This was uploaded, then something else came through, so I took it off for editing, and now it's back up. Sorry if this means you were double notified :L
Hi, sorry if you thought this was another chapter or something, because it's not. I've been getting a lot of anonymous reviews recently from a nice person called Someone, and I want to reply to them, and this is my only means of communicating with said reviewer.
So, if you're not them, there's not an awful lot of point in you reading this, so.. Sorry again if you were alerted about a new chapter, enjoy the rest of your day/night/week :)
However, I suppose since you're here, you might want to read the sort of sequel I've got going on, perhaps? ;)
*apologizes again for shamelessly plugging her own stuff*
Anyhoo, anonymous reviewer who goes by the name of Someone, this is for you :)
Well, I guess hello would be a good place to start :)
Thank you very much for your reviews over the past couple of days, they've really meant a lot and I'm glad you liked the story :3
I'm only going to concentrate on replying to the last two reviews though, if that's alright, but thanks for all of the others too ^.^
Anyhoo, here we go!
Chapter 40
First off, don't worry, it'll take a lot more than that to annoy me :P
Secondly, I do understand where you're coming from, but, I think Clive was like that because she had a boyfriend. That and the fact that, since I based his character a little bit on some friends of mine, that boys, quite often, are pretty blind to a girl's interest.
And the Flora thing, well, I'm sure she would have left Mark, if she thought she could. But, as I assume you know now, it was an abusive relationship, so she was probably afraid to even try.
And lastly, I think Flora may have had a slight right to be jealous about the girls at the pub thing. I mean, call me clingy or whatever, but I used to get a little bit jealous when my best friend (of the male variety) talked to other girls too, even though I had no intentions of asking him out or anything. I think it was a combination of her not wanting to lose a friend to, well, them, and also the fact that she did have feelings for him, whether she did or didn't show them.
That doesn't really excuse her having a go at him over it though, I suppose :L
Sorry if I sound kind of condescending or mean or anything, I really don't mean to, I was just trying to explain, because you raised a valid point :)
Chapter 46
THANKYOU! AGAIN!
And I know exactly what you mean, sometimes too many happy endings can get a bit.. Clichéd?
Then again, sometimes a bit of fluff can be quite a nice way to round off a story ^.^
I do the movie thing too sometimes, but for some reason I usually notice editing flaws as opposed to anything with the content x)
Chapter 50
Thank you, Someone :D and you know what, I think Luke might have been my favourite too. Not to shoutout my own stuff again, but the sequelly thing for this is mostly about Luke and Arianna, except he's less sarcastic and a little more... *waves hands to try and form word* uh, I guess he's kind of sensitive, or at least more so than he is in here :L
And finally, this goes to you, and all the other reviewers out there (including the few I haven't got round to replying to yet, sorry!):
1. Thank you all very very very very very very very very very very very very very infinite very much! As clichéd as it might sound, they really do mean a lot, and are often the things that keep me writing! :D
2. YOU are an amazing person. All of you are, you're amazing people :)
3. I'm 14 and almost a half, and I still play Pokémon, heck, even Viva Pinata from time to time. Not to mention all the LEGO games that I own. You should never ever feel lame because you're slightly older than the target audience, and it's great that you're not afraid to be yourself :D
You're all lovely. Every single one of you.
Right, well, I believe I have done what I came here to do. Thanks again for the reviews, you wonderful lot :)
~nellen who is very grateful, and wishes you all pleasant tomorrows :3 xxxx