8 poems already! It's a pretty good one.
While You Sleep
I am watching
Watching you while you sleep
Is this how you want it to be?
You can't see me
You can't hear me
You look so peaceful
Curled up in your nest
Is this your night away from the Dark Forest?
I want to visit you every night
I run
I run away from bondage
With a new age
Comes a new flicker of hope
There's a rope
Dangling above me
It's invisible
Waiting to engulf my sight
Into the night
Please save me!
Who else will?
Still
You're the only one
For me
I watch you while you sleep
While you eat
Everything you do
I watch
While you sleep
I'm there
So don't give up
I run
I run away from bondage
With a new age
Comes a new flicker of hope
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