one instead of a lovey dovey one so i hope you enjoy. dont worry Laney x Corey cutesy stuff will be in the next chapter.
Laney's POV
I already had gone back to my house to get all the stuff i would need at my long stuff at Corey's. To be honest it was more of just throwing random junk in a huge bag, but who cares. I was making my way back to Corey's house when i noticed Kin and Kon walking into the garage, so i hide behind a bush. We hadn't/didn't plan on telling are 2 friends about our relationship just yet. You know how the twins are, example A: the time we got a gig at a wedding just to get free cake, i don't even need to explain that mess. anyway Once they were inside of said garage and had made sure the door was shut, i rushed over to the front door, Since i didn't want them to notice that i would be spending the night. running up the stairs quickly to put my bag up in my boyfriend's room. hehe it felt awesome to be able to say that. The (obviously) over stuffed bag hit the floor making a loud thud. i walked out the room, made my way out the front day, and proceeded to the garage.
Laney's POV
The garage door flew open. "what's up everybody?" i asked with a chill tone. Kin, being the first one to notice me replied "Just kind of jamming, you know the usual" not even looking up from his keyboard. "Hey Laney! look at this news Report!" Kon with no hesitation at all. now sitting on a chair to examine the tv, i nodded to Kon when i was comfy to unpause the tv. "WHATS DAT? I'll tell you what DAT is! Peaceville's newest edition to Peacevile park, an amphitheater. And what kind of way will we celebrate this new edition? Non other than a festival! Games and food will be provided!" The fast talking news reporter said, more like blurted out. Kon turned the Tv off. "SO SO TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK!" a very excited Kon yelled. i was amazed this was Kon's first time coming up with an idea for a gig. Corey was normally the one to come up with crazy gig ideas, i was very impressed with what Kon had found. "Wow Kon i'm highly impressed" giving kon a pleased smile. "yes yes very impressive my dear brother." Kin commented finally looking up from his keyboard. Kon now pleased with himself strutted up to his drum set. Me and Kin tired to hold in our laughter, Kon just looked to funny doing a model like walk. in a high and mighty/air headed kind of tone "Well i guess it just takes true smarts to find gigs, something you guys just wouldn't understand." Kon said. i wasn't sure whether to laugh at the fact that Kon thought he was super smart or whether to punch him for saying that we weren't smart. "Wait where is Corey?" i asked just noticing he was absent from the garage. "umm...i'm not quite_" Kin started but was cut of when a pink car crashed threw the garage CLOSED garage door, knocking the TV to the ground (which ended up breaking) and leaving most everything in the Riffen's garage scattered and/or busted, broken, or ripped. The members of grojband (that were present in the room) stood there with jaws dropped in shock. A blue hair figure hoped out of the drivers window. "LANEY!" he screamed running over to give me a big hug. his eyes sparkling like crazy, he had his eyes opened so wide i thought they were about to fall out his head. "WHAT THE WHAT CORE?!" i screamed before he could even get to where i was standing. "Kin and Kon stood there with their jaws still dropped "AWESOME SAUCE!" they said amazement clearly in their voices. Corey bouncing with excitement "I KNOW RIGHT!". Yea i was still standing there in shock and in horror. "Whats with the loud loserish noises ?! i am trying to plan for the school dance in a couple of weeks! i have to impress Nick Mallor_" she had cut herself off when she looked up in horror to see her pretty pink car. Trina dropped her cell phone. Her car was completely totaled. Paint scratched in various places, a tire missing (had flown to the other side of the garage), other tires turned sideways, roof smashed in, and the hood was crashed and hanging off the side of the vehicle. "P...P...PINKTASTIC!" and with that the screaming, stuttering, pink haired teen fainted. Mina, who was standing right behind Trina, just stared. "uhh...umm...Trina will have to get back to you about this" Mina with a breathless voice due to the fact she was dragging Trina back into her room. "DUDE WHEN SHE WAKES UP SHE IS GOING TO KILL YOU!" spinning my head around shouting at Corey. Corey appeared in my face poking my nose "Laney Laney Laney. Don't be such a wet blanket now. When Trina wakes up we will already be gone to are gig in the park. and i might i add how we will get there?". Don't say Trina's car, don't say trina's car. "IN TRINA'S CAR!". damn he said it. Face palming myself, why me? "so we gonna jam or not?" an inpatient Kon asked messing with his drum sticks. Luckily the only thing that wasn't damaged by the wreck was the stage and our instruments. Corey jumped up on stage still as hyper as ever, "get me a beat!" he said grabbing his mic. We didn't argue, we just started to play a bad ass beat. To our surprise our singer started to sing out lyrics...GOOD LYRICS.
Laney's POV (Near the end of the song)
(All american rejexts lyrics. i dont really listen to them but the lyrics just seemed to fit.)
"Who has to know
The way she feels inside (inside)
Those thoughts I can't deny (deny)
These sleeping thoughts won't lie (won't lie)
And all I've tried to hide
It's eating me apart
Trace this life out
I'll keep you my dirty little secret
(Dirty little secret)
Don't tell anyone or you'll be just another regret
(Just another regret, hope that you can keep it)
My dirty little secret
Dirty little secret
Dirty little secret
Who has to know
Who has to know"
After Corey finished he put his mic back on its stand and turned towards us. For the 2nd time today we stood there with our mouths gaping open. Kin being the first one being able to speak "DID YOU WRITE THOSE LYRICS?!". Corey scratched the back of his head confessing "They just popped up in my head only moments ago". At this point i was so proud of my boyfriend, this was the first time he has ever came up with good lyrics by himself. "WAIT I JUST WROTE I SONG BY MYSELF! I WROTE A SONG!" Corey said beaming overly excited. The whole band was now cheering and shouting Corey's name. Said boy ran over to me picking me up in the air twirling me around in the air, bringing me me down to embrace me. The room was now dead silent at the stunt Corey just pulled. Clearing my throat quietly hoping to only get Corey's attention. "Yes Lanes?" Corey cooed. "uh yea Cores your kinda making it obvious to everyone that we might be dating" i whispered to Corey. "MY TURN MY TURN!" Kon shirked waving his hand up in the air. "just do it. it will make this stunt you pulled less suspicious" in a low tone pulling away from Corey. Corey stood back having his arms wide open, Kon preparing himself in a run in jump stance. Kin scooted next to me "i bet you 10 bucks that Kon lands on Corey ending up killing him" he whispered. I turned to Kin and gave him a "really really? you got to be kidding me look. Kin just shrugged. "ready Kon?" "READY COREY!" Kon ran and jumped at Corey. Corey ended up being thrown of the stage from Kon's forceful jump. while Kon fell on his butt. "Corey!?" i yelled. thanks to Kin i had the thought i him being dead consuming my mind. "OMG I KILLED COREY!" Kon was in rocking back in forth in the corner of the stage. "I KILLED MY FRIEND" he busted out crying huge flood like tears. we all looked towards where Corey had been flung. "AWESOME!" a rising figure with a black eye hooted. "COREY'S STILL ALIVE!" Kon beamed. "VERY MUCH ALIVE!" Corey added. "Core your eye looks bad..come here" i lead Corey to the couch for him to sit and went to the freezer to retrieve a ice pack "here put this on your eye". "thanks Lanes" he replied plus mouthing the words "i love you", which made my smile. Kin trying to calm a emotional Kon, "ill take care of this" i told Kin beading down to talk to Kon. Kin backed up holding his hands up like he was surrendering. "hey there buddy" i said to Kon using the sweetest tine ever. "I HURT COREY!" he was now almost flooding the stage with his tear. "hey hey hey. Corey's going to be just fine"...he gave me this look as if i was stupid "are you stupid?". now i just really wanted to punch Kon. "I GAVE HIM A BLACK EYE! he didn't get hurt when he twirled you around!"...i was seriously done with this crap but still went on "you know Corey is like a stick compared to you and so am i, weaklings if you will (she cringed at say the "weaklings part) thats why he didn't get hurt. but your just so strong that your muscles just over powered him and sent him flying" hoping that would make him shut his mouth. "yea Laney your right!" jumping and fist bumping his twin brother. "i'm not that weak" an anger blue hair boy murdered. "so Laney how ya feel about going back to school tomorrow? i mean since you haven't been in awhile" Kin asked making conversation. It was in the middle of the year and since i'd been at my grandmas for the last month and a half i hadn't been attending Peaceville high school. tomorrow was Monday which means i would have to return to my high school. i sat up on what was left of the hood of Trina's car. "ehh not to thrilled. kinda nervous, you know people are going to question me about why i was out for so long. ugh and seeing the newmens... yea definitely not thrilled." i laughed out the last part. A light bulb went off in Kin's head "oh ohh ohh i know we should all have a sleep over at Corey's tonight to help Laney not be nervous about tomorrow!".
Corey's POV
i dropped that ice pack Lanes had given me. no no no, this will ruin everything. i popped up right beside Laney. "not a good idea." shaking my head. "first day back at school. *tisk tisk* Lanes will need her rest.". the twins looked at each other "Not like Corey to pass of a sleepover with his buds" scoffed Kon.
Laney's POV
Needed to get my rest? Corey must have something up his sleeve. "yea i am really tired you know from being in a different time zone and all." i decided to play along. "uh yea...i am going to run back to the house i invited the perfect thing that would just put this gig over the top." Kin was already running out the door before he even finished his sentence. it was silent in the garage for a while. i found it kind of nice even though at the moment i just wanted to be alone with Corey. *stomach growling noise* "Dudes i hungys. gonna go raid the fridge" Kon left the room shutting the door behind him. "FINALLY WERE ALONE! " Corey put his arms around me. "what do you have planed Core?". "*gasps* why would you think such a thing" Corey did a mocking shocked/hurt face. Totally fake. "i am not stupid dummy" giving him a soft friendly punch on the arm. "ive already been injured once today please spare me" this made the both of us laugh. "but on a serious note... i got us tickets to go see IronPixies tonight. i thought once we played our gig you and me could sneak off to the concert." he shifted his feet. "like on a date? alright cool" i kind of sighed. Yea of course it would be epic to see IronPixies live but i had always planned to have a more cutesy date that made people want to stop and say "awww". oh well guess you got to make sacrifices in relationships. Corey gave me a peck on the lips smiling into the kiss.
Corey's POV
Kin ran in to the garage "lets get this show on the road!". We packed all of our instruments. hehe Laney is going to be in for a surprise with what i had secretly planned out. ha she thinks i cant be cutesy, hmm will see about that. CHALLENGE ACCEPTED!
i don't know how i feel about this chapter, the planing for this was perfect in my head but since i haven't slept in days who knows how it turned out *cringes* i hope its not that bad. when i first uploaded chapter 1 i never thought i wouldn't get any reviews or readers. well i was wrong, and ever since that moment when i got my first views i made it my duty to please each and everyone of my readers. but i feel like this chapter will let down some readers...i think i wrote this chapter very poorly. sorry about that but since i promised 2 chapters today (even through it is 4:00 am and i posted the last chapter at 9:00 pm)i just really wanted to keep my promise ever though i am clearly about to die i am so sleepy. but tomorrow (actually that would mean latter today) i will write the next chapter down on paper before i type it so i can take a good look at it and edit to make it perfect. i will not stand for anything that is not perfect! only the best for my readers. also to make up for this last 2 chapters that were not my best of work. anyway please leave some suggestions, i am totally open to anything that will make my story better. till next time. FAIRWINDS!