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PERCY

I wasn't exactly sure what happened, one minute I was standing there talking to the kid, the next I was diving head first into the East River, not that it bothered me. When I got out I expected the kid to be gone, but he was still there, oozing rage. I was not exactly sure what his deal was, but being my stupid, impulsive self I grabbed riptide and charged. I charged at him but he blocked with his weird twisted sword that was apparently called a kopesh. I wanted to win this fair, without fighting, that was until he summoned this crazy hawk headed … thing that encased his body it was huge, maybe ten, fifteen feet. This wasn't the power of any demigod I've ever seen. I was starting to seriously doubt this guy was a half-blood. He threw another fist at me. If he wasn't going to play fair neither will I. To block it I pulled some water out of the river and created a wall in front of me, as the fist made contact with it, the wall shattered into a million little droplets that rained down on us. I gathered more water from the river and pushed it forward at him. I rode the waves I created to where he stood. When the water washed away it revealed me standing before my opponent sword pointed at his chest as he lay on the floor. His mystical casing was gone and his sword had landed a couple feet away. He looked me straight in the eye, with a hard determined look, like he refused to show any fear. I realized he was a lot like me. I recapped riptide and held out my hand and introduced myself "I'm Percy." He got up without my help, which made me laugh a little. He was definitely a lot like me. "Carter," he said

"So, you're not a demigod, are you?"

"No, but I'm guessing that's what you are."

"ding ding ding!"

CARTER

I wasn't sure what to do. Percy told me everything about the Greek gods, which explained why he was able to control the water. He was a son of Sobek, or in his case, Poseidon. I was having a hard time wrapping my head around it. He was half god, I mean, sure I had hosted a god before- Horus and I had a kind of love-hate relationship- but he had godliness in his genetics. I was also a little unsure about telling him about Egyptian magic. I wasn't sure if I could trust him, even though he trusted me. At one point I asked him why he was telling me all this. His smile turned into a huge lopsided grin.

"Whatever you are you definitely aren't a regular mortal, which means I have to bring you back to Camp. When I went to camp for the first time, it would have helped if someone had explained this to me before hand." I could tell from the way he spoke about camp, that he really loved that place

"Alright then, let's go." I surprised myself with those words. When had I become so ready to trust. I guess it had something to do with how similar we were. I could feel it in my bones, or maybe that was just the water

"What about the croc?" Percy asked

"Don't worry, it served its purpose. It won't bother anyone now."

PERCY

As we climbed on Blackjack's back (try saying that five times fast), Carter started to tell me about his godly experiences. I knew he wasn't a regular mortal. Another culture of gods, that was hard to believe.

When we go to Camp Half-Blood, I went straight to the Big House. Inside, I saw Chiron talking to a blond girl in combat boots and a tall muscular guy dressed a lot like Nico. When the girl turned to see who had entered, Carter gasped.

"Sadie!"

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