A/N:- Hello readers! It truly has been forever this time (I think!)! I apologize, but life happens and I've been busy! Anyway, on to my thanks...
Soul Hunt thank you for your review! (I'm glad you loved the chapter and I liked them telling fairy stories too!)
Alexkitkat thank you for your review! (Those are all my favourite bits too! Glad you liked this!)
Celestial Star12 thank you for your review! (Um...I'm glad I'm your stress reliever? Giggle!)
xSapphirexRosesxFanx thank you for your review! (I feel I have disappointed you last chapter! Hopefully all the Mai/Naru goodness in this will make up for it! At least I think there's some in here!)
lici910 thank you for your review! (I'm saying nothing on that! Giggle! I know it was short, I hope this makes up for it! I didn't either until I wrote it! Giggle!)
seshomaru94 thank you for your review! (I'm glad you did too! I am also glad you found it funny! I not sure about telling the whole story but maybe a bit more of it would have made the chapter longer! It probably is! Here is your update! You're welcome!) and finally...
ardx thank you for your review! (No worries! I'm glad you enjoyed that bit, I also liked it! Here is your more!) Thanks also to any favoriters and alerters!
Okay, some notes about this chapter! The opinion parts (The bits where they say 'I liked...' I didn't like...') were written not just by myself but by three of my friends on here too! So lici910 gave me all of Mai's opinions, seshomaru94 gave me all of Gene's opinions and IkutoisSmexy gave me all of Nolie's opinions! I have done all of Naru's opinions plus the inbetween dialogue!
My dedication obviously goes to lici910, seshomaru94 and IkutoisSmexy for all their input and effort in this chapter! Thank you so much ladies!
Disclaimer:- I own Nolie and the plot, nothing more!
Naru:- Gene, Mai and I are back with the random recap and we are joined by our special guest Magnolia or Nolie as you readers know her. Where is Treelow955? Locked safely away somewhere so she can never update this foul monstrosity again!
Me:- *Muffled from the cupboard I'm locked in* I heard that!
Naru:- Quiet in there! Learn your lesson!
Me:- *Still muffled* Let me out! I wanna join in!
Naru:- The answer is no!
Gene:- Dear Brother can you move this along? Nolie and I have 'plans' for later!
Naru:- *Ahem* Okay, you start us off then with chapter eleven.
Nolie:- Um…hang on. Can I um…read it first uh…please?
Gene:- Sure you can Sweetheart! You take all the time you need!
Naru:- Hey, who's directing this session?
Gene:- I would say you, but we both know that's a lie.
Mai:- That's right Naru! I am! I say she gets to read the chapter!
Naru:- Now hold on Mai, that's not for you…
Mai:- *Glares at Naru*
Naru:- On second thoughts, go right ahead and read the chapter Magnolia.
Gene:- *Whispering to Mai* Whoah, how did you train him to obey you like that?
Mai:- *Whispering back* It's the only way he knows he'll get some later!
Gene sniggers.
Naru:- *Clears throat* Anyway, Gene, chapter eleven.
Gene:- Ah, right. I liked Lin's POV most. I didn't like the part where Treelow955 said I suck at my job. I also liked the part in Mother's POV.
Naru:- *Sigh* You would! Mai, your thoughts.
Mai:- Um…I uh…liked the end bit too even if it was a bit heated. Um…can I ask which of you it was? I heard last time we did this that you two kept switching!
Gene:- I confess, it was me again.
Mai:- I see. Well, you have an awesome body Gene.
Nolie glares at Mai. Naru glares at Gene.
Gene:- Uh…thanks, but you should focus on my brother, like now, before he kills me!
Mai:- *Sternly* Naru, kill Gene and I kill you! Anyway, I also liked the bit in Lin's POV and the part where Treelow955 forgot about Yasuhara!
Gene:- That bit was funny!
Naru:- Magnolia, what do you think?
Nolie:- Uh…please call me Nolie. Um…I liked the part where Lin and Ayako were locked in the bathroom. I um…didn't…
Gene:- If I may interrupt for a moment. Nolie, Sweetheart, why are you so hesitant in voicing your opinions?
Nolie:- I…it's your brother, *whispering* I find him intimidating.
Gene:- *Chuckling* Him? He's a big puppy dog and an idiotic jerk of one at that! I wouldn't be scared. His glares are just for show.
Naru:- Are you quite finished flushing my character down the toilet or is there some more you would like to add to complete your work of demeaning me?
Gene:- Ah, sorry Baby Brother! I'm just trying to get her to relax a little.
Mai:- Anyway, you were saying Nolie.
Nolie:- Oh, yes I was. I didn't like Violet's reaction to her death; she seemed very nonchalant about it. Erm…the bit where you were both possessed and kissing and everyone was shocked I think could have been exaggerated a bit more on the reactions side and the end part I thought was a bit fast, but then again I haven't read the story before this chapter.
Gene:- That was excellent Nolie, much more confident! See, he didn't eat you did he?
Nolie:- *Laughs with relief* No, I guess you're right, there's nothing to be scared about!
Gene:- Aww, come here!
Gene and Nolie hug.
Naru:- *Ahem* My turn! I enjoyed the first part of Lin's POV where he and the priestess were locked in the bathroom, but after that I think this chapter went to hell!
I bang on the door of my locked cupboard.
Mai:- Care to say that a bit louder Naru? I don't think Treelow955 quite heard you yelling that!
Naru:- Sarcasm doesn't suit you and besides that's my thing. Moving on, Nolie, chapter 12.
Nolie:- I liked the extra info given in this chapter on how you guys um…well…you know, got together. I am a bit confused by this continual reference to something Naru shouted though; I want to know what it is.
Gene whispers what Naru shouted in Nolie's ear.
Nolie:- *Blushing* N…no way! You really yelled that?
Naru:- *Glaring at Mai* Yes, because someone has a rather rude sense of revenge.
Mai:- Hey, don't blame me! If you had just answered the question at a normal sound level in the first place you wouldn't have yelled it in anger because I kept asking.
Naru:- Whatever! Gene, your thoughts on chapter 12.
Gene:- Hmm, I…liked…you two getting together! That was great!
Naru:- *Sighs* Uh-huh. Mai, your opinion.
Mai:- Well, I liked you being scared of the L-word Naru and also the part where you were frustrated!
Naru:- I can say the L-word!
Mai:- Prove it! Say you love me!
Naru:- Of course I lo…care about you!
Mai:- See? Point proven! Your turn Lover Boy and I LOVE you!
Naru:- Argh! Don't be annoying! Let's see, I didn't like this chapter as my ability to write in Japanese was made fun of, it was a bit too heated and Mother made fun of me at the end.
Gene:- I don't know why you're complaining, I was the one who had to do all the work in this chapter! *Mutters* You and your insistence on not doing anything you deem inappropriate.
Nolie:- It's okay Gene, Kitten. I still love you my Little Kit-Kat.
Nolie hugs Gene.
Naru:- When you two have quite finished!
Mai:- Leave them alone Naru, they're having a moment.
Naru:- Can we just move on to chapter 13? Mai I believe it's your turn to go first.
Mai:- I liked the part where Kit or Gene as we now know him came in and you got really jealous! I also liked the bit with Yasuhara crying to Monk when you said he was useless.
Naru:- Well, he was! Nolie, your thoughts.
Nolie:- I didn't like Gene's Kit persona, he was too flirty, especially when he found out Mai was already taken and he still continued to try and seduce her, I also find him intrusive into your relationship.
Gene:- In my defence I would like to say it was in the script and you are the only girl for me my little Nolie-kins! I would never really go after my brother's girl as he would give me a slow and painful death!
Nolie:- Well, I liked his name. Kitai, that's a nice and interesting name. I also liked Naru being jealous.
Naru:- You did?
Nolie:- *Nodding shyly* Mmhmm! I really liked the rant in your head about Kit's appearance, especially the Sonic the Hedgehog comparison! That was funny.
Naru:- Thanks!
Mai and Gene look at each other and giggle.
Mai & Gene:- AYAKO!
Ayako:- Yes?
Mai:- It happened again.
Gene:- Could you do the honours?
Ayako checks Naru over again.
Ayako:- The problem seems to have gotten worse. You have kept him on his strict diet right?
Mai:- Of course.
Ayako:- Well, has he gotten any compliments lately?
Nolie:- Yes, I just complimented him on being jealous.
Ayako:- Well, I think the treatment this time will have to be a hefty dose of Luella.
Gene:- No! Why?
Ayako:- He seems to have a bad case of stroked ego and only a Mother can cure it.
Naru:- Grr! That's enough! Why do you three insist on making jokes at my expense?
Mai and Ayako:- Sorry Naru!
Gene:-Sorry Noll!
Ayako leaves.
Naru:- Now, Gene, your turn.
Gene:- I liked you being jealous too and I liked our little contest to get close to Mai.
Naru:- I see. My turn! I liked the shower at the start, ranting about *Sigh* Kit in my head and being verbally abusive to Yasuhara at the end. The rest of it was demeaning and pointless rubbish!
Mai:- Even kissing me? I assume it was you finally as I recognized your scent.
Naru:- *Blushing a little* Yes it was me. Gene threw a tantrum and refused saying that now he's a more involved character he wouldn't stand in for me anymore. Anyway, I'm not saying that, anything before my parents show up and after your POV I liked.
Mai:- Ah, I see! That's good to know!
Mai snuggles up to Naru and Naru wraps an arm around her and kisses the top of her head.
Gene:- Aww, you two are just so cute together! *Produces a camera* Let's get a photo, Mother's orders!
Naru:- *Glares at Gene* Do it and die!
Mai:- Naru stop it! Chapter 14, Naru, why don't you go first?
Naru:- Alright. I liked screwing with Yasuhara and Monk using ventriloquism, and mentally insulting Kit, the rest of it I found either aggravating, embarrassing or demeaning.
Mai:- Why do you keep saying his name like that?
Naru:- It's not like it's his real one!
Mai:- Yeah, but still, have more respect please.
Naru:- *Mutters* Argh, fine! Detestable Git!
Mai:- *In warning* Naru!
Naru:- Alright, I'll try harder.
Gene:- *Whispering to Mai* Man you've got him trained well!
Mai:- *Whispering back* Thanks!
Naru:- *Ahem* Gene, chapter 14.
Gene:- I liked the bit where you accidently said Git instead of Kit and Mai yelled at you for it.
Naru:- Uh-huh. Nolie, your opinion.
Nolie:- I didn't like James and although I sympathize with you Naru in this chapter I disagree with you dragging Mai about!
Naru:- I was just being protective of her.
Nolie:- That's no excuse! If Gene did that I'd hit him!
Naru:- Point taken. Mai, what did you think of this chapter?
Mai:- I liked the part where you used ventriloquism too, but I want to know what happened to James and Masako as after this chapter we don't hear about them ever again.
Naru:- How should I know and why should I care?
Mai:- *Sigh* You're hopeless!
Naru:- Anyway, chapter 15, Nolie you start.
Nolie:- I didn't like Luella making you have 'the talk'. I liked Mai standing up to Luella and I feel sorry for you again Naru. I also think Kit's comment was rude.
Naru:- At least I have someone's sympathy. Gene, your thoughts.
Gene:- I liked it when you cooked, that was my most favourite part and I actually liked 'the talk', I thought it was hilarious seeing your reaction!
Naru:- Argh, you would! Mai! What did you think? No, don't tell me, you also liked seeing me get embarrassed by Mother!
Mai:- Actually, Naru, I didn't. I thought Luella went too far in this chapter and I'm glad I stuck up for you at the end! I think Luella should apologize to you for doing that!
Naru:- I love you so much right now!
Mai:- Oh my God! You said the L-word!
Naru:- I guess I did.
Mai:- Come here you!
Mai hugs the life out of Naru.
Mai:- Okay, what did you think of this chapter Naru?
Naru:- I hated it! The only bits I liked were having dinner with you and you sticking up for me against Mother at the end Mai!
Mai:- Well, that's something I guess!
Naru:- Anyway, chapter 16, Mai?
Mai:- I liked being there for you, John walking in when we were cuddling and the arrival of Nolie.
Nolie:- Thanks! That's so sweet of you!
Naru:- Nolie, what did you think?
Nolie:- I was glad Mai can't understand English in this chapter as the things Kit was shouting were pretty graphic. I thought Kit's possession was a bit sudden and I found the arrival of me at the end a bit mysterious.
Naru:- I see. Gene, what are your thoughts?
Gene:- I liked the part where I was possessed as I got to scream cuss words! By the way Mai I'm sorry for the things I called you; I really didn't like calling you a whore!
Mai:- You called me a WHAT? I didn't understand a word you said in that scene; you should have just stayed quiet! I can't believe you said something so hurtful to me!
Naru hugs Mai.
Naru:- It's okay Mai! I'm here and if he says it again to you I'll rip his tongue out!
Mai:- Thank you Naru! I would prefer you didn't harm Gene though!
Naru:- *Sigh* Alright, if you insist! It is pretty fun screaming cuss words though, right Brother?
Gene:- It is! What are your opinions of this chapter Noll?
Naru:- I liked cuddling up with you Mai and it was kinda funny but frustrating when John burst in. The part where Kit was possessed and swearing like there was no tomorrow I didn't like and the bit at the end where Magnolia turned up was surprisingly confusing I thought. Chapter 17, Gene you start.
Gene:- I liked your POV on me being Kit, Noll.
Naru:- I see. Nolie, what did you think?
Nolie:- I liked the extra information on Kit's possession and my arrival. I also thought your comeback was a great twist Gene.
Gene:- Thanks! I thought it was great too. *Raises voice slightly* It was all Treelow955's idea.
Me:- *Still muffled in my cupboard* Thanks Gene!
Naru:- Quiet! Mai, your opinion.
Mai:- I liked Kit's POV as I thought it was funny. I also liked your supposed attempt at flirting Naru according to you Gene and I thought the thing about you being Kit, Gene, was a major bombshell!
Naru:- Uh-huh. I didn't like Kit's POV as he blew my actions out of proportion and he called me a jerk.
Gene:- *Mumbling quietly* Well you are!
Naru:- What was that?
Gene:- Nothing Dear Brother! Please continue!
Naru:- I also thought that Kit turning out to be you Gene was a massive twist! Chapter 18, Nolie, your turn.
Nolie:- I liked the fight between you and Gene and I also liked you two hugging.
Gene and Naru:- That is NEVER happening again!
Nolie:- I have a feeling it will if I put a request in with the author! Anyway, I didn't like the fact that Gene's identity was toyed with and kept a secret.
Naru:- I agree. I didn't like that either, but I did enjoy the fight I had with you Brother!
Gene:- Me too Baby Brother! I also enjoyed our fight immensely!
Mai and Nolie:- Ugh, TWINS!
Gene:- You rang?
Naru:- Gene, don't be a moron! Mai, what are your thoughts?
Mai:- I liked you cracking and telling Gene who he really is. I didn't like how Gene's identity was played with either and I think Luella should be mean to you Gene for all the things she's put Naru through. I also liked you being jealous again Naru!
Naru:- Have I ever said I love you, because I really do! *Ahem* Moving on, last chapter, chapter 19, I'll start.
Gene:- Why do you get to start? Why can't one of the girls go first?
Naru:- Because I've rarely gotten to go first.
Gene:- Argh, fine!
Naru:- Okay, so I thought that Monk and Yasuhara were two complete morons. I did however like Monk cooking burgers and that they told fairy stories instead of ghost stories! I didn't like them gossiping with John or the part about Yasu having hidden microphones! Mai, your turn.
Mai:- I liked the part where they told fairy stories too and the part about Monk's burgers. I actually liked the bit about the hidden cameras and them all gossiping though. I thought it was funny!
Naru:- I see. Nolie, what is your opinion?
Nolie:- I was confused by the POV change, but I liked Yasu's hidden mics, Yasu deceiving Monk and the comment at the end where Yasuhara said he could see the family resemblance between Naru and Kit or Gene when Gene got protective of me.
Naru:- Uh-huh. Finally, Gene, your thoughts.
Gene:- I liked them telling fairy stories.
Naru:- That's it?
Gene:- Yep!
Naru :- Okay, fine, you're all free to go now!
Gene:- Cool! Come on Nolie, let's go get some dinner!
Nolie:- Alright, then maybe a movie?
Gene:- Sure Sweetheart!
Naru:- Let us also go Mai! I have plans for you involving a teapot!
Mai:- *Defeated* Oh, Naru! What about Treelow955 though?
Naru:- Leave her, she's better off locked away safely!
Mai:- Don't be mean!
Gene:- *Whispering* Don't worry Mai, Nolie and I plan on breaking her out when you two have gone!
Mai:- *Whispering back* Oh, okay! *In a normal tone* Come on Naru, let's go get you that tea you want!
Mai and Naru leave.
Gene unlocks my cupboard.
Me:- Oh thank you so, so much again Gene! Why is it always you who rescues me?
Gene:- Because I'm awesome! Anyway, I'm not alone this time, Nolie's here too!
Me:- Hi Nolie!
Nolie:- Hi Miss Author Lady!
Gene:- Anyway, Nolie and I have plans so we'll leave you to it! Good luck with not getting caught by Noll again!
Gene and Nolie leave.
Me:- Oh well, at least I'm free now! I hope I get some reviews!
I leave.
A/N:- So how did you like it? I hope it was good!
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