1. Was Corey drunk or just really hyper?
He was really hyper
2. Did you get CHALLENGE ACCEPTED from How I Met Your Mother?
No I didn't to be honest I've never watched that show before
3. What does POV mean?
It means Point Of View
4. Please go back to the old format.
I will think about
5. Cut the cursing out of the story please.
I'll curse less. I mean I am 16 an in this fanfic the band is 16 and the last time I checked teens curse, it's just life I'm sorry. To be honest I curse way too much in real life :/
6. to deadpool rules66: oh my god I love blazeamberbrewer!
7. Laney should sing "teenage dreams".
Uhh ummm I hate to break it to you but I kind of hate that song and all the other songs Katie Perry sings. I only listen to rock, metal, scream, dubstep, and other types of music that fall under the category of rock music
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Chapter 10
Laney's POV
It was a beautiful day despite the fact today was Monday. The weather wasn't hot or cold, it was just right. A perfect day to go into town and look for a dress for the school dance. Maybe I could even get the new CD I wanted, who knows.
"Core I'm going to get my ear buds out my locker. Be right back". I let go of Corey's hand.
"Alright sweet heart". He smiled back at me
Walking to my locker I felt as if someone was watching me. I shook my head; I'm just paranoid from not listening to music today. I reached my destination and opened the faded blue locker, when I feel something groping my butt. The person turned me around forcefully and slammed me into the lockers.
"Heard you broke up with pretty boy?"
I looked up to see who was groping me. My face went into a complete shocked expression; it was Lenny from the Newmans.
"So babe I was thinking you should be my girl"
His hand started to move up my shirt. Screaming for help wouldn't work; I was so scared I lost my voice.
"Come on we can have some fun if you relax"
His hand was now cupping my boob and his other hand covering my month. I bit his hand.
"Oh yea….well…I don't….want anything to do…..with a….jerk like you…..especially a jerk from the Newmans" I shuttered my words, giving him a good stomp on the foot.
This made him rage out in anger. Half the school stopped and stared to see what was going on. Lenny crept towards me, looking as evil as ever. He grabbed my neck.
"We'll see about that" he whispered in my ear.
His hot breath sent chills down my spine, like the kind you get while watching a scary movie.
"What are you going to do?" I yelped like a puppy.
Lenny didn't answer me; instead he ripped the gauze off my arm leaving me exposed. He snickered at me and held my cut arm up for half the school to see.
"Oh look Laney Penn cuts herself. How emo of you" Lenny made sure everyone could hear him.
He looked down upon me and laughed. Big alligator tears welled up in my eyes. Jerking my arm away from the douche bag, I ran off.
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Corey's POV
I pushed through the crowd surrounding my girlfriend's locker. By the time I got to the front, Lenny pulled Laney's gauze from her arm and Lanes ran off. I noticed her arm had new more cuts than before. How could someone ever do that to a girl, expose her emotions that have been written on her body. I grabbed Lenny by the collar of his shirt.
"You're a sick Bastard" I pushed him out my way and went to find my Lanes.
"Lanes, where are you?"
There was no use, maybe a teacher already found her.
"Core is that you?" a girl sniffled.
I turned the corner to see if it was Laney. The girl ran into my arms. Yup it was Laney.
"I can't take it anymore" she gripped on to my shirt as tight as her hands would let her.
All I could do was look down at her and see she was in pain. The lunch bell rang. I brought Lanes close to my chest.
"Let's go home for lunch, Lanes"
She nodded. I took her hand in mine and lead her to safety.
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Short chapter, yes I know. Sorry it took so long to update I spent the night at my cousins on Saturday but I couldn't sleep, my youngest cousin's friend snored like a dying animal. So me and my other cousin and stayed up all night watching all the American pie movies. Yesterday was my first day of summer school. I might update again tonight since right now it's only 1:34 pm. I love all the support my readers are giving me, you guys have no idea. I just want to hug all of you right now.