First of all, you should know that you Rulers are indomitably amazing and that I could not ask for better readers/friends.
Second, you should also know that this book started as a dream that turned into a oneshot that got a little too big to be a oneshot.
Third, you should know that I am not good at outlines. Most of the time, an entire point on my outline is just a line of dialogue. I'm weird.
I thought, for fun, I would show you guys how the plot of this story evolved. So, uh, yeah. Here we go.
CRAP I HAD A RING POP IN MY MOUTH BUT IT'S GETTING DOWN TO LIKE A STUB OF A CANDY AND IT JUST FELL OUT OF MY MOUTH .
Anyways. Here is the first outline. (Keep in mind that I had literally just woken up like two minutes before writing this first one, so it probably makes minimal sense and has a couple of mistakes.) Anything in bold is a note from Present-Hannah.
(ALSO WATTPAD AND FF . NET DONT ACCEPT BULLET POINTS OR CRAP LIKE THAT, SO EACH PARAGRAPH IS A NEW POINT (MOSTLY).)
Sky and Ty and everyone in Team Crafted are taken to this game show thingamajigger, Sky with the intent of figuring out the gamemaster's secrets.
The gamemaster somehow knows that Sky has powers (maybe the glowing eyes clued him in -.-) and forces Sky to give up his powers with a sacred ritual thingy.
The Team goes on through the game. The GameMaster puts them through various trials/games, and if you win you get points added to your score. No one really knows how to win the ENTIRE game, though.
Ty is put in danger, Sky rushes to save him.
"What? Do you have a crush on this boy?" GameMAster asks.
GameMaster puts them in a room together and basically just tortures one after the other until they both admit they have no feelings for each other. (Pfft, LIES!)
Ty is undressed by the GameMaster in one of the dress-up games, and thus is very angry at the GameMaster/ (as is Sky, obviously) (SHUT UP GUYs, I HAVE NO IDEA WHICH PART OF MY BRAIN THIS CAME FROM. DREAMS ARE WEIRD)
Ty starts another game in a new room. He has to flick a small, sticky ball up the wall, but it can only travel two feet at a time, meaning he must fling the ball onto the small boxes that are placed up and down the wall. The boxes, however, are all fed with intense electricity, and will shock the ball (but not the player) if touched. The ball has a health bar, for some stupid reason, and you have to get the ball to the top of the wall without killing it. (You can tell this was a dream thing. It makes no sense. XD)
Sky walks in.
Ty tries to turn off the electricity with a grey and white switch to the right of the boxes.
When he tries to flick the bouncy, sticky ball again, he gets shocked.
Sky goes, "Pfft, let me do it. You flip the switch, I'll try to flick the bouncy ball thing."
"Sky, I don't think that's a good idea... When I tried it, I got shocked. It hurt a lot."
"We'll be fine. Let's do this!"
Ty gets shocked, but for some reason, Sky doesn't.
Ty collapses on the floor.
Sky just stares, awestruck, at Ty's body.
Someone calls him, and he slowly raises his phone to his ear, unabled to make a sound as the GameMaster's voice comes through the phone.
Sky's friends burst into the room and look at Ty. "Sky, what the heck! Ty could be in serious danger, and you're talking on the phone!?"
Sky is still too stricken to move or speak at all.
The Team ignored him and helps Ty to the GameRoom's Hospital.
Sky trudges back to his room, which was originally going to have a secret room beneath it to help with his investigation of the GameMaster. The GameMaster's secrets don't matter to Sky anymore. All that matters is Ty.
The Team walks into Sky's room, looking depressed and defeated. "Sky? Ty... is dead."
"W-What?" Sky stands up. "WHAT?" His eyes wander to the bed in the back of his room. He darts over to it and throws the pillow aside, revealing a yellow lever. "Guys? You could be fatally injured if you stay in this room any longer."
The guys race out of the room, but peek in through the windows.
Sky pulls the lever and light encases the room. After swirling around in the air for a bit, all the light is sucked into Sky's eyes, and his eyes glow again. He is Skybrine again. His powers are his again.
"What?" a friend asks, standing in the door frame. "I-I thought the GameMAster made you give up your powers!"
"He did. But I'm not stupid enough to give them up for good." He pauses. "Now, where's Ty?"
"I-In the yard-"
"THE YARD!?" Sky roars. "HAVE THEY GIVEN UP ON HIM THAT QUICKLY? ARE THEY NOT EVEN WILLING TO GIVE HIM A SPOT IN THE GRAVEYARD!?" He pauses, takes a deep breath. "It's okay. Because in a few minutes, Ty will no longer need to be buried."
Sky runs off to revive Ty.
Ty is revived, Sky hugs him like he was dead only moments ago (oh, yeah, he was, actually), and they share a loving kiss which Ty is at first afraid of because of the GameMaster.
Sky goes all SkyBrine crazy on the GameMaster.
The End.
Well. That was weird. XD Here's the next outline I made.
Updated Outline:
Sky and Ty and everyone in Team Crafted is taken to this game show thingamajigger, Sky with the intent of figuring out the GameMaster's secrets.
The GameMaster somehow knows that Sky has powers (maybe the glowing eyes clued him in -.-) and forces Sky to give up his powers with a sacred ritual thingy.
The Team goes on through the game. The GameMaster puts them through various trials/games, and if you win you get points added to your score.
Ty is put in danger, Sky rushes to save him.
"What? Do you have a crush on this boy?" GameMaster asks.
The mini-mini-challenge takes place – Sky is bitten several times by squids
The mini-challenge takes place – half the Team is traumatized, Seto has his powers but the GM removes them again
a. Ty is hurt
Next Challenge takes place – Torture Sessions
a. GM puts Ty and Sky in a room together and basically just tortures one after the other until they both admit they have no feelings for each other. (Pfft, LIES!)
Ty starts ignoring Sky, even though Sky wants to go back to the way things were
Mini-challenge #2 – Sky is chosen to be forced to do it (AGAIN)
Next Challenge takes place – Hallucinations.
a. Sky thinks that Ty is actually Herobrine, so he attacks him, nearly kills him
b. The rest of the Team doesn't understand that Sky was being tricked by the GM, they all hate him. SHUN HIM, MUAHAHAHAHA
Next mini-challenge takes place – a few more squids, then the 'visitors'
a. Sky's visitor is Herobrine riding a squid
b. Herobrine does something to seriously hurt Sky
No one gives a crap that Sky is crying in his bedroom
(Kay, Ty sort of gives a crap, but the GameMaster forces him to act like he hates Sky, so he basically just beats Sky up like a good friend would :D)
HB is telepathically communicating with Sky
Next Challenge – which player is hated the most?
a. Are you freaking kidding me? Sky, obviously. :P
HB fills Sky's head with so much junk that he can't even think properly (or at all, really)
Ty pulls Sky down into the secret budder room and apologizes (sort of)
Mini-Challenge – Dropper! (jump off a bridge, yay!)
Sky 'dies'
GM saves him – why?
GM locks Sky in the LQ while Ty and the others continue the mini-challenge – no protection from death
Sky is terrified for the others, Ty and Jason are mourning Sky, guilt-tripping the rest of TC
Ty and the others come back and see Sky, Sky brings Ty into bedroom and they talk a little bit
Challenge 5
Sky is starting to act more like his father, being more violent, more threatening...
During Challenge Five, Sky lashes out at a friend, feels bad, runs outside Challenge Room.. GM forces Ty to do a thing because he spied on them after the fourth minichallenge and knows about Ty telling Sky everything
Ty is dying because of the dare thingy in challenge 5
Sky wants to help so badly, but cant
The Team ignores him and helps Ty to the game show's Hospital.
Sky trudges back to his room, which has a secret room beneath it to help with his investigation of the GameMaster. The GameMaster's secrets don't matter to Sky anymore. All that matters is Ty.
The Team walks into Sky's room, looking depressed and defeated. "Sky? Ty... is dead."
"W-What?" Sky stands up. "WHAT?" His eyes wander to the bed in the back of his room. He darts over to it and throws the pillow aside, revealing a yellow lever. "Guys? You could be fatally injured if you stay in this room any longer."
The guys race out of the room, but peek in through the windows. Sky pulls the lever and light encases the room. After swirling around in the air for a bit, all the light is sucked into Sky's eyes, and his eyes glow again. He is Skybrine again. His powers are his again.
"What?" a friend asks, standing in the door frame. "I-I thought the GameMaster made you give up your powers!"
"He did. But I'm not stupid enough to give them up for good." He pauses. "Now, where's Ty?"
"I-In the yard-"
"THE YARD!?" Sky roars. "HAVE THEY GIVEN UP ON HIM THAT QUICKLY? ARE THEY NOT EVEN WILLING TO GIVE HIM A SPOT IN THE GRAVEYARD!?" (Omg this is so stupid) He pauses, takes a deep breath. "It's okay. Because in a few minutes, Ty will no longer need to be buried."
Sky runs off to revive Ty.
Ty is revived, Sky hugs him like he was dead only moments ago (oh, yeah, he was, actually), and they share a loving kiss which Ty is at first afraid of because of the GameMaster.
Sky goes all SkyBrine crazy on the GameMaster.
The End.
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IDEAS THAT HAVEN'T BEEN INCLUDED IN OUTLINE YET:
The reason that GM hates Herobrine (and Skybrine): GM and HB used to be best buds (like Sky and Ty), but HB did something to GM that ruined their friendship... (Possibly the GM fell in love with HB and HB broke his heart?)
Squid-eating spider? Possibly?
Reason Ty ignored Sky and said he hated him after Mini-Challenge #2: GM played clips of Sky's 1st mini-challenge (which Ty had to watch) and then threatened to do worse to Sky if Ty didn't end all contact with him.
HB is telepathically communicating with Sky
Sky gathers some food and sets it down anonymously outside the door for the others to eat after the GM takes away several of their meals. Why? Because he's nice and not HB.
The GameMaster is actually Sky's dad... it could work? Possibly?
Tyler is teleported into the Games, memory wiped, Jason is weeping, then Tyler DIES? Subplot maybe? Could I fit that in?
The GM started the game show to get powers so it would be acceptable to date Herobrine.
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Squid-eating spider? Really, Hannah? XD Here's the next one.
Super updated outline:
Sky and Ty and everyone in Team Crafted is taken to this game show thingamajigger, Sky with the intent of figuring out the GameMaster's secrets.
The GameMaster somehow knows that Sky has powers (maybe the glowing eyes clued him in -.-) and forces Sky to give up his powers with a sacred ritual thingy.
The Team goes on through the game. The GameMaster puts them through various trials/games, and if you win you get points added to your score.
Ty is put in danger, Sky rushes to save him.
"What? Do you have a crush on this boy?" GameMaster asks.
The mini-mini-challenge takes place – Sky is bitten several times by squids
The mini-challenge takes place – half the Team is traumatized, Seto has his powers but the GM removes them again
a. Ty is hurt
Next Challenge takes place – Torture Sessions
a. GM puts Ty and Sky in a room together and basically just tortures one after the other until they both admit they have no feelings for each other. (Pfft, LIES!)
Ty starts ignoring Sky, even though Sky wants to go back to the way things were
Mini-challenge #2 – Sky is chosen to be forced to do it (AGAIN)
Next Challenge takes place – Hallucinations.
a. Sky thinks that Ty is actually Herobrine, so he attacks him, nearly kills him
b. The rest of the Team doesn't understand that Sky was being tricked by the GM, they all hate him. SHUN HIM, MUAHAHAHAHA
Next mini-challenge takes place – a few more squids, then the 'visitors'
a. Sky's visitor is Herobrine riding a squid
b. Herobrine does something to seriously hurt Sky
No one gives a crap that Sky is crying in his bedroom
(Kay, Ty sort of gives a crap, but the GameMaster forces him to act like he hates Sky, so he basically just beats Sky up like a good friend would :D)
HB is telepathically communicating with Sky
Next Challenge – which player is hated the most?
a. Are you freaking kidding me? Sky, obviously. :P
HB fills Sky's head with so much junk that he can't even think properly (or at all, really)
Ty pulls Sky down into the secret budder room and apologizes (sort of)
Mini-Challenge – Dropper! (jump off a bridge, yay!)
Sky 'dies'
GM saves him – why?
GM locks Sky in the LQ while Ty and the others continue the mini-challenge – no protection from death
Sky is terrified for the others, Ty and Jason are mourning Sky, guilt-tripping the rest of TC
Ty and the others come back and see Sky, Sky brings Ty into bedroom and they talk a little bit
Challenge 5
Sky is starting to act more like his father, being more violent, more threatening...
During Challenge 5, Sky dares Fluffy to kill Mitch – whoops
Sky uses HB's powers on GM to prevent Mitch-killing
GM rages, paralyzes Sky, dares Ty to kill himself
Ty dies.
Sky wants to help so badly, but cant
Sky sprints back to his room, which has a secret room beneath it.
The Team walks into Sky's room, looking depressed and defeated. Sky's eyes wander to the bed in the back of his room. He darts over to it and throws the pillow aside, revealing a yellow lever. "Guys? You could be fatally injured if you stay in this room any longer."
The guys race out of the room, but peek in through the windows. Sky pulls the lever and light encases the room. After swirling around in the air for a bit, all the light is sucked into Sky's eyes, and his eyes glow again. He is Skybrine again. His powers are his again.
"What?" a friend asks, standing in the door frame. "I-I thought the GameMaster made you give up your powers!"
"He did. But I'm not stupid enough to give them up for good."
Sky runs off to revive Ty.
Sky uses the ARCH to revive Ty (and everyone else who died in the games) :D and they share a loving kiss which Ty is at first afraid of because of the GameMaster.
Sky goes all SkyBrine crazy on the GameMaster; GM reveals that he's actually Sky's other father (it's complicated), summons HB
TC VERSES GM + HB BOSS BATTLE
Sky and friends win.
When GM dies, the boundaries of the game shows start burning as if they were paper; the Team is in the middle of no where.
Luckily, Seto can tp them all back home.
YAY HAPPY ENDING WOOOO :D
The End.
Oh gosh. XD The evolution of Games. I had another outline, a MUCH more updated one, but I think I accidentally deleted it. Whoops.
ANYWAYS, YEAH
THAT'S THE END OF THIS PART OF THE BONUS CONTENT. I THOUGHT YOU GUYS WOULD GET A BIT OF A KICK OUT OF IT. XD
