PLEASE READ! Hola Amigos, ya I speak Spanish… Anyway, again it has been forever but I have been pretty busy cramming for exams. This is just a short little thing about my plans for the future before I start the chapter. I am not entirely sure what I will do after this story but my mom keeps bugging me to finish the rough draft of my novel, so I will finish this and start on my profile. I could use you guy's help with some new ideas for stories but to be honest I will probably only do a couple one-shots this summer, sorry! Anyway I have some answers for reviews.
Natoto( guest)
I really love what you wrote, but I think that Sadie and Walt are very far from break-up. And if there will be a break-up I think that Sadie would say it, not Walt.
And another thing... didn't Percy and Annabeth fall into Tartarus? I can't understand it - how did they survive? I think you should write about it, like a flashback or something.
I know it was a little awkward and uncalled for I just felt like NIco/Sadie was a good couple. As for the breakup thing it's a fair point and I appreciate it. It's actually really cool that I'm communicating with someone who doesn't speak English as a first ( besides my mom, dad, uncles, aunts etc.). As for the time placement this is set before heroes of Olympus after the last Olympian. Though there will be some parts that are kind of in the new series (hint, hint, *nudge, nudge*, push you off a cliff).
Viewer( guest)
you could have made it longer the ending was horrible
thanks for that but if next time you could explain what you didn't like and I could fix it or at least try to.
Onward to the story my loyal readers!
SADIE
Banished, that would mean never seeing Nico again. There had to be something we could do. I looked at him with hope in my eyes, he just shook his head back at me. There was no getting out of this. I knew it was next to pointless until I came up with an idea. I walked past Nico, only stopping to take one last glance at this insanely amazing place, except I was actually speaking so only Nico could here, "meet me at the dining pavilion after curfew." He shook his head yes in a small gesture, something that could have been taken as a courteous nod of acknowledgement.
After most people had gone to bed , I sat at the Hades table, praying that Nico would keep his word. As I waited I heard soft laughing and whispers. I saw Percy and Annabeth walking up from the canoe lake and into their cabin, the same cabin. I raised an eyebrow at this but didn't say anything, silently thanking gods the Hades table was bathed in shadows. Moments after they entered the cabin, Nico emerged from his own cabin still in his dark aviator jacket. We started our conversation with an awkward hello. After that we sat in silence, which was honestly a lot more comfortable. It was a couple minutes before he decided to speak, his face barely noticeable in the darkness. "I'm fairly certain this is the longest you've ever gone without speaking."
I put my hand to my chest in mock pain, "wow, Nico, that hurt, I feel wounded." I said before setting my hand back down. "besides don't go making snap judgments like that, you've known me for less than a week." After our playful banter stopped, I put my serious business face on. (What? Don't you have one?) "Nico, you do realize what this whole thing with the gods means, don't you?"
"Yeah, we won't be able to see each other anymore" his voice was strained as if he were trying his hardest not to seem upset.
"actually I was thinking maybe we could." He gave me a questioning look before it turned into a look of horror
"Sadie, you can't defy the gods unless you want to spontaneously combust."
"Technically we wouldn't be-"
"Technically! You want to explain that to the gods? How we weren't technically breaking any rules at all." He said as his voice started raising louder and louder.
"Oh I'm Sorry! It's all my fault for trying to think of a way that we could see each other again." My own voice raised up above his. That was when something unexpected happened. NIco swooped in and placed his lips against mine only before removing them a moment later. Then, he was gone. Walking away from me until I could no longer see him. But, I heard the words he whispered before he left.
"I'm Sorry."
Oooh! Sappy huh. Don't worry I've got an idea for one last chapter than this story will be over. Sorry I know it was pretty boring. And short. Oh and by the way I was reaiding the second beautiful creatures book and it was terrible so I can no longer keep 16thmoon as my penname. If you have any suggestions for new names go ahead and add them AFTER you review. Thanks for reading.